托福高分满分作文必备结构和语言Word格式文档下载.docx
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“结论”是对观点的重申,两者一脉相承、头尾呼应;
而整个写作过程就是一个“论证”的过程。
要想作文得高分,这五要素就必须面面俱到,如此才能写出结构严谨、条理清晰的高分作文
托福写作提升语言功底技巧讲解
一篇高分作文在语言上,首先要保证语法正确,用词恰当,这样才能准确达意。
在此基础上可以追求更多样、高级的表达。
例如,*开头要表现“社会发展迅速,人们的生活发生了天翻地覆的变化”这一含义,最常见的表达为:
Sample1:
Oursocietydevelopsquickly,andpeople’slifehaschangedgreatly.
Sample2:
Withtherapiddevelopmentofsociety,enormouschangehashappenedinpeople’slife.
Sample3:
Associetyprogressesremarkably,tremendouschangeshavetakenplaceinpeople’slife.
通过三个句子对比可知,其中“迅速”的三种表达方式,quickly最为平淡,rapid居中,remarkable最佳。
同样的,要表达“翻天覆地”的含义,tremendous就要比great或者enormous好的多,其他替换的词还有considerable,drastic,significant等等。
托福写作语言的优化需要不断的积累和练习,多记多练,不断扩充自己的语料库,唯有如此,*才会写的越来越漂亮,而很多考生之所以语言不到位,往往是因为平时不练笔,不积累语料,想单纯依赖“复杂单词,黄金句型”就拿高分的偷懒备考思路所导致的,这种错误的备考观点请大家一定要及时改正。
托福考试作文独立写作范文:
要想取得成功必须接受新观点
Tobeasuccessfulperson,onemustbeopentonewideasandwillingtochangehisorhermind.(160618大陆)
6月18日托福独立写作点睛:
题目大意:
要想取得成功,人们必须要接受新的观点并且愿意改变自己原有的观点。
此题目选择同意比较好写,在去想分论点时,有两种方式可以用:
第一种就是去想why,理由一:
接受新的观点可以更好地适应变化的环境;
理由二,接受新的观点可以与别人建立良好的关系。
第二种去拆分举例,拆分职业:
第一种职业IT行业的人;
第二种职业老师。
6月18日托福写作真题-独立写作
此次试题出现了A,B卷
A:
A/D:
Tobeasuccessfulperson,onemustopenuptonewideasandwillingtochangehisorhermind.
B:
Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:
peopleshouldbeopentonewideasandchangehisorhermindtobesuccessful.
A卷题目是绝对词类话题;
B卷题目为建议类话题/二选一话题).注意区别处理这两类题目。
以A卷题目为例:
处理此类*需要弱化绝对词,并给出其他合理的方式。
关于此题,可以按以下方式组织*:
1)开头段-主题段一(去绝对词做让步段处理,写我方的好处)-主题段二(要成功的因素1)-主题段三(要成功的因素2)-结尾段;
2)开头段-主题段一(优点一)-主题段二(优点二)-主题段三(优点三)-结尾段(小让步+综合其他可以使人成功的因素)。
范文参考一:
Underthecurrentsocietyfullofintensecompetitions,howtoachievesuccesshasneverfailedtoarousedeepconcernandinterestamongthegeneralpublic.Thereof,agooddealofaccomplishedbusinessmenandelitesarestrongbelieversoftheclaimthattobeasuccessfulperson,onemustbeopentonewideasandwillingtochangehisorhermind.Towardssuchacomplicatedissue,Iaminfavoroftheaboveclaimforthefollowingreasons.
Inthefirstplace,beingreceptivetonewideascanhelppeopletobetteradapttotheconstantlychangingenvironmentandthusbecomesuccessful.Asiscommonsense,nomatterwhatfieldsorareasyouareengagedin,changehasbecometheperpetualtopic,whichmeansthatwhatyouheldfirmlyontobeforemaybecomeoutdatedandevenmisleadingovernight.Inotherwords,onlythosepeoplewithopenmindtowardsnewthingscankeeppacewiththechangesoftimeandaremorelikelytoachievesuccess.Bycontrast,rejectinganynewideasandneverchangingonesmind,peoplewillbegraduallysurpassedorevenreplacedbyothercompetitors.AgoodcaseinpointisthecollapseofNokiaCompany,theoncemostfamouscellphonebrand.OnaccountofshowingnoacceptancetothenewoperatingsystemAndroid,theNokiahasannouncedbankruptcyandhasbeenacquiredbyMicrosoftCompany.Thesamelogiccanapplytoanyindividualswhoarestubborn.
Besidesthat,embracingnewideascanhelppeopletobuildharmoniousrapportwithmorepeople,leadingtothehigherlikelihoodofbecomingsuccessful.Morescrutinyhasmadeitconspicuousthatanattitudeofopen-mindednessisstronglycorrelatedtoonespopularityamongothers,especiallyinaworkteam.Theunderlyingreasonisthatanyonewhohasawillingnesstolistentonewthoughtstendstoleaveagoodimpressionandthereofgainshelporassistancefromotherswhenfacedwithtroublesinthepathtosuccess.Also,beingopen-mindedhelpsyouworkthroughinterpersonalorintra-teamconflictsthatarisewhenpeopleworkinclosequarters.Bycontrast,insistingononeownviewstubbornlyusuallynotonlybuildabarrierforestablishingthefriendshipbutalsoservesastheoriginofquarrelorconflictswithotherpeople.Putitanotherway,peoplewithoutaspiritoflisteningandcooperationhavedifficultyincompletinganyprojects,letalone,becomesuccessful.
Indeed,acceptingnewideasmaymakepeoplefeeluncomfortable,becausetheyareforcedtogetouttheircomfortzone.However,theabovereasoningdoesnotbeardeepanalysis.Toillustrate,itisanindisputablefactthatsuccessreliesonnothingbutinnovationdrivenbyconstantlytakinginoriginalandcreativeideasandthoughts.Consequently,factoringwhathasbeenmentionedabove,wecanconcludethatshowingacceptancetonewideasandchangingonesmindaccordinglyareofgreatnecessityforthesakeofachievingsuccess.
写作参考二:
Everyoneislongingforsuccess;
therefore,everyoneeagerlysearchesforeverymethodtoreachthatend.Havinganinclusiveandopenwoulddefinitelyserveasagoodpanaceaforeveryonewhowantstoachievesomethinginthelife.Nevertheless,itisnottheonlywaytowardone’sheyday,forone’ssuccessderivesfromthecombinedfactors,liketenacityandresilience.
Admittedly,amanwithanopenmindfornewideasishalfwayforsuccess,fortheseinnovativeideasandphilosophiesofferonewithanotheroutlookwhenfacingadeadlockordilemma.What’sthemostimportant,newideabringsaboutcreationtoourlife.Themodernsocietyhaswitnessedtherapidandpervasivechangesoftechnologiesalongwithsubtlesocialreforms.ItisthenewideasfromotherpeopleandotherplacesthatleadJamesDyson,theinventorifG-forcevacuumcleaner,toagreatsuccess;
itisembracingthenewmethodfromtheexcellentathletesthathelpsJimmyLicreatehisspecialset“JimmyLiJump”.Furthermore,changingourmindandlisteningtothenewideasfromothersisconducivetocooperatewithotherpeople.Amancannotsucceedwithouttheassistancefromothers.Anopenmindfornewideasandthoughtsareeasyforpeopletosharedifferentideas,therefore,itisbeneficialforcooperatingwithincertaingroupsorteams.Acooperativepeoplewouldcertainlygetmorehelp,thustosucceedinamoreearlierway.However,anopenmindforoutsideideasissurelytheonlywayforonetosucceed,fortherearealotofotherpeoplegainingsuccessthroughotherways!
Beingtenaciousandpersistentrepresentacontinuouseffortinone’sspecificcareer.Thesecrettohappinessishardworkandeffort,not“quick-fixes”.Greatideasonlycannotguaranteeone’seffortsandactions.Onlybythedown-to-eartheffortsandhardworkcanthefinalsuccessgained!
IfJamesDysondidnotexperimentforover5200timesafterhegotanewideafromothers,wewouldnothavewitnessedthebirthofthisnewandhighlyefficientvacuumcleaner.Therefore,tenacityandpersistenceprovideasurewaytoone’ssuccess.
Furthermore,apositiveandoptimisticattitudetowardsfailurecanalsoserveasafacilitatorforone’ssuccess.Alotofpeoplefailedbecausetheyfearedthenewchallengesorfearedtofailagain.Peoplewithnegativeattitudesmaybeloathtotakeactioneveniftheyembracenewideasfromothers.Apositivemindsetcanserveasacatalystforone’ssuccess.IfJamesDysondidn’tholdhopesforhisproductionpromotionandgiveupduringhisexperiment,wewouldhaveseenhisproductsprevailtheglobalmarket.Thus,asoundmindsetandpositiveattitudepropelsonetosuccess.
Inanutshell,asuccessfulpersonisnotmadejustinoneday.Alotoffactorscontributetoasuccessfulpeople,likenewideas,tenacityandapositivemind,tonamejustafew.Onlyinthiswaycanapersonexpectsuccessassoonaspossible!
政府保护自然环境应采取什么措施
Whatisthemostimportantactionforthegovernmenttotakefortheprotectionofenvironmentalproblems?
Fundresearchesonnewenergysourcessuchassolarandwindpower?
Protectforestsandnaturalwildlifespecies?
Passandenforcelawstoreducethepollution.
三选一类题目会给出三个选项A,B,C让学生去选择一个。
这种题的答题方法为开头段-正文段第一段B好-正文段第二段B的另一个优点-正文段第三段B比A好/A的缺点和B比C好/C的缺点-结尾段。
Whatoneofthefollowingisthemostimportantactionforthegovernmenttotakefortheprotectionofnaturalenvironment?
(1)fundresearchonnewenergysourcessuchassolarandwindpower;
(2)preservenaturalplacessuchasforestsandnaturalwildlifespecies.
(3)passandenforcelawstoreducethepollutionproducedbycompaniesandindustries
点睛:
对政府来说,要想保护自然环境,政府最应该采取哪项措施:
资助研究新能源,保护栖息地和动物,制定法规来减少公司的污染排放。
此题目为三选一的题目,波波提醒各位小伙伴,对于这样的题目,我们有两点要做到:
1.必须要清楚选出一个选项,2.三个选项在整篇*论述中务必都要提到。
只要能做到上述两点即可,所以三选一题目的写作结构非常灵活,下面是波波选择的一种写法,仅供参考。
Takingapanoromicviewofhumanhistory,wecanreadilyfindthatthenaturalenvironmentplaysanenormouslyimportantroleindetermingthefutureofeachandeverycountry.Giventhegreatsignificanceofcleanenvironment,thegeneralpublicaswellasthegovernorsbegintowonderwhichisthemostessentialactiontoprotecttheenvironment,amongfundingnewenergyresearch,preservingnaturalhabitatorenactingstrictlaws.Towardssuchalong-runningtug-of-war,Iaminclinedtoarguethatnationalgovernmentsshouldinvestfinancialsupportindevelopingnewenergysources.
Initially,spendingmoremoneyindiscoveringnewenergycanradicallysolvethevariousenvironmentalproblems.Asiscommonsense,thedeterioratingenvironmentistheresultoftheoverexploitationoffossilfuels,includingcoal,oilandnaturalgas.Tobespecific,numerouschemicalplantsusuallyburnthecoaltoprovidepowerformanufacturingallkindsofgoodsdesignedtosatisfythebasicneedsofthegeneralpublic.Asaresult,alargeamountsofindustrialwastesaredischargedtotakeatollonthenaturalenvironment.Also,anincreasingnumber
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