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对比观点型英语作文

对比观点型英语作文

IsitNecessarytoAttendTrainingClasses?

1、现在社会上有各种各样的培训班

2、有些人认为有必要参加课外培训班，有些人则认为没有必要

3、你的观点

●审题概述●这是一篇主要论述对社会上各类培训班看法的文章。

第一段，概述各种各样培训班的状况。

第二段，论述人们对参加课外培训班的不同看法。

第三段，重点阐述你对此的看法。

Allacrossthecountryagreatdiversityofcustom-madeclassesaremushrooming,inwhichspecialtrainingisprovidedconcerningcomputerskills,arts,sports,andotherextracurricularspecialitieslikemathsandwriting.Amongthemlanguagecrashcoursesforvarioustests,suchasCET,BEC,TOFEL,IELTS,GREandsoforth,areespeciallynoticeableforitswiderangeandhighattendancerate.

Someconsideritadvisabletoattendsuchclasseswhileothersbelieveitunnecessary.Theformerarguesthatit’sfarmoreeffectivetocommandthesespecialskillswiththehelpofanexperiencedtrainerthantoworkatthemontheirown.Theyareconvincedthatthesetrainingclassescanmakeupforwhatisnottaughtinschool,hencemorecompetitiveedgeovertheirpeers.Thelattergroupofpeople,nonetheless,criticizeitasasheerwasteofresources.Theywarnthatthequalityofmosttrainingcoursesisquestionable,astheyaremarketedtogetmoneyoutofourpocketratherthaninsertknowledgeintoourhead.

AsfarasIamconcerned,alittlebitofsuchspecialtrainingdoesusnoharm,buttoomuchofitcanonlyprovetobecounter-productive.Anyhow,thedeprivedfreetimecanbebetterinvestedinrecreationatweekends,talkingtoanoldfriend,orsimplyenjoyingalong-overduevacation.

◇第一段思路点评：

第一句综述社会上提供知识、技能服务的各类培训班雨后春笋般兴起，第二句例举语言速成课程特别火爆。

◇语言点提示：

（1）agreatdiversityof各种各样的

（2）mushrooming迅速扩散、增加

（3）languagecrashcourses语言速成课程

◇第二段思路点评：

先用一个对比句式摆出两种不同的观点，再分别详述他们的看法。

◇语言点提示：

注意连接词语while，theformer，they，thelattergroupofpeople等的使用，强化

了上下文之间的连贯性。

◇第三段思路点评：

辩证地论述自己对参加各类培训班的看法。

◇语言点提示：

（1）asfarasIamconcerned我认为，就我而言

（2）counter-productive适得其反的、事与愿违的

CampusLife

1、有的大学生认为大学生活是丰富多彩，充实的；

2、有的大学生对校园生活不满意；

3、你理想中的大学生活是什么样的？

谈谈你的感受。

Earlyinseniorhighschool,welongedtobeenrolledinauniversity.Nowthedreamhascometrue.Buthowdowecollegestudentslikeourcampuslife?

Certainly,somerelishit,findingitcolorfulandrewarding.Besidesstudy,theyspendconsiderableamountoftimeimprovingthemselvesinvariousaspect.Yetothersdonotthinkmuchoftheircollegelife,thusdonotbenefitasmuch.Intheireyes,theuniversityisjustabiggerhighschool.Theonlydifferenceisthattheyhavemoretimeattheirdisposalwithoutparentslookingovertheirshoulder.

Astome,collegelifeisidealifonlyIhaveabundantbookstoread,somebosomfriendstokeepmecompany,acoupleofconscientiousprofessorstoinstructme,andaneasyaccesstotheInternet.

UniversityStudent’sInnovativeUndertaking

1、在校大学生创业有助于增加学生的社会实践经验

2、在校大学生的主业是学习，创业会耽误正常的学习

3、你的看法

Nowmanyuniversitystudentstryto①setuptheirownbusinessesduringtheircollegestudy.Somestudentsstartupahi-techcompany,somedealinsometradingbusiness,othersarebusydoingsomepart-timejobs.

Tosuchphenomena,differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Somepeoplethinkstudentscan②reapalotbenefitsfromtheinnovativeundertaking,becausestudentscangetalotofexperiencereallyusefulintheirfutureworkorstudy.Andtheycanimprovethemselvesbycommunicatingwithallkindsofpeople,solvingdifferentproblemsthey③encounter.

Buttherearepeoplewhoholdadifferentpoint.Intheiropinion,students’jobistostudyhard,innovativeundertakingmaytakeupalotoftime,whichhasabadeffectontheirstudy.What’smore,somepeopleoutsidethecampusareevil,thoseuniversitystudentsmaygetintotroubleordifficultsituations.

AsIunderstand,innovativeundertakingisgoodforus,butweshouldnotgiveupourstudyatthesametime.Afterall,wecan④amounttonothinginthebusinessworldwithoutthehelpofknowledge.

Students’RatingofTheirTeachers

1、学生给老师打分已经普遍；

2、人们对其持不同态度；

3、我的看法。

Nowadays,ithasbecomeascommonincollegesanduniversitiesforstudentstogradeteachersasforteacherstogradestudents.Insomeuniversitiesstudents’ratinghasevenbecometheonlysourceofinformationonteachingeffectiveness..

This,however,hascausedgreatcontroversy.Someareinfavoroftheratingsystem,Theyholdthatsincestudentsattendtheteachers’classeseveryday,theyshouldhavetheiropinionabouttheirteachers’effectiveness.Others,onthecontrary,arestronglyagainstit.Theybelievethatthereismuchmoretoteachingthanwhatisshownonstudents’ratingforms.Studentsshouldnotbeexpectedtojudgewhetherthematerialstheyuseareuptodateorhowwelltheteacherknowsaboutthesubject.Thesejudgmentsrequireprofessionalknowledge,whichisbestleftfortheteachers’colleagues.

Ithinkstudents’ratingoftheirteachersisnecessary,butitshouldbeconductedinawaythatcanreallyshedmeaningfullightonteachers’performance.Insteadofratingtheteachers’knowledgeonthesubject,studentsshouldbeaskedtoestimatewhattheyhavelearnedinacourse,andtoreportonsuchthingsasateacher’sabilitytocommunicatewithstudents,hisorherrelationshipwithstudents,andhisorherabilitytoarousestudents’interestinthesubject.

ShouldTeachersBeEvaluatedbyStudents

1、有人赞成学生评教

2、也有人认为学生评教弊大于利

3、“我”的看法

Thatstudentsevaluateteachersisbecomingacommonpracticeinmanyuniversities,thoughtithasgivenrisetoquiteafewcontroversies.

Thosewhoadvocateitinsistthatevaluationbystudentsisthemostdirectfeedbackthathelpsteachersknowtheneedofstudentsandimprovetheirteachingperformance.What’smore,itoffersstudentsagoodopportunitytobeinvolvedintheteachingprocess,whichgivesthemasenseofparticipation.

However,peoplewhoobjecttoitarguethatstudents’assessmentplacesteachersundergreaterpressure.Theybelievethatmanyteachers,eagertopleasestudents,willbehesitanttocriticizethemwhenitisnecessary.

Asforme,Isidewiththesupportersofsuchevaluation.Ibelieve,withstudentsasevaluators,schoolscandevelopeffectiveassessmentsofteachersandtheteachingquality.

acommonpractice普遍的做法giveriseto导致，引发

controversy争论advocate倡导

objectto反对sidewith支持

asenseofparticipation参与感behesitanttodosth.犹豫…

TheTeacher-StudentRelationship

1、好的师生关系有益于学生的发展

2、不良的师生关系有害于学生的发展

3、我认为……

Agoodteacher－studentrelationshipisab1etoeffective1yfurtherthestudenttoahigherlevelinstudy.Theteacherwithpatienceandunderstandingencouragesthestudentinsteadofpushingorforcinghim.Therelationshipofthissortmakeslearningsoenjoyableandfunnythatthestudentwouldworkhardwillingly.

However,abadrelationshipseriouslyweakenstheachievementofteaching.Itdiscouragesthestudentfrom1earning,leavinghimwithawrongandnegativeattitudetowardsstudying.Thus,teachingalsobecomesanunpleasanttask,whichformsaviciouscycle.

AsIseeit,therelationshipbetweenateacherandastudentshouldbeattachedmuchimportanceto.Agoodrelationshipmakestheteacher’sjobworthwhilewhileabadoneill-affectsthestudent’sdevelopment,eventotherestofhislife．

ONCET-4

1、有人认为大学英语四级考试应该停止；

2、另一些认为大学英语四级考试可以继续；

3、你的看法。

Asweallknow,CET-4hasbeenonforalmost15years.IthaspromotedthecollegeEnglishteaching.ButsomepeoplethinkthatCET-4shouldbestopped.Foronereason,theythinkCET-4hasfinisheditsfunctiontopromotethecollegeEnglishteaching.Foranotherreason,CET-4hasbeguntohindertheeffectiveteachingofcollegeEnglish,becauseteachersandstudentsjustpayattentiontotheexam,thusignoringthepracticalabilityofEnglishasalanguage.Moreover,becauseofCET-4,lotsofbookshasbeenpublishedaimlessly,whichisalsoharmfultothestudentsinthelongrun.

ButsomeotherpeoplealsothinkthatCET-4shouldgoonasusual.TheythinkifCET-4iscancelled,teachersandstudentswillbepassiveinteachingandlearningEnglish.TheyalsothinkthatCET-4canstillactasacriteriontoevaluatetheteachers'teachingandthemanagementofacollegeoruniversity.

Inmyopinion,IthinkweshouldgoonwithCET-4,butweshouldtakearightviewonit.Weshouldnotpayallourattentiontothepreparationfortheexam,instead,weshouldtrytoreformourteachingandlearningtoexceedthelevelofCET-4.

LivingaloneorLivingwithRoommates

1、有人认为大学里应独自生活；

2、另一些认为大学里应与别人同住；

3、你的看法。

　　Nowadays,therehasappearedaheateddiscussionamongthecollegestudentsastowhethertheyshouldlivealoneoutsidethecampusorlivetogetherwithotherroommatesinthestudents’dormitory.Opinionsaredividedoverthematter.

　　ThosewhoareinfavorofLivingalonemaintainthatitisveryconvenienttolivebythemselves.Theycanenjoyabsolutefreedominaroomoftheirown.Theycanhavetheirowntimetablewithoutdisturbingothers.TheyarealsofreetoequiptheroomwithapersonalcomputersothattheycanhaveeasyaccesstotheInternet.

　　Butothersarguethatlivingwithroommateshasattractionsofitsown.Withseveralstudentssharingthesameroom,eachperson’sexperiencescanbegreatlyenriched.Theycanlearnalotfromtalkingtooneanother.Bylearningtotoleratethedifferencesbetweenindividuals,theycanbecomemoremature.

　　AsfarasI’mconcerned,IprefertolivewithroommatesbecauseIlovethefeelingofbelonging.Besides,itisalotcheapertoliveinadormthantorentaapartmentoutsidethecampus.

KnowledgeandDiploma

1、目前社会上存在这样一种说法：

文凭越高越吃香；

2、而有些人则认为文凭不等于知识；

3、你的观点。

Itisgenerallybelievedthatahighdiplomaguaranteesapromisingfuture.Somepeopleidentifyhighdiplomaswithprofoundknowledgeandexceptionalcompetence.Companiesalsotendtoemphas