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语法错误惨不忍睹
Topic-Ifchildrenbehavebadly,shouldtheirparentsacceptresponsibilityandalsobepunished(雅思真题)
Aboutthisproblem,mythinkisifchildrenbehavebadly,thenparentsarenotright.Becauseteachchildisparent’sresponsibility.Sowealsopunishparentstoobesideschildrenisalsoshould.
过分简单没有重点
Topic-Theimportanceofenvironmentalprotection
Thisissueissurelyveryimportant,let’stalkaboutit!
用词不当表达不准
Ithinkcollegestudentsshouldnotbeallowedtogetmarriedbecausetheyareveryyoungandsowecan’ttaketheresponsibilitytoformafamily.
意思重复原地踏步
Topic-YouropiniononDINKfamilies
MyopiniononDINKfamiliesisthatDINKfamiliesisnotagoodthing.Anditisabadthing.Itbringsnobenefitstooursocietyanditisevensometimesharmfultooursociety.
中国俗语胡乱翻译
Topic1-Isitgoodtohavealargefamily
Ithinkitisgoodtohavealargefamily.BecauseweChinesebelieveasentence:
“Manysons,manylucks”……
正确说法Happinessliesinhavingmanychildren
Topic2-Shouldwepretendtoknoweverythingoradmitourignorance
Weallknow,ourChineseoldfathersandgrandfatherssaid:
“Knowisknow,don’tknowisdon’tknow”……
Topic3-Doyouthinkone’scharacterisgreatlyinfluencedbyhis/herfamily
Chineseoldwordssaysverygood:
Dragonborndragon,phoenixbornphoenix,rat’ssoncanmakehole……
Ibelieveonesentence:
“Agoodpersonisalllifesafe”.WeChinesepeoplealwayssay:
“Goodhasgoodpay,badhasbadpay”.
观点武断态度强硬
Topic1-Theimportanceofconfidence
Inmyopinion,confidenceisthemostimportantthingforaperson.Allthesuccessfulpeopleintheworldarefullofconfidence.Whilethosepeoplewhodon’thaveconfidence,theyallhavefailed.
Topic2-Thesolutiontothetrafficproblem
Ithinktosolvethetrafficproblem,veryeasy!
Forthosewhodon’tobeythetrafficrules,weshouldputallofthemintoprison.Ifwedothat,I’msuretherewillbenotrafficproblemanymore.
雅思写作需注意的1个核心准则
Elementaryprinciplesofcomposition
Maketheparagraphtheunitofcomposition:
oneparagraphtoeachtopic
不同的段落构成文章,每个段落仅传递一个观点
Asarule,begineachparagraphwithatopicsentence;
enditinconformitywiththebeginning
规则每个段落均以主题句开头,并且首尾呼应。
A.thetopicsentencecomesatornearthebeginning;
主题句前置
B.thesucceedingsentencesexplainorestablishordevelopthestatementmadeinthetopicsentence;
段落围绕主题句展开,后面的句子对主题句进行展开解释
C.thefinalsentenceeitheremphasizesthethoughtofthetopicsentenceorstatessomeimportantconsequence.
末尾句或者对主题句进行强调,或者阐述主题句带来的结果。
Usetheactivevoice
主动句永远比被动句直接有力
Eg:
Therewereagreatnumberofdeadleaveslyingontheground
=Deadleavescoveredtheground.(清晰生动)
Thereasonthatheleftcollegewasthathishealthbecameimpaired.
=Failinghealthcompelledhimtoleavecollege.(简洁有力)
Itwasnotlongbeforehewasverysorrythathehadsaidwhathehad.
=Hesoonrepentedhiswords.(简洁有力)
Putstatementsinpositiveform
以肯定的形式表达否定的意思,避免使用平淡、毫无色彩,犹豫不决和含糊其辞的语言。
EgHewasnotveryoftenontime.
=Heusuallycamelate.
HedidnotthinkthatstudyingLatinwasmuchuse.
=HethoughtthestudyofLatinuseless.
ThetamingoftheShrewisratherweakinspots.ShakespearedoesnotportrayKatharineasaveryadmirablecharacter,nordoesBiancaremainlonginmemoryasanimportantcharacterinShakespeare’sworks.
=ThewomeninTheTamingoftheShrewareunattractive.Katharineisdisagreeable,Biancainsignificant.
Omitneedlesswords
删除冗词
Vigorouswritingisconcise.Asentenceshouldcontainnounnecessarywords,aparagraphnounnecessarysentences,forthesamereasonthatadrawingshouldhavenounnecessarylinesandamachinenounnecessaryparts.Thisrequiresnotthatthewritermakeallhissentencesshort,orthatheavoidalldetailandtreathissubjectsonlyinoutline,butthateverywordtell.
有力的写作一定简洁。
Owingtothefactthat
=Since(because)
Inspiteofthefactthat
=Though(although)
Callyourattentiontothefactthat
=Remindyou(notifyyou)
Thefactthathehadnotsucceeded
=Hisfailure
Avoidasuccessionofloosesentences
别写流水账,找找语言的逻辑关系,通过who,which,when,where,andwhile这些词把句子串起来。
Expressco-ordinateideasinsimilarform
Parallelstructure平行结构讲究对称美内容对等,结构一致。
Formerly,sciencewastaughtbythetextbookmethod,whilenowthelaboratorymethodisemployed.
Parallelstructure:
Formerly,sciencewastaughtbythetextbookmethod;
nowitistaughtbythelaboratorymethod.
Keeprelatedwordstogether
词的位置决定词的关系,所以遵循‘物以类聚’,意思关联紧密的词放在一块。
A:
主谓之间不分割,补充信息需前置
Wordsworth,inthefifthbookofTheExcursion,givesaminutedescriptionofthischurch.
InthefifthbookoftheExcursion,Wordsworthgivesaminutedescriptionofthischurch.(状语前置,主谓毗邻)
B关系代词紧随先行词出现
Therewasalookinhiseyethatbodedmischief.
Inhiseyewasalookthatbodedmischief.(名词look先行,关系词that紧随)
Insummaries,keeptoonetense
总结通常使用现在时态,如果使用过去时,请保持时态一致。
1.Placetheemphaticwordsofasentenceattheend
欲擒故纵的圆周句(periodicsentence)中,强调信息后置。
Fourcenturiesago,ChristopherColumbus,oneoftheItalianmarinerswhomthedeclineoftheirownrepublicshadputattheserviceoftheworldandofadventure,seekingforSpainawestwardpassagetotheIndiesassetoffagainsttheachievementsofPortuguesediscoverers,lightedonAmerica.
WiththesehopesandinthisbeliefIwouldurgeyou,layingasideallhindrance,thrustingawayallprivateaims,todevoteyourselvesunswervinglyandunflinchinglytothevigorousandsuccessfulprosecutionofthiswar.
雅思作文常用来表达看法与立场的英式短语&
句型
FunctionalExpressions:
ExpressingThoughtsandopinions
havemixedviewson
(人们)各持不同的看法
实战例句
IthasbeenaroundfifteenyearssincetheInternetwasfirstintroducedintoBritishhouseholdsbutpeoplestillhavemixedviewsonwhetheritisapositiveornegativeinfluenceonsociety.
从因特网第一次走进英国家庭到现在已经有将近十五年了,但人们至今关于网络对社会产生的影响究竟是积极的还是消极的仍然意见不一。
常见的反义短语或句型
reachconsensuson...
(人们)对某事达成一致意见
例句
Iwillbedifficultforpeopletoreachaconsensusonthisissue.
要让人们对这一事件达成统一的意见是十分困难的。
Itaketheviewthat..
我所持的看法是……
Itaketheviewthatfreeeducationshouldbeavailabletofinanciallyneedypeople.
我所持的看法是应该时那些财务紧张的人们提供免费的教育。
beoftheopinionthat...
(某人的)个人意见是(注意不能遗漏句型中的介词of)
Theyareoftheopinionthatmoralitycannotbelegislated.他们的意见是道德是不能由法律来规定的。
beahighlychargedissue
是一个引起激辩的话题
EuthanasiaisahighlychargedissueinmanyEuropeancountries.
安乐死在许多欧洲国家都是一个备受争议的话题。
常见的近义短语或句型
ignitefiercedebate
引发了激烈的争论
Thesong'
slyricsignitedfiercedebatelastyear.
这首歌的歌词在去年引发了激烈的争论。
beawell-establishedfact
(某事)是为人们所共知的事实
Itisawell-establishedfactthatveryyoungchildrenlearnbestbyrote.
人们普遮公认低龄儿童更适合通过机械记忆来学习。
Thetideofopinionisnowrunningsteadilyagainst...
目前的观点普遍倾向于反对……
Thetideofopinionisnowrunningsteadilyagainstthenewtrafficlaw.
目前人们的观点普遍倾向于反对新颁布的交通法。
常见近义短语或句型
Themajorityofpeopleoppose…
多数人反对……
Themajorityofpeopleopposetheproposedtaxreform.
对于提交上去的税制改革方案,多数人持反对意见。
Itstandstoreasonthat...
(某现象)是符合常理的
Itstandstoreasonthatachildwhoisconstantlycriticisedwillgrowuptohavenoself-confidence.
一个在不断被挑剔的环境中长大的孩子,在成年后会变得毫无自信,这是符合常理的逻辑。
Theconcernsthat...arewell-justified.
对于某事的担心是完全合理的
Theconcernsthatthenewlawwillcurtail(削减)NGO(非政府组织)activitiesarewell-justified.
人们关于新法规可能会减少非政府组织活动的担心是完全合理的。
Itisaninescapablefactthat...
是一个无法回避的事实
Itisaninescapablefactthatsomestudentsbehavebadlyanddamagethelearningenvironment.
有一些学生行为恶劣并且破坏学习气氛的问题是一个无法回避的事实。
beunavoidable
是不可避免的
Manypeoplefearedthatwarwasunavoidable.
许多人害怕战争最终还是会无可避免地来临。
...benoticeabie
(某种现象)十分显著
ThedifferencesbetweentheBritishandAmericanacademicsystemsarenoticeable.
英国和美国的学术体制差别十分显著。
...besubstantialdifferences
某种差异是本质性的
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