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●结构和词汇掌握范围适度。

●组织和安排总的来说令人满意。

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评分五个方面：

1content

2language

3structure&

vocabulary

4organisation

展开论述上面的5个方面

1内容的完整性

2语言

6C原则

1．准确（correctness）

包括四层意义，即阅读人能理解、接受的英语水平；

使用精确措词，传达准确信息；

正确地使用语法和标点符号；

拼写正确。

（1）恰当的语言风格

请比较下面两组例词：

Formal

Informal

approximately

inquire

ascertain

obtain

assist

participate

construct

purchase

contribute

sufficient

difficult

utilize

About

Ask

findout

receive

help

share

build

buy

give

enough

hard

use

（2）准确的措词和信息

下面列出的是一系列极易混淆的单词及词组，请注意区分：

alot/allot

allright/alright

cannot/cannot

differentfrom/differentthan

.dueto/becauseof

effect/affect

fewer/less

lie/lay

principal/principle

that/which

their/them/they'

re

waitfor/waiton

who/whom

（3）正确的语法和标点符号

（4）正确的拼写

2．清楚（Clarity）

（1）逻辑布局（LogicalOrganization）

常用的逻辑布局方法包括：

①因果关系（Cause&

Effect）

②时间顺序（ChronologicalDevelopment）

③序列顺序（SequentialDevelopment）

④比较（Comparison）

⑤一般到特殊（FromGeneraltoSpecific）

⑥特殊到一般（FromSpecifictoGeneral）

（2）合理构架句群与段落（Well-WrittenSentences&

Paragraphs）

例句：

修改前:

MarshallCorporationwasfoundedfortyyearsago,anditnowhasbranchofficesinfourstates,anditemploysnearly400individuals.

修改后:

MarshallCorporationwasfoundedfortyyearsago.Withbranchofficesinfourstates,itnowemploysnearly400individuals.

（3）统一性与一致性（UnityandCoherence）

（4）强调（Emphasis）

①位置

②重复

③数量

④技巧

（5）将句中关系紧密的词尽量靠近。

比较下面三对句子：

A.TheyboughtabicycleinBeijinginasmallshopwhichcosts$25.00.

Theyboughtabicyclefor$25.00inasmallshopinBeijing.

B.Hewaswarnednottodrinkwatereveninarestaurantwhichhadnotbeenboiled.

Hewaswarnednottodrinkwaterwhichhadnotbeenboiled.

C.Thosewhoworkrapidlygetillintheseconditions.

Thosewhoworkintheseconditionsrapidlygetill.

（6）避免在同一个句子中使用意义不同的同一个字。

Weshalltakeafirmlinewiththefirm．

Weshalltakeastronglinewiththefilm．

3．简洁（Conciseness）

A.Wehavebeguntoexportourmachinetocountriesabroad.

Wehavebeguntoexportourmachines.

B.IntheeventthatyouspeaktoMr.Woodinregardtoproduction,askhimtogiveconsiderationtothedeliveryschedule.

IfyouspeaktoMr.Woodaboutproduction,askhimtoconsiderthedeliveryschedule.

C.Werequirefurniturewhichisofthenewtype.

Werequirenew-typefurniture.

（1）使用简洁的语言（Usesimplelanguage）

尽量使用避免使用

pleasewillyoubegoodenoughto

preferexpressapreferencefor

becauseforthereasonthat

（2）少用陈词滥调（Omittriteexpressions）

asthecasemaybe

ithascometomyattention

atanearlyage

availyourselfofthisopportunity

previousto

crackofdawn

pursuanttoyourrequest

takethelibertyto

duetothefactthat

thankingyouinadvance

enclosedherein

thisistoinformyou

underseparatecover

withkindestregards

Iwishtostate

（3）避免冗长的表达方式和不必要的重复（avoidwordyexpressions&

unnecessaryrepetition）。

Wordy

Concise

1.Wewouldliketoplease

2.ForthemonthofAugustforAugust

3.Pursuanttotheendofthisweeknow

4.Alongperiodoftimealongtime

5.Atthistimenow

6.Isatthistimeis

7.Theweightwashigherthantheweightwasgreaterthan

8.Iexpectedittobeexpected

9.Duringtheyearof1995during1995

10.Forthedevelopmentoffordeveloping

11.InthecityofDallasinDallas

12.Theproblemwasthatthecarwouldnotthecarwouldnotstart

start

13.Squareinshapesquare

14.inaccordancewithyourrequestyourequested

15.Signonthefrontofthisformsignthisform

16.Duringthetimethatwhile

17.Consensusofopinionweagree

18.Rememberthefactthatremember

19,Heldameetingmet

20.thisisthesituationatthistimenow

（4）删改无关紧要的成份（Removeunneededfacts）

A.Itshouldbenotedthatthisisthebestwecando,

B.Foryourinformationweencloseacatalogue.

C.Pleasebeadvisedthatwehavereceivedyourinvoice.

1.assoonaspossiblebyJuly10

2.asyouindicatedinyourletterasyouindicated

3.atalltimesalways

4.atthistimenow

5.continuetoutilizetheoldformuntilstartusingthenewformonFebruary

suchtimeasthenewformisavailable

6.despitethefactthatdespite

7.forthemonthofAprilforApril

8.forobviousreasonthatbecause

9.Iwouldaskthatyouplease

I0.inconjunctionwithwith

11.inthemererecentpastrecently

12.intheunlikelyeventthatif

13.intheunlikelyeventthatIamunabletoifIamlate,pleasedelaythemeeting

beontime,pleasedelaythemeeting

14.inviewofthefactthatbecause

15.itwillbegreatlyappreciatedifyouplease

16.ourproductionofthenewproductwillproductionwillbeginonJuly1

commenceonJuly1

17.pleasebeadvisedthatweexpectyoutopleasereviewthecontract

reviewtheenclosedcontract

（5）多使用主动语态的句子结构以明确表达意思。

PaymentoftheiraccountswillbemadebyJohnsonsnextweek．

Johnsonswillpaytheiraccountsnextweek．

4．具体（Concreteness）

（1）尽可能地提供明确、具体的信息。

A.Thesebrakescanstopacarwithinashortdistance.

TheseGoodsonpowerbrakescanstopa2-toncarwithin24feet.

B.Wehopetheequipmentwillbedeliveredtoourcompanyassoonaspossible.

PleasedelivertheequipmenttoourcompanybeforenextFriday.

C.Sheisafasttypist.

Shetypesatthefastrateof85wordsperminute.

（2）使用具体词汇

A.Wehavenohesitationinadvisingyou…

Weadviseyou…

B.Thepreparationofnewpricescaleisinhand.

Newpricescalesarebeingpreparedthisweek.

C.Duetotheunusualnatureoftherequest,…

Astherequestisunusual,…

agreatdealoftime,bad,large,good,small,around,old,convenient,young,little,majority,minority,most,less

5．完整（Completeness）

自查：

谁（Who）?

什么（What）?

什么时候（When）?

在哪里（Where）?

为什么（Why）?

怎么样（How）?

6．礼貌（Courtesy）

例如：

DearMrs.Walters,

Becauseyoudelayedsolonginyourresponse,ModelGSFisoffstock.Ifyouareinterested,wehavesomesimilarmodelsonhand

Yourstruly,

修改：

DearMrs.Walters

IfIhadknownyourneedsbeforeMay20,IcouldhaveshippedModelGSPimmediately.However,thespringsaledrainedourstock.

TheModelGSK,asimilarinstrument,isinstock,andyoucouldhaveitatthesamepriceastheGSF.Itnormallysellsfor$10,000more.wewillshipitassoonasyougiveustheword.

Yourssincerely

（1）使用礼貌友好的词汇

A.说“Thankyou"

例如:

Thankyouforyourletterofyesterday.

Thankyouforyourpromptreply.

Thankyouforhelpingusinthisrespect.

Thankyouforyourinformation.

（2）体谅对方的写作态度（You-Attitude）

Writeremphasis:

WeareshippingyourorderonFriday.

Readeremphasis:

YouwillreceiveyourorderbyMonday,October10.

Toreduceourcosts,wearechangingthebillingsystem.

Toprovideyouwithclearrecords,wearechangingourbillingsystem.

Iwaspleasedtohearthattheprojectwascompleted.

Congratulationsonsuccessfullycompletingtheproject

Weregretthatyouclosedyouraccountwithusaweekago.Webelievethatpeoplemaycomebacktoourbankagainsoonerorlatersincewehaveagoodcreditamongourcustomers.

Aweekagoyouclosedyouraccountwithus.Whateverthereason,wearepleasedtohaveplayedsomesmallpartinyourprogram.Youarecordiallyinvitedtouseour'

otherservicesasoccasionmayrequire.

（3）措辞得体（AppropriateWording）

a．避免采用消极性的词汇或句式

NegativeWording:

TheofficeisclosedafterfourO'

clock,

PositiveWording:

TheofficeisopenuntilfourO'

clock.

WhenIreceivedyourcomplaint,Icheckedourrecords.

WhenIreceivedyourletter,Icheckedourrecords.

Becauseyoufailedtoconnectthecable,thepicturewasblurred.

ThepicturewasblurredbecausetheV-2cablewasnotconnectedtotheterminal.

Youdidnotreadmyrecentletter.

PleaserefertomyJune10thletter.

TheExecutiveBoarddidnotreceivenotification.

SeveralmembersoftheExecutiveBoardinquiredaboutthetimeofourDecembermeeting.Willyoupleasesendthemafollow-up?

Yourletterwasnotclear.

IwouldappreciateanoutlineofourmarketingdifferencesthatyoumentionedinyourOctober14thletter.

b.有失礼貌的言词

Wedenyyourclaimcomplaint

Wedonotbelieveconfusion

Wearenotsurecontrary

Wefinditdifficulttounderstandcontrivance

Weexpectdelinquent

Weinsistdeny

Weareforceddisagreeable

Wetakeissueexasperate

Youforgotfailure

Youneglectedignorance

Youfailedtoimpatience

Youmisunderstoodincompetent

Youmustincredible

Youshouldknowinexcusab