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NothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWill

　　“Wherethereisawill,thereisway”isanoldproverbwhichalmosteveryoneknows,butnotallunderstanditsowell.Actually,itmeansthatifyouarereallyresolvedtodosomething,nomatterhowdifficultitmightbe,nevergiveup.

　　Infact,strongwillisakindofgoodqualitywhichsuccessfulpeopleshouldown.Agreatmanisalwaysonewhohasafirmresolutionandaninflexiblespirit.Onewillneversucceedallhislifewithoutafirmwilltogetthefinalvictory.Asarule,greattasksareaccomplishedbymenofstrongwill.Forexample,Dr.SunYatsen,thefounderoftheRepublicofChina,settheChinesepeoplefreefromtheManchurianrulethroughalongperiodofhardstruggle.Manyofhisattemptsfailedandmanyofhisfollowerswerekilled,buthehadaninflexiblespiritandstucktohiscause.Finally,hemadetherevolutionof1911asuccess.Thesameistrueofmeninallwalksoflife.

　　Itisquiteobviousthatthereisnothingdifficultintheworld,ifyoumakeupyourmindtodoit,youwillcertainlyaccomplishyourend.Thatstandstoreason.Soasforstudentslikeus,weshouldhaveagoodattitudetowardsfailure.Facingwithdifficultiesandfailures,keepheadsupandnevergiveup.Besides,weshouldmakefullpreparation,thoughstrongwillhelpusovercomethedifficulties,itisnotforpersonwhohasnopreparation.

2011年6月四级考试作文

1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚　　2.网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题　　3.我的建议

　OnlineShopping

　　Onlineshopping,asanactofbuyingproductsandservicesovertheInternet,isgrowinginpopularityever,whichhasbeensignificantlyshockingourlifestyles.Manyindividualsfavorthiskindofshoppingbecauseofitsease.Butlikeanyothernewborndevice,peoplemayunconsciouslyexposethemselvestothethreatfromitbyincaution.　　Forthosewhoworkforlengthyhours,theinternetoffersthemmuchconvenience.Firstofall,theydonothavetimetovisitthestoreduringregulartradinghours,whileonlineretailersallowsorderstwenty-fourhoursaday.Aswell,onlineshoppinggivesthecustomersthefacilitytocomparepricesandfeaturesoftheproductsthankstothedetailedproductdescription.Inmostoccasions,theitemsarecheaperthanonlinethanintheconventionalstores,makingitanappealtomostpeople.　　Whiletherearenumerousadvantagesofonlineshopping,therearealsothreatsandfearsregardingthiswayofshopping.Informationsecurityisthekeyconcern.Onlinepaymentmaynotbesosecurebecauseofidentitytheft.Anotherproblemofonlineshoppingisencounteringmisleadingandfalseproductinformation.　　Inmyviewpoint,onlineshoppingisadouble-edgedsword.Buyingonreputedonlinestoresisagoodsolutiontoensurethepleasureandcomfortoftheinternetshopping.

DoingShoppingOnline

　　WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,shoppingisnolongeratiringthing.Justclickyourmousetochoosethearticlesyoulike,andthepurchaseisdone.Youdon’tevenhavetostepoutoftheroom.Itseemsalleasyandquick.

　　However,people’sopinionsvaryonthistrend.Somebelievethatonlineshoppingistimeandmoneysaving.Withplentifulselectionoptions,theycanbuywhatevertheylikeatanytimeconvenient.Stillothersinsistthatmis-purchasingaloneisannoyingenough,nottomentionthecredibilityofthesellersandthesafetyoftheiraccounts.

　　Inmyopinion,theconvenienceandexcitementofonlineshoppingisbeyondalldoubts.Inthemeantime,wemustalwaysbearinmindthatcertaintrapsdoexist,sowe’dbettermakesurethesellersaretrustworthybeforebuying.Inaddition,weshouldalsoguardourselvesfromthepotentialhackerswhomightstealouraccountinformation.

　　文章点评：

　　这是一篇“中等偏上”的学生作文。

本文先对网购热潮进行简介，引出全篇；

接着对网络购物的正反两方面进行对比；

最后提出自己的看法结束全篇。

整体看思路清晰，逻辑严密，行文流畅，用语较为地道。

　　下面说一下这篇文章的有待提高之处：

　　1.文章结构上，能看得出该同学试图采用议论文的“三段式”（提出问题、分析问题、解决问题）。

但是，以“WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet”为开首语，有些落入俗套，有硬套模板的嫌疑。

稍加注意，应该能写出更好的句子。

　　2.微观语言点方面，有些语句稍显啰嗦，比如Withplentifulselectionoptions…简化成Withplentifulselections…更好，意思没有丝毫减损，表达力反而增强许多。

OnlineShopping

　　Nowadays,withtherapiddevelopmentofinformationtechnology,onlineshoppinghasgainedgreatpopularityamongmoreandmorewebusers.Forexample,itisfashionableforyoungsterstopurchasedailyessentials,suchasbooks,clothes,electricalequipment,onsomefamouswebsite,likeTaobao,EBayandAlibaba.

　　Undoubtedlyspeaking,onlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages.Firstly,comparedwithtraditionalshopping,it’sveryconvenient.Whatyouneedtodoisjustclickingyourmouseandwaitinginsteadofgoingoutbyfootordriving.Secondly,morechoicesthanrealstoreareanotherattractiontocustomers.However,inspiteofconvenienceandmorechoicesofonlineshopping,wecannotturnablindeyetoitsdisadvantages.Obviously,qualityproblemisitsfirstdisadvantage.It’scommonthatarticlesaren’tsogoodjustastheyaredescribedonlinethatcustomersalwaysbuyfakecommodities.Inaddition,it’stroublesomeandannoyingformanycustomerstomakeachangewhentheyarenotsatisfiedwithwhattheyboughtonline.　　Asacollegestudent,IlikeonlineshoppingbutIexpectedthateffectivemeasuresshouldbetakentomakeitbetter。

Specificallyspeaking,governmentshouldworkoutstrictregulationsandrulestopreventunfaithfulandunlawfulactivitiesofonlineshopowners.Onlybythiswaycanonlineshoppingbecomereallysafeandattractanincreasingnumberofcustomers.

2010年12月四级考试作文

1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切

　　2.为了让孩子独立,父母应该……

　　HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?

（文都版）

TodayinChina,manyfamilieshaveonlyonechild.Sothechildrenusuallydoteduponbyallfamilymembers.Graduallysomeofthemgetusedtodependingontheirparentsandfamilymembers,asaresulttheylacktheabilitytofacetheirlivesbythemselves.

　　Therearesomewaystohelpchildrentobeindependent.First,thechildshouldhaveachancetoseetheworldaroundhimindividuallytounderstandthattherearevariouspeopleandcompetitionsintheirlives,andlearntofindhisrightpositioninthesocietyonlybyindividualefforts.Second,itisimpossibletoaskachildnottodependonparentsatonce.Theparentsmaygivethechildenoughhelpandspacetomakehimfeelcomfortable.Achildneedshelpfromtheirfamilies.Becausewithoutanyhelp,thechildmaylosehisfaith.Thirdly,parentscanhelptheirchildrenmaketheirowndecisions,whichcanchallengehisabilitytodealwithproblems.Achildshouldbepraisedwhenheissuccessfulorencouragedwhenhefails.

　　Tobeindependentisvitalforthechildren,becausenoparentscangowiththeirchildrenforthewholelife.Onlyanindependentpersoncanliveandenjoyafullandmeaningfullife

HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentobeIndependent（沪江版）

　　Nowadays,thereisagrowingconcernoversuchaphenomenon,thatis,someparentstakecareofalmosteverythingconcernedwiththeirchildren,includingstudy,workandmarriage.Someparentsbelievethatthisislove,however,itisonlytodestroychildren’sindependencethoroughly.

　　Forthefutureofthenextgeneration,moreeffortsshouldbemadebyparentstohelptheirchildrentobeindependent.Thefundamentaloneistocultivatetheawareness,namely,theimportanceandnecessityofbeingindependent,whichissupposedtobeginfromchildhood.Childrenshouldbetaughtthatnoonecanbestrongerandmorehelpfulthanthemselvesinthisworld.

Thequalityofindependenceissoindispensableforusthatparentshadbetteractasatutor,notadictator.Andonlywithparent'

strust,canthenextgenerationaccumulateconfidencestepbystep.

2010年6月四级考试作文

1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写　　2.出现这种情况的原因　　3.这种现象导致的结果

　　DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling（文都一）

　　Whatishotfor2010inourcollegesItisthespellingmistakes.Countlessstudentslackdueattentiontospelling.Takingalookaround,wecanfindexamplestoonumeroustolist,theonemaybe“challenge”.Freshmanandsophomorealmostwritethiswordas“challenge”.Howcarelesstheyare!

　　WhysuchaphenomenonsweepseveryuniversitySomeexpertsattributeittostudents’inattention,becausestudentsalwayspaynoattentiontospelling.However,otherexpertsargue,theteachersshouldbeblamedforthissituation.Inmyopinion,itisfarbeyondanyreasonabledoubtthatbothofthemshouldexertthemselvestochangethespellingmistakes.

Thespreadingofthespellingmistakeshasextremelynegativeeffectsontheeducation.Foronething,thespecialagethatnoneofstudentscanspellcorrectlywillcomesoon.Foranother,whilecommunicatingwithforeigners,wewillbelaughedatthespellingmistakesmadebyourselves.Asaresult,dueattentionshouldbegiventospellingimmediately.

DueAttentionShouldBeGiventoSpelling（文都二）

ItisbecomingincreasinglycommonthatlotsofstudentsdonotthinkspellingisthemajorpointofmasteringgoodEnglish.

　　Throughtalkingwiththem,Iawareofthefactthatcommonthinkingleadedtothisphenomenonisthat,thestudentsonlywanttogetgoodscoresfromtheirtests,whichGrammarskillsarerequiredmorethanspelling.DonotmentionthatsomeofthestudentsonlywanttoimprovetheirspokenEnglishtocommunicate,forasimplereasonthatthiscanmakethemsoundcool.

　　Differentwordsstandsfordifferentmeanings.AswearegoingtouseEnglishinourdailylife,tounderstanddifferentsignsandads,evenwhenwearereadingnewspapers,goodspellingskillsensureustogetthecorrectinformation’s　andpreventsmisunderstandingsfromhappening.Themostimportantpointthatstudentsmightnotseeisthatspellingskill