浙江高考英语新题型“概要写作”PPT文档格式.ppt

浙江高考英语新题型“概要写作”PPT文档格式.ppt

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（满分25分）词数词数少于少于4040的和的和多余多余8080的，的，从从总分中减去总分中减去22分分评分原则11、本题总分为、本题总分为2525分，按分，按55个档次给分。

个档次给分。

22、评评分分时时，先先根根据据所所写写概概要要的的内内容容和和语语言言初初步步确确定定其其所所属属档档次次，然然后后以以该该档档次次的的要要求求来来衡衡量量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。

确定或调整档次，最后给分。

33、词数少于、词数少于4040的和多于的和多于8080的，从总分中减去的，从总分中减去22分。

分。

评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：

（1）

（1）对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；

对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；

（2）

（2）应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；

应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；

（3）（3）上下文的连贯性；

上下文的连贯性；

（4）（4）对各要点表达的独立性情况；

对各要点表达的独立性情况；

Narration（记叙文）（记叙文）ExpositionExposition（说明文）（说明文）（说明文）（说明文）FormsofLiteratureArgumentation（议论文）议论文）Argumentation（议论文）议论文）TopicSupportingideasConclusion概要写作（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

（Para1）Gettingridofdirt,intheopinionofmostpeople,isagoodthing.However,thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.（Para2）Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.（Para3）Thoughthebeliefinthemeritofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWar.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea;

clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?

（Para4）Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,anAmericanimmunologist（免疫学家）,encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthelatterpositionisgainingsomeground.ThereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirtStep1:

Readtopicsentence:

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Para2:

Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.ExamplesofsomeEuropeancountries（Para3）Thoughthebeliefinthemeritofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWar.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea;

（Para4）Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,anAmericanimmunologist（免疫学家）,encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthelatterpositionisgainingsomeground.Step2:

MakeanoutlineTopic:

Thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirtsuppor-tingIdeas（Para2）（Para3）nowadays（Para4）Inthe16thcenturysince18thcenturyPeoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdiseasehasnolongerbeenregardedascleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealthencourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystemStep3:

RewritethesentencesinotherwaysThereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.different,mixed,various反义转换opinions,views,ideas同义词替换同义词替换Peoplesattitudestodirtvaryindifferenttimes.towards句型转换句型转换Peopleholddifferentopinionstowardsdirtovertime.Theattitudestodirtisnotalwaysthesame.Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease.Haveatry!

Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease.think:

believe,hold,consider,insist,argue,areconvincedthat.同义词替换同义词替换blockoutdisease:

prevent/protect/keepawayfromillness;

Onepossibleversion:

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