北京中考英语作文范文分类精华篇Word文件下载.docx
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北京中考英语作文范文分类精华篇Word文件下载.docx
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中英提示写作,话题类作文。
写作原则:
1231原则(1句问候,2句概括来信中的问题,3条建议及建议原因,1句祝福)
3.写作能力之外的得分因素:
字迹、分段
4.写作注意以下几点:
避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。
注意长短句交错,几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板长短句交错使用(注意:
应突出主题句;
长句子并非越长越好)。
【阅卷关注】
阅卷关注哪几点——
一、要点:
全部图片或问题(要点决定分/语言准确);
二、单词:
提示词语全用上+单词拼写(字数达标/标点符号和大小写/fourteen等数字);
三、语法:
高级(多用句型/适当加点谚语)+语法出错(三单、时态、避免Chinglish);
四、卷面:
书写规范(过渡词可使上下文连贯)+不要求漂亮但要求工整。
There’snodoubtthatparentshavegivenmealotsinceIwasborn.Withtheircare,Igrowuphappily.SoIthinkitisnecessarytodosomethingspecialforthemtoshowmygratitude.
Bothofmyparentslovemusic.SoitwouldbeagreatideatobuyawonderfulCDforthem.LastSunday,Iwenttoabookstoreandchoseoneamongthetop10.Whilewewerehavingdinnertogether,IplayedtheCD.Itwasbeautiful.Withgreatjoy,theygavemeawarmhugandabigsmile.Ifeltverysweet.
IwasreallyproudthatIdidsomethingformyparents.Theirsmileswerethebestencouragementforme.Imadeupmymindtodothingslikethismoreoften.
【04参考范文----帮助他人、志愿活动:
】
Ithinkhelpingothersisimportantandnecessary.Takingpartinvolunteerworkisoneofthegreatestwaystogiveahandtothosewhoneedhelp.AndIlikeitverymuch.
IrememberIhelpedtheoldpeopleintheoldpeople’shomelastSaturday.First,Icleanedtheroomandthewindowsforthembecauseitwasnotconvienientforthemtodosuchthins.What’smore,Itoldthemsomeinterestingstories,sangsomeEnglishsongsforthemandtheymovedtotears.Whenitwastimetosaygoodbye,Ihuggedthemandpromisedtoseethemagain.
Everyonemayhavetroubleinlifeandourlittlekindactcanmakeabigdifference
intheirlife.Infact,helpingothersishelpingourselves.Iwilldothesameinthefuturebecauseitcanbringmeandotherpeoplehappiness.
【05参考范文----喜欢的hobby、活动:
Itisgoodtolearnaboutyourschoolactivities.NowI’lltellyouaboutmine.
Atmyschoolwehavemanyfunactivitiestotakepartin.Wehaveswimming,basketball,badminton,andpingpong.Myfavoriteactivityisbasketball.Iplaywithmyfriendseverydayafterschool.Basketballisateamsportwhereteam-matespasstheballtoeachothertothrowitintoahoopforpoints.Theteamwiththemostpointsattheendofthegamewins.Inbasketballitisgoodtobetallbecauseitiseasiertoscorepoints.
Iliketoplaybasketballbecauseitisateamsportanditisalsoagoodwaytogetexercise.Basketballisalsoagoodgametolearnhowtoworkwellwithothers.
【06参考范文----Hobby、读书类:
IhavegreatinterestinreadingmagazinesbecauseIlikereadingmanykindsofarticlesinthem,suchstories,news,science,jokesandsoon.Thestoriesgivemelifelessons,thejokesmakemelaughandthenewskeepmeknowingwhathapensaroundme.Icangetlotsofinformationaswellasenjoyalotofbeautifulpicturesinthemagazines.
Ienjoyreadingmagazinesbecausetheycannotonlyhelpmestudybetterandbutalsomakemerelaxedandhappyeveryday.
【二、给予建议类】
(一句问候、两句问题)
第一段:
很高兴收到来信
针对问题回答或体谅别人的感受
主动提出给别人建议
第二段:
3条具体建议及原因
第三段:
提出希望和祝愿
开头句:
表达同情理解+主动提建议
IunderstandyourfeelingsbecauseIoncehadthesimilarproblemasyoudonow.
It’sverycommonforstudentstodosth.andmanystudentshavethesameproblemlikeyou.
Letme
offer
you
some
useful
advice.
Here’smyadvice.
Mysuggestionsareasfollows.
建议类句型:
•Youaresupposedtodo....
•You'
dbetterdo....
•Whynot/don'
tyoudo....
•It'
sagoodideatodo....
•IfIwereyou,Iwoulddo...
结尾句:
•IhopewhatIsaidcanbeofsomehelptoyou.
•Justhaveatry.I’mlookingforwardtohearinggoodnewsfromyou!
•Tryyourbest,andyou'
llmakegreatprogress!
【07学习类----参考范文:
DearLucy,
I’mveryhappytohearfromyou.Don’tworrytoomuch.It’sverycommonforstudentstodislikememorizingandmanystudentshavethesameproblemlikeyou.Here’smyadvice.
Firstofall,youhadbetterpreviewthenewlessonsandwritedownthedifficultpointsbeforelessons,whichcanmakeyoubecomeinterestedinwhattheteacherssayinclass.What’smore(Besides),youshouldlistencarefullyandtrytotakepartintheclassactivities.You’llfindthatEnglishandhistoryarenotasboringasyouthink.Lastbutnotleast,youalsoneedtoreviewthelessonsregularlyafterclass.Inthisway,youcanunderstandbetterandmemorizemorequickly.Ifyoustillfeelunhappy,whynothaveatalkwithyourteacherandaskforhelp?
Ireallyhopemyadvicecanhelpyoumakegreatprogresswithyourstudy.
Yours,
ZhangFang
【08解决与父母矛盾----参考范文:
DearAlice,
Asateenager,Imetthesameproblemasyou.ButnowIcangeton/alongbetterwithmymother.Herearesomeideasforyou.
Firstofall,whenfacingthiskindofsituation,it'
sveryimportantforyoutokeep
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