短文改错1Word文档格式.docx
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2.关于90后
Asagenerationborninthe1990s,wearefacingwithalotofproblemsinreceivingeducationandgettingemployed.Livinginaworldfulloffiercecompetition,wehavedevelopedourownwaysoflifeandvalues,whichhavecausedpeople’sdeepconcern.Theythinkwecaretoomanyaboutourselvesandareunwillingtocooperatewithothers,sothatishardforustoachievesuccesshoweverwedo.Besides,theyconsiderthatwelackofdetermination,withoutitwewouldeasilygiveupintimeofdifficulty.Theyarealsoconcernedaboutthatwearesoeagertowininstantfamethatwewouldliketofollowfashionblindly,whichmightinturnsruinourfuturecareer.
1.facing→faced2.competition→competitions3.have→has4.many→much5.that→it→it6.however→whatever7.去掉lack后的of8.withoutit→withoutwhich9.去掉about10.turns→turn
3.电视的副作用
Alotofparentsandteachersworryabouttheeffectsoftelevisiontoyoungchildren.Accordingtoarecentstudy,manyachildspendmoretimewatchingTVthanreviewingtheirlesson.DuetowatchingTVfortoolong,thesechildrencannotdevelophabitofreadingbooksandtheabilitytolearnonthemown.Teachersarealsoconcernedabouttheeffectsoftelevisioncommercials.Itisreportedthatonayear,achildcanwatchasmanyas25,000televisioncommercialsonaverage,allofthemaredesignedwiththepurposeofmakingchildrentoaskforthingsthattheydon’trealneed.
1.to→on2.spend→spends去掉be3.lesson→lessons4.habit前加the5.onthemown→ontheirown6.worried后加about7.onayear→during/inayear8.allofthem→allofwhich9.去掉want前面的to10.real→really
4.低碳生活
Livealow-carbonlifemeansthatallofusmusttryourbesttocutoffresourceconsumption(消耗)toreducecarbondioxideemission(排放)inordertostopglobalwarming.
Howshallwedotolivealow-carbonlife?
Firstofall,whenwegotoschoolorsomeplaces,we’dbetterwalkorgobybikeinsteadofgoingbycars.Besides,weshouldsavefood,waterorelectricityinourdailylife.Finally,usingenvironmentallyfriendlyshoppingbagsratherthanplasticbagscanhelpustofightagainstwhitepollution,whichcanmakegreatdifferencetotheearth.
Itcallsforeveryoneeffortstoprotecttheenvironment.Unlesseveryoneofuscanmakeasmallchangeinourwayoflife,wecanmaketheearthabetterplace.
1.Live→Living2.cutoff→cutdown3.How→What4.some后加other5.cars→car6.or→and7.Finally→Lastly8.great前加a9.everyone→everyone’s10.Unless→If
5.工作使人快乐
Studiesshowthathard-workingpeoplelivelongerthanaveragemenandwomen.Itisbecauseworkingkeepspeoplebusily,awayfromlonely.Researchersfindthatpeoplewillfeelunhappy,worriedandlonelywhentheyhadnothingtodo.Instead,thehappiestarethosealwaysworkbusily.Workingservesasbridgebetweenmanandreality.Whilework,peoplecomeintocontactwitheachother.Throughcollective(集体的)activities,theyfindfriendshipandwarmth,thisishighlybeneficialtohealth.Thelostofworkusuallymeanslosingeverything,soithasnegativeeffectonpeoplephysicallyandmentally.Inadditionto,workinggivespeopleasenseoffulfillmentandasenseofachievement.
1.busily→busy2.lonely→loneliness3.had→have4.those后加who5.bridge前加a6.Whilework→Whileworking7.this→which8.Thelostof→Thelossof9.effect→effects10.去掉Inaddition后的to
6.给孩子松绑
Asweallknowit,manychildrenhavetospendtheirweekendsandholidaysattendingvarioustrainingcoursesthoughtheyareunwillingbecausetheirparentsdon’twantthemtofallbehindinthestartingline.Instead,theyhopetheirchildrenareequippingwithasmanyskillsaspossible.Thereforetheywon’tlosefaceswhencomparingtheirchildrenwithothers’.Besides,theyaresuretheseextraclasseswillhelptheirchildrentostandbyandbecomemorecompetitiveinthefuture.Actually,itiswisetoforcechildrentodoallwhattheydon’tlike.Toomanytrainingclasseswillbeheavyburdenforchildren.Theparentsshouldn’tpushtheirchildrentoohardly.
76.Asweallknow为非限制性定语从句,As指代下句的内容,应去掉it;
77.beunwillingtodosth表示“不愿意做某事”,上句出现了spendtheirweekendsandholidaysattendingvarioustrainingcourses,为了避免重复,可省略该短语,而保留动词不定式符号to,因此在unwilling后应加上to;
78.on/atthestartingline意为“在起跑线线上”,因此把in改为at/on;
79.短语beequippedwith“被装配上”,因此把equipping改为equipped80.习惯用语loseface“丢面子”,因此把faces改为face;
81.standby“站在一边,支持”,standout“突出;
显眼,引人注目,脱颖而出”,因此把by改为out;
82.结合下文可知,作者不赞成家长让孩子上各种补习班的做法,因此把wise改为unwise;
83.先行词all后的定语从句应用that引导,把what改为that或去掉what;
84.burden为可数名词,因此在heavy前加上a;
85.Theparentsshouldn’tpushtheirchildrentoohard家长们不要对孩子催得太紧,把hardly改为hard。
7.住在寝室还是在外租房
Nowadays,somestudentsdon’tlikesharingaroomwiththeirclassmate.Instead,theyrentedhousesneartheirschool.Theadvantagesoflivinginthedormitoryareclearly:
studentscandevelopadeepfriendshiporlearntocooperatewiththeirroommates.However,itissafer.Iftheylivelonelyinarentedhouseoutside,it’sbetterfortheirstudiesbecausetheyfeelfreeintheirownroomswithoutinterruptedbyothers.Asaresult,theycandevotetheirtimetostudywhole-heartedly.Theycanalsodecidehowtogotobedandgetup.Buttheremaybesomesafetyproblemswithlivingoutsideschool.Personally,itisbettertoliveinthedormitorythaninarentedhouse.
76.classmate→classmates77.rented→rent78.clearly→clear79.or→and80.However→Besides81.lonely→alone82.without后加上being83.study→studying84.how→when85.school前加the
8.成长的烦恼
WhenIwasachild,howIwishedtobecomeaadultsothatIcoulddoallwhatIliked.IwantedtohavemorespacewhereIwasabletofollowmyownheartwithoutobeymyparents’orders.
Astimegoingby,Ihavegrownupgradually.ButIfindthingsarequitedifferentfromwhatIexpect.Idohavethefreetodomorethingsalone.Moreover,Ihavetotakeonmoreresponsibility.Ihavetotakethechargeofmylifeandfacethechallengesbravely.NowIamdeterminingtoworkhardandgotocollegesothatIcanhaveagoodjobinthefuture.
1.a→an2.what→that或去掉all/what3.obey→obeying4.As→with或going→goes5.expect→expected6.free→freedom7.Moreover→However8.responsibility→responsibilities9.去掉charge前面的the10.determining→determined
9.如何保持健康
Inmoderntime,thepaceofourlifeisgettingfasterandfaster.Wehavetoworkunderthepressure,whichmakesthathardforustoliveahealthylife.Butdevelopingahealthylifestyleisveryimportantunlesswewanttoenjoygoodhealth.
Firstofall,worklonghoursinfrontofthecomputerisbadforoureyesandback.Drinkingandsmokingalsodoharmfultoourhealth.However,takingphysicalexercisecanhelpbuildourbody.Inadditionto,weshouldhaveabalanceddietthatcontainalotofgrain,fruitsandvegetables.Lastbutthenotleast,havingenoughsleepisalsonecessarytoustostayhealthy.Personally,havingahealthylifestyleisjustyourchoice.
76.time→times77.But→So78.thepressure→pressure79.makesthat→makesit80.unless→if81.work→working82.harmful→harm83.build后加up84.去掉Inaddition后的to85.contain→contains
10.喜欢传统贺卡
Iwouldprefertosendtraditionalgreetingcardstoe-cardsbecauseofthefollowingreason:
Firstofall,ithasbeentraditiontosendprintedgreetingcardstofriendsandrelativessinceancienttimes.Thecardswrittenwithhandcanexpressthesender'
sdeeplyloveandfriendship.Beside,thepapergreetingcardscanbecollectedandkeptasareminderoffriendship.
Comparingwithtraditionalcards,e-cardsareconvenientandfasttosendontheInternet.Butitwon'
tspendusapennytosendthee-cards.Inadditionto,receiverscanlistentomusicwhilewatchingmovingpictures,thatisveryenjoyable.
Althoughe-cardscanhelpsaveenergyandprotecttheenvironment,butI’dpreferprintedgreetingcardstokeepthetraditionalive.
76.reason→reasons77.tradition前加a78.with→by79.deeply→deep80.Beside→Besides81.Comparing→Compared82.spend→cost83.去掉Inaddition后的to84.that→which85.去掉but
11.校园浪费
Withthelivingstandardarising,thereisalargeamountwasteoncampus.Forexample,somestudentstendtoleavethelightonduringthedayandwaterrunafterwashing.Theyalsothrowawaythefoodwhattheydon’tlike.Soitishighlytimewedealtwiththeseproblems.HerearewhatIthinkweshoulddo:
Firstofall,weshoudturnoffthelightsandthetapbeforeweusethem.Secondly,we’dbettereatupwhatwebuyintheschoolcafeteria.Moreimportantly,weshouldformhabitofsavingnaturalresourceshoweverwedo.
Personally,itiseverybody’sdutytostopwasting.Ifwedon’ttakeactionnow,andthelimitedresourcesontheearthwillrunoutso
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