成人高考专升本英语作文写作要点分析文档格式.docx

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写提纲的好处：

1.可以扩大思路

2.可以按次序排好素材

3.将文章分成段

4.明确写作的中心思想

　　“TheAdvantagesofTravel（旅行的益处。

）”

根据这一题目，在构思时可能会想到以下内容：

1.seeingstrangeanddifferentthings（看到各种奇异的东西）

2.meetingpeoplewithdifferentinterests（遇到有各种不同兴趣的人）

3.keepingusfitandhealthy（有助于身体健康）

4.enjoyingbeautifulscenery（欣赏各地美景）

5.understandinghowpeoplelive（了解人们怎样生活）

6.visitingfamouscitiesandscenicspots（浏览名城和名胜）

7.tastingdifferentfoodsandlocalflavors（品尝各地风味）

8.gettingideasoftheconditionsandcustomsofotherpeople

（了解各地风土人情）

9.arousingtheferventloveforourmotherland（激起对祖国的热爱）

10.gainingknowledgeofgeographyandhistory（获得地理历史知识）

11.makingonelessnarrowminded（使人心胸开阔）

12.gainingotherknowledge（获得其他方面知识）

13.seeingplacesreadofinbooks（目睹曾在书上读到过的地方）

TheAdvantagesofTravel

Travelisbeneficialtousinatleastthreeways.

First，bytravelingwecanenjoythebeautifulsceneryindifferentplaces.Wewillseewithourowneyesmanyplaces

readofinbooks，andvisitsomefamouscitiesandscenicspots.

Second，wewillmeetpeoplewithdifferentinterestsandseestrangeanddifferentthingswhenwetravel.Wecanget

ideasoftheconditionsandcustomsofotherpeople，tastedifferentfoodsandlocalflavorsifwelike.Inthisway，we

canunderstandhowdifferentlyotherpeoplelive.

Third，travelwillnotonlyhelpustogainknowledgeofgeographyandhistoryandotherknowledge，whicharousesthe

ferventloveforourmotherland，butwillalsohelpuskeephealthyandmakeuslessnarrow-minded.Traveldoesbenefit

usbothmentallyandphysically.

Withalltheseadvantagesoftravel，itisnowonderthattravelhasnowbecomemorepopularthaneverinChina.

在写100字左右的作文，我们也强调三段论。

第一句话或第一段我们强调我们要写的内容，第二段找一些例子阐述一下。

第三段再次把我们

强调的内容引申的说一下。

二．文章的三个部分

引言introduction

正文body

结束语conclusion

专升本英语作文考试中，语法一定要简明扼要，而且要正确。

写好主题句的三条原则

　　1.要能说明段落中心思想的内容。

　　2.要有能体现中心思想的关键词。

　　3.尽量使用简洁明了的句子。

以下是短文写作中使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式，每组句式的功能相同或相似，考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的1－2个，做到能够

熟练正确地仿写或套用。

1．表示原因

　　1）Therearethreereasonsforthis．

2）Thereasonsforthisareasfollows．

3）Thereasonforthisisobvious．

4）Thereasonforthisisnotfartoseek．

5）Thereasonforthisisthat．．．

6）Wehavegoodreasontobelievethat．．．

例如：

Therearethreereasonsforthechangesthathavetakenplaceinourlife．Firstly，people’slivingstandardhasbeen

greatlyimproved．Secondly，mostpeoplearewellpaid，andtheycanaffordwhattheyneedorlike．Lastbutnotleast，

moreandmorepeopleprefertoenjoymodernlife．

如写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。

如：

Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife．Therearethreereasonsfor

this．这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。

2．表示好处

　　1）Ithasthefollowingadvantages．

2）Itdoesusalotofgood．

3）Itbenefitsusquitealot．

4）Itisbeneficialtous．

5）Itisofgreatbenefittous．

Booksarelikefriends．Theycanhelpusknowtheworldbetter，andtheycanopenourmindsandwidenourhorizons．

Therefore，readingextensivelyisofgreatbenefittous．

3．表示坏处

1）Ithasmoredisadvantagesthanadvantages．

2）Itdoesusmuchharm．

3）Itisharmfultous．

However，everythingdividesintotwo．Televisioncanalsobeharmfultous．Itcandoharmtoourhealthandmakeuslazy

ifwespendtoomuchtimewatchingtelevision．

4．表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能

1）Itisimportant（necessary，difficult，convenient，possible）forsb．todosth．

2）Wethinkitnecessarytodosth．

3）Itplaysanimportantroleinourlife．

Computersarenowbeingusedeverywhere，whetherinthegovernment，inschoolsorinbusiness．Soon，computerswillbe

foundineveryhome，too．Wehavegoodreasontosaythatcomputersareplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourlife

andwehavesteppedintotheComputerAge．

5．表示措施

1）Weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures．

2）Weshouldtryourbesttoovercome（conquer）thedifficulties．

3）Weshoulddoourutmostindoingsth．

4）Weshouldsolvetheproblemsthatweareconfronted（faced）with．

Thehousingproblemthatweareconfrontedwithisbecomingmoreandmoreserious．Therefore，wemusttakesomeeffective

measurestosolveit.

6．表示变化

1）Somechangeshavetakenplaceinthepastfiveyears．

2）Agreatchangewillcertainlybeproducedintheworld’scommunications．

3）Thecomputerhasbroughtaboutmanychangesineducation．

Somechangeshavetakenplaceinpeople’sdietinthepastfiveyears．Themajorreasonsforthesechangesarenotfarto

seek．Nowadays，moreandmorepeopleareswitchingfromgraintomeatforprotein，andfromfruitandvegetabletomilk

forvitamins．

7．表示事实、现状

　　1）Wecannotignorethefactthat．．．

2）Noonecandenythefactthat．．．

3）Thereisnodenyingthefactthat．．．

4）Thisisaphenomenonthatmanypeopleareinterestedin．

5）However，that’snotthecase．

Wecannotignorethefactthatindustrializationbringswithittheproblemsofpollution．Tosolvetheseproblems，we

canstartbyeducatingthepublicaboutthehazardsofpollution．Thegovernmentonitspartshouldalsodesignstricter

lawstopromoteacleanerenvironment．

8．表示比较

1）ComparedwithA，B．．．

2）IprefertoreadratherthanwatchTV．

3）Thereisastrikingcontrastbetweenthem．

　　例如：

Comparedwithcars，bicycleshaveseveraladvantagesbesidesbeingaffordable．Firstly，theydonotconsumenatural

resourcesofpetroleum．Secondly，theydonotcausethepollutionproblem．Lastbutnotleast，theycontributetopeople’

shealthbygivingthemduephysicalexercise．

9．表示数量

1）Ithasincreased（decreased）from．．．to．．．

2）Thepopulationinthiscityhasnowincreased（decreased）to800，000．

3）TheoutputofJulyinthisfactoryincreasedby15％comparedwiththatofJanuary．

Withtheimprovementofthelivingstandard，theproportionofpeople’sincomespentonfoodhasdecreasedwhilethat

spentoneducationhasincreased．

再如：

Fromthegraphlistedabove，itcanbeseenthatstudentuseofcomputershasincreasedfromanaverageoflessthantwo

hoursperweekin2008to20hoursin2009.

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PracticalWritingSamples英语应用文写作范文

1.ALetterofApology道歉信

由于未能及时赴约，给老师写一封道歉信，解释原因请求原谅同时提出希望下一次约会。

Youhavemadeanappointmentwithyourteacher,butfailedtokeepit.Writealettertoyourteacherto

　　1）Apologizeforyourfailuretokeeptheappointment,

　　2）Explainyourreasontoyourteacher,and

　　3）Expressyourwishtomakeanotherappointment.

DearProf.Wang,

　　I’mwritingtoaskyoutoexcusemefornotbeingabletokeepourappointment.Idoknowthatthisisveryimpolite

andmusthavecausedyoumuchtrouble.

　　Idoreckonthatatpresentanyexplanationispaleandfutile.HoweverIdonotwantyoutomisunderstandme.Onmy

waytoyouroffice,anoldladysuddenlyfaintedduetoheartattackonthebus.Istoppedataxiandsentherintoa

nearbyhospital.Istayedthereuntilhersoncame,whichspoiledourappointment.

　　Iamawarethatourappointmentisofimportance.Idohopethatyouwouldbekindenoughtospareyourvaluableto

meetme.

　　Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　SincerelyYours

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　LiMing　

2.ALetterofThanks感谢信

生病住院两周，老师和同学过来看望你，为此你给他们写一封感谢信，表达你的感激之情。

Youhavebeenillandhospitalizedfortwoweeks.Yourteachersandclassmateswenttoseeyou.Writealettertothemto

　　1）Thankthemfortheircomingtoseeyou,

　　2）Describeyourfeeling,and

　　3）Stateyourpresentcondition.

DearTeachersandClassmates,

　　Firstofall,pleaseallowmetosay“Thankyou”toallofyou.Itisverykindofyoutospareyourvaluabletime

duringtheperiodoffinalexaminationsandcometoseeme.

　　Yourvisithasgivenmemuchconfidenceandpowertoovercometheillness.WhenIfirstcametothehospital,Ireally

feltlonelyanddidnothaveenoughcourageandconfidencetoovercometheillness.YourvisithasmademefeelthatIam

notpoorandlonelyintheworldandinfactIamlivinginaworldoflove,whichhasbroughtmemuchconfidenceand

powertoovercometheillness.

　　Thesedays,myconditionhasbeenobviouslyimprovedduetothecarefultreatmentofferedbydoctorsandnurses.

DoctorshavetoldmethatIwillcompletelyrecoverfromillnessintwoweeks.IhopethatIcanseeyouearlier.

　　Again,specialthanksgotoallofyou.

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　SincerelyYours

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　LiMing　　

3.ALetterofInvitation邀请信

春节即将来临，你写信邀请外国朋友来中国过春节。

TheSpringFestivaliscomingshortly.YouintendtoinviteyourforeignfriendtocometoChinaandspendthetraditional

ChineseFestivaltogether.Writealettertohim/herto

　　1）Expressyourwarminvitationtohim/her,

　　2）IntroducetheSpringFestival,and

　　3）Mentiontheplacesyouwillaccompanyhim/hertovisit.

DearBeckham,

Firstofall,pleaseallowmetoexpressmyheartfeltinvitationtoyou.SincetheSpringFestivaliscomingshortly,I

sincerelyinviteyoutocometoChinaandspendtheholidaywithme.

SpringFestivalisofmuchimportancetoChinesepeople.IthasalonghistoryandChinesehaveattachedmuchimportance

totheholiday.Tobeexact,theSpringFestivalhasbeenthemostsignificantholiday.TheSpringFestivalistoChinese

whatChristmasistotheWesterners.

Ifyoucome,Iamgoingtoaccompanyyoutofairgrounds（庙会）,whereyoucanhaveacloselookatsomeoftheChinese