六级写作技巧提高 替换增分文档格式.docx
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所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly.
Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.
popularwiththeadvancementofsth.
12.littleifanything,或littleornothing替换hardly
13.beneficial,rewarding替换helpful,
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替换customer
15.exceedingly,extremely,intensely替换very
16.hardlynecessary,hardlyinevitable...替换unnecessary,avoidable
17.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb替换sbtakeinterestin/sb.beinterestedin
18.captureone'
sattention替换attractone'
sattention.
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.beindicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear
21.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger替换cause.
22.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth替换..reasonsforsth
23.desire替换want.来源:
24.pourattentioninto替换payattentionto
25.bearinmindthat替换remember
26.enjoy,possess替换have(注意process是过程的意思)
27.interaction替换communication
28.frownonsth替换beagainst,disagreewithsth
29.tonameonlyafew,asanexample替换forexample,forinstance
30.nextto/virtuallyimpossible,替换nearly/almostimpossible
相信大家都有这样的感受,明明是背了很多的单词,可写作文时,总是用一些高中或小学的词汇(又称垃圾词汇)。
为了更好的克服这样的情况,我总结了一些常用的替代语,希望对大家有所帮助:
来源:
考试大的美女编辑们
垃圾词汇1:
help
典型例句:
I’llhelpyou.
替代语:
accommodate
E.g:
I’llendeavortoaccommodateyou.
垃圾词汇2:
helpful
Sthishelpful(tosb)
conducive
Sthisconducivetosb
鉴于有些作文多关于道德和品格塑造,再给出两个有用的短语:
time-honored 时代赋予的
docredittoourforbears 继承先辈的优秀传统
垃圾词汇3:
show
asitshowsinthepicture
betray
垃圾词汇4:
think
Ithink--------
deem
垃圾词汇5:
ugly
xxxisugly
hideous
垃圾词汇6:
bytheway
bytheway,....
incidentally,....
垃圾词汇7:
because
xxxbecausexxx
inthat/inasmuchas
垃圾词汇8:
consider
Wemustconsiderxxx
allowfor
E.g.:
Wemustallowforxxx
垃圾词汇9:
much
Therehasbeenamuchincreaseintheworldpopulation
Therehasbeenadrasticincreaseinthe-----
垃圾词汇10:
about
Itisabout250timesofthat
Itisapproximately---
垃圾词汇11:
buy
高分作文标志
1:
四级120-150字;
六级150—180字;
2、是否长短句交叉;
3、用词是否恰当,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:
1.适当用被动代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:
Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Thus,itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.
2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
比如说:
Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…
3.一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代替太宽泛的。
(考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,
people,opinion等等)比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper,approaches代替ways,implement代替carryout,sharpenone’scompetitiveedge代替enhanceone’scompetitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
下面举一篇我南京六级班上一位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。
这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。
ComputerandIBySimmy
Ineverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatiindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.
exceedingly替换very
thrilling替换exciting
sth.exertatremendousfascinationonsb替换sb.beinterestedinsth.
google替换search
anarmyof替换alotof
Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure!
本文来源:
考试大网
Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;
Increasingpopularity替换moreandmorepopular
Coincidentwith…非常地道的词汇,表达“与…一致”的意思,替换With…
Advancement替换development
Pourinto(floodinto/swarminto)替换enterinto
Current(currently)替换now
Appealtosb.替换sb.beinterestedinsth.
Growingindividuals替换moreandmorepeople
Itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型,说某事是毫不夸张的
Forastart,wecan,freely,searchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting,playinggames,ordeliveringemail.
Forastart替换Tobeginwith
Wecan,freely,search用了插入语的写作手法
ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally替换Inaddition/Besides
Deliver替换send
Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,inaway,especiallythegrowingviolence,***,pornpictures,AV-filmsemergingonthescreen,whichleadsquietafewnetcitizenstocopying.
Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,这个句子有三个精彩之处,首先Thereisnodenyingthat这个句型,还有however作为插入语,functioninthedisserviceof替换doharmto
Emerging代替appearing(fading代替disappearing)
Netcitizen网民,属于精彩用词
Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.Computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople'
lives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.
Nogardenhasnoweeds替换Everycoinhastwosides
Computersdoplay,do强调
Positive替换important/good等
Asliceof替换apartof
Unfavorable替换bad
Impacts替换effects/influences
Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageof…使用插入语
Fruits(而且fruits用的非常形象,merits/virtues)替换advantage(defects替换disadvantage)
Facet替换aspect
各位同学,上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点,作文怎么会不得高分呢!
以下是30个最经典的替换词,各位同学可以参考一下。
1.individuals,characters,folks代替(people,persons)
2:
positive,favorable,rosy(美好的),promising
(有希望的),perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding代替good
3:
dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse(有害的)代替bad
如果bad做表语,可以有belessimpressive代替
eg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.
4.(anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,many,ifnotmost)代替many.
用many,ifnotmost一定要小心,many后一定要有词。
Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同理用most,ifnotall,代替most.
5:
asliceof,quietafew,several代替some
6:
harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,
7:
affair,business,matter代替thing
8:
shared代common
9.reaphugefruits代替getmuchbenefit)
10:
formypart,frommyownperspective代替inmyopinion
11:
Increasing(ly),growing代替moreandmore(注意没有growingly这种形式。
Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.
12.littleifanything,或littleornothing代替hardly
13..benefitialrewarding代替helpfulbebeneficialof
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,代替customer
15.exceedingly,extremely代替very
16.hardlyunnecessary,hardlyinevitable...代替necessary,inevitable
17.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb代替sbtakeinterestin
sattention代替attractone'
20.beindicativeof,besuggesteiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear来源:
考试大-英语六级考试
21.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger代替cause.
22.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth代替..reasonsforsth
23.desire代替want.
24.pourattentioninto代替payattentionto
25.bearinmindthat代替remember
26.enjoy,possess代替have(注意process是过程的意思)
27.interaction代替communication
28.frownonsth代替beagainst,disagreewithsth
29.tonameonlyafew,asanexample代替forexample
30.nextto/virtuallyimpossible,代替nearlyimpossible
用于文章主题句
1.不用说?
…
Itgoeswithoutsayingthat子句
=(Itis)needlesstosay(that)子句
=Itisobviousthat子句
=Obviously,S.+V.
例︰不用说早睡早起是值得的。
Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitpaystokeepearlyhours.
2.…是不可能的;
无法…
ThereisnoVing
=ThereisnowayofVing.
=ThereisnopossibilityofVing.
=ItisimpossibletoV.
=ItisoutofthequestiontoV.
=NoonecanV.
=WecannotV.
例︰不可否认的?
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