chemical-or-organic-farming概要写作NewPPT文件格式下载.ppt
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,Recently,however,scientisthavebeenfindingthatlong-termuseofthechemicalfertilizerscancausedamagetothelandand,evenmoredangerous,topeopleshealth.,Whataresomeoftheproblemscausedbychemicalfertilizers?
Findoutandunderlinethetopicsentencesofeachparagraph.,Para1.,Para2.,Step1Topicsentence,Para3.,Para4.,Withthesediscoveries,somefarmersandmanycustomersarebeginningtoturntoorganicfarming.,Organicfarmersalsousemanyothermethodstokeepthesoilfertile.,usinglanguage1Overthepasthalfcentury,_(use)chemicalfertilizers_(become)verycommoninfarming.2Recently,however,scientists_(find)thatlong-termuseofthesefertilizerscan_(对造成破坏)thelandand,evenmoredangeroustopeopleshealth.3Whataresomeoftheproblems_(cause)bychemicalfertilizers?
using,hasbecome,causedamageto,havebeenfinding,caused,2.Whatproblemscanbecausedbyusingchemicalfertilizers?
First,theycan_thelandby_thehelpfulbacteriaandpests.Theyalso_intheground,_inpeoplesbodiesand_cancerorotherillnesses.Inaddition,itusuallygrowstoofasttobefullof_.,Paragraph2,damage,killing,stay,buildup,leadto,nutrition,1.Whatisorganicfarming?
2.Whataretheadvantagesoforganicfarming?
3.Whatarethemethodstokeepthesoilfertile?
1.Organicfarmingisfarmingwithoutusinganychemicals.,Haha,weveturnedtoorganicfarming.,Paragraph3&
4,2.Whataretheadvantagesoforganicfarming?
Thefarmers_keepingtheirsoilrich,_diseaseand_theair,soil,waterandcrops_chemicals.,Paragraph3,focuson,reducing,keeping,freefrom,Themethodstokeepthesoilfertileusingnaturalwastefromanimalsasfertilizer.changingthekindofcropineachfield.plantingcropstousedifferentlevelsofsoil.plantinggrassbetweencropstoprevent,Thesamegoal:
_,togrowgoodfoodandavoiddamagingtheenvironmentorpeopleshealth.,Paragraph3&
4,1,2,3,4,para1.Anewdiscoveryofscientists.para2.Severalproblemscausedbyusingchemicalfertilizers.para3.Theadvantagesofusingorganicfarming.para4.Somemethodstokeepthesoilfertile.,Thestructureofthispassage,Topic(presentsituation),Problems,Advantages,Methods(conclusion),Thetypeofthearticleis_,exposition(说明文),Consolidation,overthepasthalfcenturybecommoninrecently=inrecentdayshave/hasbeendoingcausedamagetoavoiddoingsthbuildupleadtodoingsthinadditionmoreAthanBuse.as.make.richerin.everyfewyearspreferdoingsthprevent/stop.(from).,1.在过去的半个世纪里2在.有共同之处3最近4现在完成进行时(过去发生现在还在进行)5引起危害.6避免做某事7逐步建立,增进8导致9另外,除此之外,并且10与其说B不如说是A11用.作为.12使.更加富足13每几年14宁愿做某事15阻止某人做某事,overthepasthalfcentutybecommoninrecently=inrecentdayshave/hasbeendoingcausedamagetoavoiddamagingtheenvironmentforalongtimebuildupovertimeleadtocancerorotherillnessesinadditionmoreAthanBfocusonkeep.freeofuse.as.make.richerin.everyfewyearspreferdoingsthprevent/stop.(from).carryaway,1.在过去的半个世纪里2在.有共同之处3最近4现在完成进行时(过去发生现在还在进行)5引起危害.6避免危害环境7很长一段时间8逐步建立,增进9随着时间10导致癌症或其他的疾病11另外,除此之外,并且12与其说B不如说是A13使聚焦于14使.免于.15用.作为.16使.更加富足17每几年18宁愿做某事19阻止某人做某事20带走,Whatisagoodsummary?
概要写作评分标准第五档(2125points):
1.理解准确,涵盖所有要点2.准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇3.完全使用自己的语言。
(60-80W)4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使概要结构紧凑,contents(内容),languageskills(语言),structure(结构),Step1:
Step2:
Step3:
Step4:
找出主题句或关键信息,忽略具体事例,Howtowriteagoodsummary?
Conclusion,灵活运用语言,关键信息改编,使用自己语言,添加有效连接成分,使概要结构紧凑,读懂文章大意,近义词替换,改变主语,改变句式,使用简单句型,少使用定语从句,而用非谓语动词结构做定语,Para1:
Recently,however,scientistshavebeenfindingthatlong-termuseofthechemicalfertilizerscancausedamagetothelandand,evenmoredangerous,topeopleshealth.,主语,topicsentence,概要写作难点,Howtoexpressthekeypointsbyusingyourownwordsproperly?
(如何灵活诠释,规避抄袭的嫌疑),谓语,近义词替换,Recently,however,scientistshavebeenfindingthatlong-termuseofthechemicalfertilizerscancausedamagetothelandand,evenmoredangerous,topeopleshealth.,Inrecentdays,scientistshavediscoveredthatusingchemicalfertilizersforalongtimecancausedamagetothelandandalsopeopleshealth.,inrecentdays,discovered,usingforalongtime,Whataresomeoftheproblemscausedbychemicalfertilizers?
改变句式,Therearesomeoftheproblemscausedbychemicalfertilizers.,First,theydamagethelandbykillingthehelpfulbacteriaandpestsaswellastheharmfulones.Chemicalsalsostayinthegroundandundergroundwaterforalongtime.Thisaffectscropsand,therefore,animalsandhumans,sincechemicalsgetinsidethecropsandcannotjustbewashedoff.Thesechemicalsinthefoodsupplybuildupinpeoplesbodiesovertime.Manyofthesechemicalscanleadtocancerorotherillnesses.Inaddition,fruit,vegetablesandotherfoodgrownwithchemicalfertilizersusuallygrowtoofasttobe
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