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考研英语作文万能模板范文万能句子汇总之考研英语写作小作文批改范文感谢信等10个话题含中文对照文档格式.docx
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DearElle,
IamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyougavemehelpattheschoolpartylastSunday.Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinyoulendmeyourbeautifuldress,IfearthatIwouldhavebeenappearinginonceayearcampusdancingparty.
Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhogenerouslyoffereddresstome.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!
Pleaseacceptmygratitude.
Yourssincerely,LiMing
修改意见
Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyougavemehelp(for后面不能加句子,可改为yourhelp)attheschoolpartylastSunday.Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinyoulend(改为lending)meyourbeautifuldress,IfearthatIwould(加not)havebeenappearing(appeared)in(改为at)onceayear(可以用个定语从句来修饰,此处删掉)campusdancingparty(加,whichisheldonlyonceeveryyear).
Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhogenerouslyoffered(加the)dresstome.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!
2分
章的意思完全相反,因此,定要好好研究虚拟语气的用法。
另外,for后面是不能加句子的。
第二
DearBob,
IamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyoutohelpmetoimprovemyEnglishduringthesedays.IfithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinteachingmevariousknowledgeincludingthecultureofEnglish,ThenhelpmetopracticeEnglishfacetoface,IfearthatIwouldhavebeenseektothewayoflearningEnglishforalongtimewithoutyourhelp.
Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhoarewarmlyandlikelytohelpotherswithoutthepay.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!
IamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyoutohelpmetoimprovemyEnglishduringthesedays.IfithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinteachingmevariousknowledgeincludingthecultureofEnglish,Then(删除)help(改为helping)metopracticeEnglishfacetoface,IfearthatIwouldhavebeenseek(改为seeking)tothewayoflearningEnglishforalongtimewithoutyourhelp.(删除)
Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhoarewarmlyandlikely(likely是很可能的意思)tohelpotherswithoutthepay(itwas…who..是强调句,此句可以改为,itwasyouwhoaresowarmlytohelpothersforfree).Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!
4分
微点评写完书信要有yourssincerely和你的名字。
英语的句号是.此外,建议你看关于强调句和虚拟语气的知识。
第三
IamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforthehelpyougivemeaboutlearningEnglish.Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinavarietyofactivitiesincludingholdingfunnydiscussionswithme,teachingmesingingEnglishsongs,playingsimpleEnglishgames,andsoon,IfearthatIwouldhavebeensearchingawronganddifficultwaytolearnEnglishandfeelingunhappytolearnit.
EveryoneagreesthatitwasyouwhogivememanyopportunitiestospeakEnglishloudly,beacuseyouknowthatIamsoshytotalkwithothersbyEnglish.YourhelpraisemylevelofproficiencyinEnglish,andnowIenjoygreatestinterstinEnglishbothlisteningandwriting.
Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!
Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforthehelpyougive(改为gave)meaboutlearningEnglish.Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistancein(in后面要加doingsth.)avarietyofactivitiesincluding(删除)holdingfunnydiscussionswithme,teachingmesingingEnglishsongs,(加and)playingsimpleEnglishgames,andsoon(删除),IfearthatIwouldhavebeensearching(改为going)awronganddifficultwaytolearnEnglishandfeelingunhappytolearnit(删除).
Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhogive(改为gave)memanyopportunitiestospeakEnglishloudly,(改为.because首字母大写)beacuse(拼写错误,改为because)youknowthatIamsoshytotalkwithothersby(改为in)English.Yourhelpraisemylevelofproficiency(中式英语)inEnglish,andnowIenjoy(have)greatest(改为great)interst(拼写错误interest)inEnglishbothlisteningandwriting.
3分
章,可有效杜绝中式英语。
第四
Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourwarmhelpintheprocessofmyseekingjobconformedtomypastdecadestraining,afterigraduatedfrompekinguniversity.
IfithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinrecommendationtotheprestigiouscompanyinChina.ifearthatiwouldhavebeenonthejobroadbackandforth.ireallyappreciatethispreciousopportunity,whichyouoffered.everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhowrotealettertotheesteemedcompanyboss,regardingasmyqualifications,educationback–ground,andmyspecialskillsatcomputerprogramwhichihaveahugeintrestin.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!
pleaseacceptmygratitude.
Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourwarmhelpintheprocessofmy(删除my)seekingjobconformedtomypastdecadestraining,afteri(大写)graduatedfrompekinguniversity(两个单词的首字母大写).
Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinrecommendation(改为recommending)totheprestigiouscompanyinChina.i(大写)fearthatiwouldhavebeenonthejobroad(中式英语)backandforth.ireallyappreciatethispreciousoppotunity(拼写错误opportunity)whichyouoffered.everyone(首字母大写)agreesthatitwasyouwhowrotealettertotheesteemedcompany(删除)boss,regardingas(删除)myqualifications,educationback–ground,andmyspecialskillsatcomputerprogramwhichihaveahugeintrestin(删除).Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!
please(首字母大写)acceptmygratitude.
Mysincerely,LiMing
。
第五
Dearteacher,
IamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourhelptoimprovemyEnglish.IfithadnotbeenforyourassistanceintherespectofEnglishwriting,IfearthatIwouldhavebeensooutstandingachievement.
Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhoarekindnessandduty.Itseemsthatyoudon’tfeeltiredforever.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!
IamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourhelptoimprovemyEnglish.IfithadnotbeenforyourassistanceintherespectofEnglishwriting(in后面应该加动名词,此外,respect是尊敬的意思,用词不当),IfearthatIwouldhavebeensooutstandingachievement.(这句话是虚拟语气,意思是如果不是你的帮助,我恐怕将会…)
Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhoarekindnessandduty(itwas…who…是个强调句,这句话的意思是每个人都说是你…例如帮助我)Itseemsthatyoudon’tfeeltiredforever.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!
,背些模版。
5-7分
DearPro.Smith,
Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourassistance.IfithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinsendingtimelythelistofreferencebookswhichIaskedfor,IfearthatIwouldhavenotbeenachievedmyessayonthedeadline.
Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhosavemunchvaluabletimeformetosearchthereferencebooksinthelibraryandthesereferencebookswhichareratherprofessionalconformtotherequirementsofmyessay.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!
Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourassistance.Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinsendingtimely(删掉)thelistofreferencebooks(加tometimely)whichIaskedfor,IfearthatIwouldhavenotbeenachievedmyessayon(改为by)thedeadline.
Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhosave(改为saved)munch(拼写错误,改为much)valuabletimeformetosearchthereferencebooksinthelibraryandthesereferencebookswhichareratherprofessionalconformtotherequirementsofmyessay.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!
6分
时要再细心些,尽量避免单词拼写的错误。
时态要保持前后致。
Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourwarmreceptioninthistravelabroad.Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinthistravelingthatyouareasaguideforme,IfearthatIwouldhavebeenlostsothatIcannotfindthewaycomingback.
Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhopatientlyguidemetoeverytouristattractionsandexplainsomeofpeculiarstoriesaboutsceneries.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!
Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourwarmreceptioninthistravel(改为inthejourney)abroad.Ifithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinthistraveling(改为onthetrip)thatyouareasaguideforme,IfearthatIwouldhavebeenlostsothatIcannot(改为couldn’t)findthewaycomingback.
Everyoneagreesthatitwasyouwhopatientlyguide(改为guided)metoeverytouristattractionsandexplainsomeofpeculiarstoriesaboutsceneries.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!
写得还不错,但应保持时态的前后致以及固定搭配。
DearTeacher,
Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourongoingpatienceandselflesscare.IfithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinourEnglishstudy,IfearthatIwouldhavebeenfailedmyCET4andCET6.
EvenoneagreesthatitwasyouwhohasalwaysbeendevotingmostofyourfreetimetodaytodayEnglishteachingandinstructionintest-takingskills.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmywarmthankstoyou!
Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitudeforyourongoingpatienceandselflesscare.IfithadnotbeenforyourassistanceinourEnglishstudy,IfearthatIwouldhavebeenfailed(改为failing)(加topass)myCET4andCET6.
Evenoneagreesthatitwasyouwhohas(改为had)alwaysbeendevotingmostofyourfreetimetodaytodayEnglishteachingandinstruction(改为instruc
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