英语写作对比的方法文档格式.docx
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熟悉比较和对照写作方法的特点、模式及相关写作语块(词组、结构及句子);
难点:
训练学生对作文主题的思维拓展以及相关语言表达的总结。
二.使用比较和对照写作方法的一般是说明文与论说文,常见的比较对照有两种方式:
1.块状比较方式(blockmethod),先A后B,即A1,A2,A3...;
B1,B2,B3...。
2.逐点比较方式(point-by-pointmethod),AB交错,即A1,B1;
A2,B2;
A3,B3...。
范文一:
CountryLifeandCityLife
Itisreallyhardtosaywhichisbetterthantheother,citylifeorrurallife.Bothhavetheirmeritsandshortcomings.
Livinginthecityhasagreatmanyadvantages.First,youcanenjoyvariouskindsoffoods,bothforeignanddomestic.Second,therearemoreculturalactivitiesinthecity–youcangototheconcert,thetheatre,themoviesorthediscoclubafteraday’shardwork.Butcitylifehasmanyproblems,too.Theovercrowdedpopulation,trafficjam,industrialpollution,andthelackofunderstandingbetweenpeoplemayresultindiseaseandunhappiness.Livinginthecountry,however,youcanwatchthemagnificentsunriseandsunsetandlistentothebirdsinginginthetree.Ifyouwant,youcancertainlyhaveahugegardenwhenasmallgreenspaceseemsaluxuryinthecity.Inthecountry,youdon’thavesomucnworries.Youcanenjoythepleasureofworkbyplantingseedsintheearthandwatchingthemgrowintoflowersandfinallyintofruitsorfood.Butrurallifemaynotbethatperfect.Thingsaregoingsoslowlythatsometimesyoumayfeelthatyouareabsoluteleftbehindinsomeremotecornersoftheworld.Youmayagainmisstheparties,friendsandmoviesinthecity.
Likeanythingelse,countrylifeandcitylifehavetheiradvantagesanddisadvantages.Thebestsolutionmaybethatyouenjoypleasuresofbothlivesandgetridoftheirinconveniences.
范文二:
MiddleSchoolLifeandCollegeLife
Therearemanydifferencesbetweenmiddleschoolandthecollege.First,inmiddleschool,wehavetolistentowhattheteachersaysinclass,tounderstandthecontentofthetext.Butincollege,wemuststudybyourselvesbeforeclass.Ifnot,wecouldn'
tfollowtheteacher.Second,therearelotsofrulesinmiddleschool.Forexample,weshouldweartheuniform,thegirlsmusthavetheirhaircutshort,andwearenotallowedtomakeboy-
or
girlfriends.However,incollege,wehavemorefreedom.Wecanweartheclotheswelike.Andthegirlscouldhavelongbeautifulhair.Wearealsofreetomakeboy
girlfriends.Thethird,inthemiddleschool,wemuststudyfirst.Thatmeanswecoulddonothingbutstudy.Incontrast,wehavetodoeverythingbyourselvesincollege.Thatmeanswemustplanourtimecarefully.Therearealsootherdifferencesbetweenourschoollifeandourcollegelife.Wehavetolearntoadaptourselvestocollegelife.
三.写作步骤
1.写前阶段:
写作提纲
1)对两个对象或一个对象的两个方面进行比较与对照分析,找出相似点/不同之处。
如分析Onlineshopingorin-storeshopping(网络购物还是店内购
Advantages
Disadvantages
Onlineshopping
Convenient;
Cheap;
Alotofselections
Cheated;
Cannotseetheitemsinperson;
In-storeshopping
Personal,talk;
Knowthequality;
Goodforhealth
Expensive;
Time-consuming;
tiring
2.写作阶段:
利用相关资料,组织结构与内容
1)Usefulwordsandphrases:
比较:
like,similarly,likewise,inthesameway,inthesamemanner,equally.
对照:
bycontrast,onthecontrary,while,whereas,ontheotherhand,unlike,instead,but,conversely,differentfrom,however,nevertheless,otherwise,whereas,unlike,yet,incontrast.
2)Usefulexpressions
Ø
Justlikeacoinhastwosides,everytinghasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages,and…isnoexception.
Theadvantagefaroutweighthedisadvantages.
TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.
AmaybepreferabletoB,butAsuffersfromthedisadvantagesthat...
Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.
Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.
AandBhasseveralpointsincommon.
AbearssomeresemblancestoB.
However,thesameisnotapplicabletoB.
AandBdifferinseveralways.
Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.
ThesameistrueofB.
WonderingasAis,ithasitsdrawbacks.
ItistruethatA...,butthechieffaults(obviousdefects)are...
3)UsefulWritingPatterns
(1)块状比较模板:
模板一
Itisreallyhardtosaywhichisbetterthantheother,AorB.Bothhavetheirmeritsandshortcomings.
Ahasagreatmanyadvantages.First,….Second,….Third,….WonderingasAis,ithasitsdrawbacks.Firstofall,….Besides,….
BisquitedifferentfromBinmanyways.Itspositivesidesareasfollows.Firstly,….Sencondly,….Likeanytingelse,Bhasitsfaults,such
as….
Evidently,bothAandBhavetheirpositiveandnegativeaspects.Thebestsolutionmaybethatyouenjoypleasuresofthebothandget
ridoftheirinconveniences.
模板二
Thetopicof____(主题)isbecomingmoreandmore
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