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thodsusedinthestudy.

◆Furthermore,anexplanationofwhytheauthorsdidthesevariousexperiments

shouldbeprovided.

3、对于研究设计的rationale:

Also,therearefewexplanationsoftherationaleforthestudydesign.

4、夸张地陈述结论/夸大成果/不严谨：

Theconclusionsareoverstated.Forexample,thestudydidnotshow

ifthesideeffectsfrominitialcopperburstcanbeavoidwiththepolymerformulation.

5、对hypothesis的清晰界定：

Ahypothesisneedstobepresented。

6、对某个概念或工具使用的rationale/定义概念：

Whatwastherationaleforthefilm/SBFvolumeratio?

7、对研究问题的定义：

Trytosettheproblemdiscussedinthispaperinmoreclear,

writeonesectiontodefinetheproblem

8、如何凸现原创性以及如何充分地写literaturereview:

Thetopicisnovelbuttheapplicationproposedisnotsonovel.

9、对claim,如A＞B的证明，verification:

Thereisnoexperimentalcomparisonofthealgorithmwithpreviouslyknownwork,soitisimpossibletojudgewhetherthealgorithmisanimprovementonpreviouswork.

10、严谨度问题：

MNQiseasierthantheprimitivePNQS,howtoprovethat.

11、格式（重视程度）：

◆Inaddition,thelistofreferencesisnotinourstyle.Itisclosebutnotcompletelycorrect.Ihaveattachedapdffilewith"

InstructionsforAuthors"

whichshowsexamples.

◆Beforesubmittingarevisionbesurethatyourmaterialisproperlypreparedandformatted.Ifyouareunsure,pleaseconsulttheformattingnstructionstoauthorsthataregivenunderthe"

InstructionsandForms"

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12、语言问题（出现最多的问题）：

有关语言的审稿人意见：

◆ItisnotedthatyourmanuscriptneedscarefuleditingbysomeonewithexpertiseintechnicalEnglisheditingpayingparticularattentiontoEnglishgrammar,spelling,andsentencestructuresothatthegoalsandresultsofthestudyarecleartothereader.

◆Theauthorsmusthavetheirworkreviewedbyapropertranslation/reviewingservicebeforesubmission;

onlythencanaproperreviewbeperformed.Mostsentencescontaingrammaticaland/orspellingmistakesorarenotcompletesentences.

◆Aspresented,thewritingisnotacceptableforthejournal.Therearepro

blemswithsentencestructure,verbtense,andclauseconstruction.

◆TheEnglishofyourmanuscriptmustbeimprovedbeforeresubmission.Westr

onglysuggestthatyouobtainassistancefromacolleaguewhoiswell-versedi

nEnglishorwhosenativelanguageisEnglish.

◆PleasehavesomeonecompetentintheEnglishlanguageandthesubjectmatte

rofyourpapergooverthepaperandcorrectit.?

◆thequalityofEnglishneedsimproving.

来自编辑的鼓励：

Encouragementfromreviewers:

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eneditedbecausethesubjectisinteresting.

◆Thereiscontinuedinterestinyourmanuscripttitled"

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PartB-AppliedBiomat

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◆TheSubmissionhasbeengreatlyimprovedandisworthyofpublication.

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Thepaperisveryannoyingtoreadasitisriddledwithgrammaticalerrorsandpoorlyconstructedsentences.Furthermore,thenoveltyandmotivationoftheworkisnotwelljustified.Also,theexperimentalstudyisshallow.Infact,Icantfigureoutthelegendsasitistoosmall!

Howdoesyoureffortcompareswithstate-of-the-art?

Theexperimentisthemajorprobleminthepaper.Notonlythedatasetisnotpublished,butalsothedescriptionisveryrough.Itisimpossibletoreplicatetheexperimentandverifytheclaimoftheauthor.Furthermore,almostnodiscussionfortheexperimentalresultisgiven.E.g.whytheauthorwouldobtainthisresult?

Whichcomponentisthemostimportant?

Anyfurtherimprovement?

theauthorshouldconcentratedonthenewalgorithmwithyourideaandexplaineditsadvantagesclearlywithamostsimplewords.

itisgoodconcept,butneedtopolishlayout,language.

Theauthorsdidagoodjobinmotivatingtheproblemstudiedintheintroduction.Themathematicexplanationoftheproposedsolutionsisalsonice.Furthermore,thepaperisaccompaniedbyanadequatesetofexperimentsforevaluatingtheeffectivenessofthesolutionstheauthorspropose.

Apparently，Obviously,Innovation,refine,Inmyhumbleopinion

如果仍然有需要修改的小毛病，一般你可以用

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如果是接受，你可以用

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