考研作文LM完美总结Word文档格式.docx
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Whatmakesthedrawingstriking/intriguing(让人很感兴趣的)isthefactthat具体细节/可写点2
Themoststriking(引人注目的)featureofthedrawingisthat可写点二
Asissymbolicallydepictedinthe(first/left-hand)图可写点二(如两图对比则前加Onthecontrary/Conversely)
第三句话:
字幕描写(如果有两处字幕,就可以将两句都用上,即一主动,一被动)
Weareinformedbythecaptionthat“”
Thecaptionreads/indicatesthat“”
如果图画里面有字:
Sthismarkdeasbeentitledas
第四句话:
总结(不要太难的话,把图总结即可,而且还不一定需要,视情况而定:
看字数是否够)
Undoubtedly/Unquestionably/Incontrovertibly/Indispensably允许在此出现部分深层含义
Eg:
1、Depitedinthethought-provokingsketchisabird,
2、在此场景中小鸟站在斧头上哭,
3、然而更让我震惊的是树都被砍光了。
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描述图画的形容词:
thought-provoking/compelling/profund/instructive/enlightening/inprassiveandexaggrative
表示图的词:
portrayal、sketch、photo、drawing、cartoon
修饰“示”的词:
graphically/vividly/explicitly/symbolically
表示“示”的词:
dipict=protray(描述浅)reflect/convey/illustrate/demonstrate(深)suggest(小词大用)indicate/imply
表示“象征”的词:
benaturallyassociatedwith/symbolize
Thedelicateflowerisnaturallyassociatedwithyoungpeople.
另补充一:
处理两大动词连用
首先,找出所有动作,并区分出V主和V次
然后,保留V主将V次加-ing
最后,变成“N,V次-ing,V主”的结构,其中,V次-ing做插入语,作为第一段的亮点。
TheMaster,standingbythereverside,sighed,“Maytimepassonandonlikethis,neverceasingdayandnight.”
Thesad(pathetic)andhomelessbird,standingonacuttingtool(whichisnaturallyassociatedwithourruthlessandrelentless
destruction),iscryingwithsorrowandgrief.
补充二:
三大把段一写长写难的方法
1、Ving当插入语
2、主语前用1-2个形容词修饰
3、有副词用with+n的形式
With+confidence/optimism/joy/seriousness/passion/difficulty/enthusiasm
二、意义阐述段(5-6)
1、由浅入深(可以放在D1末或D2首)
Simple(andfuny)asthe图is/are,theconnotationsbtlyconveyedshouldbetakenintoconsiderationwithmoreinsight(andpenetration)/……shouldinvolvemoreinsightfulanalysis.
Theconnotationbehindthe图,whichgoesfarbeyond浅层含义,shouldbeanalyedmoreinsightfully.
Whatthethought-provokingpictureconveysgoesfarbeyond.Instead,itreflectaswell.
如D2有很多话写,这句可不写。
D1没话写,可将这句放在D1尾。
2、深层含义(全段核心全文关键)可用非常6+1
①Inferredinthispictureisvirtuallya(PandP)socialissue:
________________________
②Theperposeofthispictureistoshow/inform/convinceusthatdueattentionhustobepaidtothe形容词issueof(接名词结构)/theissuethat(接句子)
③Thepicturearousesdeepconcernovertheissueof/that_____,whichisprevalantincontemporarysociety.
④Thissketchdoesreflectathougth-provokingsocialphenomenonwhichisnotuncommon(“流行”但该词组只能用于定语从句中)inchinanow.
⑤Thispictureisthought-provokinginthatitendeavorstoconvinceusthat接句子,用一句话概括文章深层含义.
⑥Theuniquemetaphorinthisenlighteningdrawingendowsuswiththeconception/notionthat(绝世高手装B最佳句式
+1:
Undoubtedly,thephotoshavesubtlyreflectedthesocialphenomenonthat.
补:
好:
far-reaching/beneficial/positive/favorable坏:
nagtive/adverse好坏皆可:
prevalentandpervasive
3、象征点(这一点已经过时了,只有抽象图才有得写,复习2003年题温室花朵即可)
只需注意象征的几个讲法。
4、原因/背景+现状描述(原因现状谁前都可以,现状不可少)
①万能理由:
Onaccountof/owingto/becauseof/withthequickeningpaceoflife,(生活节奏加快)competitiongoesincreasinglyfierceinallwalksoflife(各行各业),imposingtremendouspressureonallindividuals.(原因/背景)
②Thepastseveralyearshavewitnesseddramaticincreaseinthedifficultyofexaminationsandemployment.(拟人句现状描述)(2007)
③Withthespeedysocialandeconomicdevelopment(原因/背景),youngerstersinmounting/growing/increasingnumbers(越来越的adj形式)admirethecelebritiesandsuperstars.(现状描述)
④Thepastseveralyearshavewitnessedthephenomenonthatitisincreasinglydifficultforcollegegraduatestofindasuitablejob,andtwo/several/various/amultitudeoffactorscouldaccountfortheissue.Ontheonehand,_______.Ontheotherhand________.(多重原因:
层次感和高手感的有效途径)
说明:
原因可分为零原因、一原因、二原因,各自有对策。
零原因:
直接写现状描写那一句话就可以了。
一原因:
现状描写(拟人句),forthereasonthat
Eg:
Thepastseveralyearswitnessedthephenomenonthatthenumberoffishdeclineddramatically,forthereasonthatwehumansareonlyinpursuitofeconomicprofits,butturnablindeyestoenvironmentalprotection.
二原因:
现状描写+过渡句+二原因
过渡句:
1、Severalfactors,bothindividualandsocial,couldaccountforthenegativephenomenon.
2、Thereasonforthephenomenonmaybecomplicated,butwecan,toalargeextent,ascribeittothefollowinginterrelatedfactors.Ontheonehand,.Ontheotherhand,
Onetheonehand,agreatnumberofpeopleareonlyinpursuitofthemaximumprofit,totallyturningablindeyeto/totallyignoringbasicmoralityofthewholebusiness.
Ontheotherhand,ourlegalsystemisfarfromperfect,whichdirectlyorindirectlyprovidestheimmoralbusinessmenwiththechanceofcheating.
agreatdealof+不可数Nagreatnumberof+可数Nagreatmany+可数复数N
5、后果/影响
Inotherwords,notonly·
·
butalso(最好自己创作1—2句话)
Inotherwords,thesandstormnotonlybringsaboutanadverseconsequenceonourecosystem,butalsoputsanenormousuponthesustainabledevelopment
表示好、坏影响
坏:
bringsaboutanadverseconsequence
putsanenormousupon
poseapotentialanprobablethreaton/to
soundanalarmto
bringabouta(n)far-reachinginfluence/impacton
layasolidfoudationfor
playafar-reaching/fundamentalrolein
主servesasacatalystfor宾(作为催化剂)
6、强行举例(2006王江涛)
Itcanbebest/aptlyexemplifiedbythecaseof/bythefollowingcases
7、层进
Itisundeniablethatwemustbehonest,whichshouldbeacceptedappreciatedandadvocatedbyallthebusinessman.Regrettably/However,itisruthlessandrelentlessignoredincontemporarysociety.
8、总结Generallyspeaking
威胁性总结
Ifweletthesituationgoasitis,thewholemarketeventheentiresocietywoulddeteriorate./wouldbecomeunimaginableanduncontrollable.
反面总结
Supposeourgovernmentdoesnotpayenoughattentiontothewest,ourwholecountrywouldbecomeunbalancedandunabletosurviveandthrive.(intheruthlessandrelentlesscompetition.)
举例说明段
一般举两个例子,采用总分总的结构。
总:
Itcanbebest/aptlyexemplifiedbythefollowingtwocases.=Forexample
分:
例子一
Anotherfittingexampleis
Onthewhole,theseexampleseffectivelyclarifythesayingthat“”
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天龙八部大纲
1、浅义(由浅入深)(simpleas/instead)
5、影响:
好4;
坏4Inotherwords
2、深意(全段核心)(非常6+1任挑一句)
【论点】
6、强行举例(2006)
3、象征点(适合于抽象:
2003)
7、层进:
好;
坏(选说反面,regrettably)
4、现状+原因(拟人句引入,超长句的来源)零一二原因
8、总结:
(generallyspeaking:
坏)
【总结论点】
三分天下法(天龙八部迷你版)
1、深义(6+1任选)
2、过渡句“分如下三层”(起提醒考官的作用):
This图isthought-provokinginthatitconveysthefollowingthreeprofoundlayersofconnotation(s)/implications.
3、Initially,(写现状)
4、Additionally,(写原因)
5、Finally,(写影响)
6、总结
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------三、建议措施段(最多四句1+2+1,即总→分→总的结构)
1、主题句:
1)Accordingly/Asaconsequence,onnoaccountcanwe(决不能)failtoattachgreatimportancetothephenomenonreflectedinthepicture.
2)Accordingly,itisimperative(势在必行的)forustoderivepositiveimplications(得出积极的涵义)fromthesethought-provokingdrawing./totaketheeffectiveandefficientmeasure.
2、具体措施:
提供了一些思考方向(作参考)建议一句自己发挥一句模板
A.authorities;
(8)B.education;
(8)C.publicvoice;
(6)D.mediaE.self-effort;
(3)F、自由发挥(6)
Asaconsequence,…….Tobeginwith,relevantlawsandregulationsshouldbemadetoseverelypunishthosewhoplagiarizeothers’works.(国家立法)Inaddition,weshouldcultivatetheawarenessoftheyoungthatacademichonestyisextremelyritaltous.(人民教育)Inshort,itishightimewetookeffectivemeasurestoreversethedisturbingtrendillustrated(“扭转这种令人担忧的局面”即=解决问题改写法用在坏事的文章中十分有用)inthecartoon.(P33)
Asaconsequence,itisimperativeforustotakedrasticactions.Ontheonehand…….Ontheotherhand,thereshouldbeanincreasinglyloudvoicefromthepublicforfirmmeasuresagainst……(P31)
该句角度新鲜,且好坏都能用(……for+好事/……firmmeasuresagainst+坏事)
3、总结
Andonlyinthiswaycanwecrackthehardnutandmakeoursocietydevelopinadynamicandvibrant/harmoniousandprosperousway/direction.
Allinall,Iamconvincedthatonlyinthiswaycanwesurviveandthriveinthisruthlessandrelentlesssociety.
总结句式
Onlyinthiswaycansb
Itisinthiswaythatsbcan
Onlybydoingsthcansbtodosth
Aslongas条件,wecan解决
Onlybyundergoingmorechallengesandtoilsinadversitycanyoungpeoplecultivatestrongpersonalityandability,andonlyinthiswaycantheybecomewinnersinthiscompetitiveworld.
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