Online Shopping汇总Word格式文档下载.docx
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1.文章中长短句结合,每篇都有些精彩的恰当的长句,长句的使用时没有结构性的语法错误。
说长句恰当是指在写长句时要自然,不要为长而长,显得做作。
2.每篇都有一些亮眼的词和词语,我在以下文章用红色标识一些(不是全部),这些亮词可以提升文章的档次。
3.题目要求的三点(三个方面)都有谈到,要求的内容无缺失。
4.文章没有重大的语法错误(当然有些小的错误)。
OnlineShopping
Nowadays,withtheconsiderableimprovementininformationtechnology,thereisanincreasingtrendofonlineshopping.SomefamouswebsitessuchasTaoBao,Amazon,andAlibabaareattractingmoreandmorenetizens.
Thereasonswhyonlineshoppingissopopulararevarious.Firstly,itcan’tbedeniedthatit’sveryconvenient.Youjustneedtoapplyforanaccount,sitinfrontofyourcomputerclickingonthescreenandwaitforthemerchandisetobedeliveredtoyou.What’smoreonlinestoresprovidemorechoicesandwecancomparethepriceseasilywithouthangingaroundthestreets.Meanwhile,wecangetthemostfashionableinformationfromsomanywebsites.
However,aseverycoinhastwosides,thebadsidesofonlineshoppingcan’tbeignored.Forexample,maybetheclothesorshoesyouorderedarejustnotfityou.Ittakesalotoftroubletochangeandreturnthem.Sometimes,thequalityofthegoodsmaybefarfromyourexpectation.Worstofall,someevilguysusethiskindoftechnologytocheatonline.
AsfarasI’mconcerned,thereismuchofonlineshoppinglefttobeimproved.Ononehand,it’saneffectivewaytopreventthedisadvantagesifourgovernmentcancarryoutmoredetailedrulesaboutshoppingonline.Ontheotherhand,consumersoughttobecautiousenoughtoidentifywhetherthewebinformationisrealornot.Solongasbothmanufacturersandconsumersarekeptinorder,therearechancesinimprovingtheonlineshoppingenvironmentandguaranteetherightsofconsumers.
信科一班张梅玲10251001127
Onlineshoppinggainsitspopularitynowadays
法1梁佩玲(Lynn)10250701119
Withthedevelopmentandthepopularityofcomputers,onlineshoppinghasbecomehotandfashionable.Hereconsumershaveawiderangeofchoicesandbuyalmosteverythingtheyneed.
ShoppingontheInternethasalotofadvantages,ofwhichthemostimportantisperhapsitsconvenience.Peopledon’thavetowastealotofenergyandprecioustimetogooneshoptoanothertochoosethecommoditiestheywant.Thisisespeciallydesirabletothedisabledandthebusypeoplewhocannotgototheshopsinperson.Thegoodscomeinallshapes,sizesandcolors.Alltheyneedtodoistositinfrontofthecomputersandclick.Thecommoditiestheyorderwillbedeliveredtothemsoon.
However,shoppingonlinealsohasitsdisadvantages.Itisunsafeandnotreliable.Firstly,theconsumerscan’tseethegoodsortrythemonpersonally.Sometimes,therealgoodsmaynotbethesameaswhattheyhaveseenontheInternet.Inotherwords,thequalitycannotbeguaranteed.Secondly,someshopsarenotregistered.Oncecheated,youwillfindthatyouhavenowheretogotocomplain.Worsestill,youmayloseprivacywithyourbankaccountcodeavailableonthenet.
AsfarasI’mconcerned,theconvenienceandexcitementofonlineshoppingisbeyondalldoubts.Inthemeantime,wemustalwayskeepinmindthatcertaintrapsdoexist,sowe’dbettermakesurethesellersaretrustworthybeforebuying.Inaddition,weshouldalsoguardourselvesfromthepotentialhackerswhomightstealouraccountinformation.
民商法
(1)班冯迪心10250705152
Noonecandenythefactthatshoppingonlinehasbecomeafashion.OnlineshoppingisbecomingmoreandmorecommonallovertheworldincludingChina.However,likeanythingelse,onlineshoppinghasitsmeritsanddrawbacks.
Justasitsnameimplies,onlineshoppingistoconducttheshoppingactivitiesonline.Onlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages.Firstofall,youcangetbetterunderstandingabouttheproductsthatinterestyoujustthroughInternet.Thenonceyoudecidetobuyacertainproduct,youcanjustbuyitwithyour“E-wallet”andwithoutsteppingoutofyourhouse.It’stimesavingthatpeopledon’tneedtospendtimeshoppinginstores.Theonlythingpeoplehavetodoistowaitforthearrivalofthegoods.
Despitealltheadvantagesmentionedabove,peoplehavetotakeariskwhenpurchasingaproductinthevirtualworld.Youmaynotreceiveyourgoodsafterremittingmoney,oryoumayreceivegoodsthataremuchdifferentfromwhatyouhaveseenonthecomputerscreen.
Inmyopinion,weshouldbewisetoonlineshopping.Weoughttochoosesomemerchantswithgoodreputationwhenshoppingonline.Furthermore,aswearerealpeoplelivingintherealworld,it’sofgreatimportanceforustokeepabalancebetweenshoppingintherealstoresandinthevirtualones.
OnlineShopping
Nowadays,onlineshoppingisgrowingrapidly.ThankstothedevelopmentofInternetandadvancedelectroniccommerce,weareabletopurchasegoodswithouttakingastepoutofourhouse.Allwehavetodoissittinginfro
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