复旦交大自主招生英语应试指导及真题详解第8讲作文写作技巧与注意事项Word格式.docx

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b.Language

2分:

条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分：

基本切题。

表达思想不清，连贯性差。

有较多的严重语言错误。

8分：

有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；

语言错误较多，其中有一些严重错误。

11分：

切题。

表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误

14分：

表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上没有语言错误，仅有个别小错。

注：

白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个独立的词而无法表达思想，给0分。

严重错误——语法错误

Therearemanyreasonscausedtheaccident.

Thedriverofthecarnoin.

Thelifeisbecominggooderandgooder.

Thatdayrainbigly.

Themanwhothroughthestreet

Thecarwhichinafastspeedhithim.

Igottheplacewherehappenedtheaccident.————————————————————————————————————————————

第1页

ourcitywouldhappenmanytraffic.

写作注意事项

1.审好题，想好再写，不要写了又划掉，也不要写完了发现字数不够有写，这样整篇

文章就不联贯了。

2.把握好文章的重心，一般“我的观点”应该是重心。

3.注意写作的格式——缩进式或齐头式。

4.拿不准的词、短语或用法应避免使用。

5.表达要清晰、简洁，不必一味追求结构的复杂而尽可能多的使用从句，这样文章会

显得很罗嗦。

如：

Theeconomyisdevelopingataspeedwhichisveryfast.

6.注意用词和搭配。

7.检查-s和-ed，尽量避免严重错误。

choiceofwords

1.ThreelevelsofEnglishwords

Englishnativewords（core）informal（oral）

FrenchorSpanishwords

LatinorGreekwords（academicwords）formal（written）

Examples

EnglishFrenchorSpanishLatinorGreek

askinquireinterrogate

breakseverseparate

fireflameconflagration

houseaboderesidence

kinglyroyalregal

manlymalemasculine

risemountascend

timeageepoch

IknowthatIamawarethat

IbelievethatIamconvincedthat

Ihaveagoodidea.agoodideaoccurstome.

causegiveriseto

Emphasizelayemphasison

Becauseofdueto,owingto

Stop,endcometoastop/end

Suddenlyallofasudden

oftenmoreoftenthannot

2.connotationofwords（Englishexplanation）

common,peasant,assassinate,gay,acquire,date,property,enemy,problem,issue

3.GeneralVsSpecificterms（overuseofgeneralterms）

beautiful,delicious,famous,

china’sEnglish

小康社会、缘分、丞相、风水、三个代表孔子、孟子、老子

容易用错的词

1.词性

lack,serve,contact,last,marry,concern,like

2.汉语影响

moreperfect,veryexcellent,returnback,repeatagain,goodmemorypower,listeningability,highqualitygoodslearntheknowledge

常见错误

（1）twopredicatesinonesimplesentence

EveryyearlotsoffamilyssitatthefrontofTVwaitthisgameafterhavedeliciousmeal.TherehavemanypeoplelikeSFG.

mymothercooksfoodisverydelicious.

（2）omissionandoveruseofBe

Nowdaypeople’slifelevelisarise.

manypersonarelikewatchSFGintheeve.

SFGwasappearedsince1984.

SFGislikedbymanypeople.

howfasttimewasgone!

SFGcandivideintoseveralparts.

weverybusy.

（3）comparativedegree

moreandmorebetter

becomegooderandgooder,

（4）conjunction

because….so

although….but

while

（5）IverylikeSFG.Veryhate

（6）Partofspeech

mostofwechinese,makemesurprise,

withthequickdevelopmentofeconomicandsocial,

Inmy’sopinion,IadvicetokeepSFG.

eatinggood,drinkinggood,playinggood;

goodplays,goodlook,gooduse;

Ithinkitduestothedevelopment,

Let’sanalysisanddiscoverythemainfactorsleadingthechanges.

Tomen,womenjustlikedclothes.theylikeitlikemelikeit.

twoweekspast

choose,choice,succeed,success,successful,die,dead,death

（7）choiceofwords

Thewholefamilyassembletohaveadinner.

congratulateSpringFestival,

abolish（stop,giveup）SFG,

sitbehindtheTVtolookSFG,

manypeoplefallinlovewithwatchingSFG.

wecanelectotherprogramstosee.

celebrateSFGwithbomb,

standintheshadow/shade

mosquitobite/sting

It’sagaymeeting/party

（8）Phrases

inallin;

onehand,anotherhand,thirdhand;

atonehand,atsecondhand,atlasthand;

inonehand,fromotherhand;

lastbutnotthelast,lastbutnotmost;

onmyopinion;

acoinhastwohands（coins）.Everythinghastwohands（coins）.

（9）Spelling

wecan’tcansle（cancer,cancle）it.

SFGiswatchedbyholeword.

happyness,

include（ing）SF,Everystudentincludemeenjoys

Poorpeoplemaybeveryangry（hungry）.

eatthesoap（soup）;

Benefitial

drived

dispite

Iwilladopttothecampuslife

联贯

1.并列：

and,aswellas

ontheonehand…ontheotherhand

foronething…..foranother

firstly….secondly….thirdly…finally

subsequently,then,thereafter,afterward,inthefollowing…

atfirst,initially,originally

atlast,eventually

2.递进：

moreover,

Furthermore,

Inaddition,

additionally

whatismore

Besides

apartfrom…

3.转折

But

Yet

however

Nevertheless

whereas

onthecontrary

Incontrast

4.结果

So

Therefore,

Thus

hence

asaresult（consequence）

consequently

5.原因

Because（of）

dueto

owingto

ontheaccountof

Inviewof

Thanksto

onthegroundsthat

6.假设

If…..

Giventhat

Providedthat

Unless