高分作文常用连接词.docx
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高分作文常用连接词
高分作文常用连接词
1.表层次
First,firstly,tobeginwith,inthefirstplace,second,secondly,tostartwith,still,furthermore,third,thirdly,what’smore,lastbutnotleast,also,andthen,nextbesides,andequallyimportanttoo,moreover,besides,inaddition,finally
2.表转折
Although,though,yet,atthesametime,but,despitethefactthat,evenso,incontrastneverthelesseventhoughontheotherhandotherwiseinsteadstillregardless
3.表因果
Thereforeconsequentlybecauseof,forthisreason,thus,hence,dueto,owingto,so,accordingly,thanksto,onthisaccount,since,as,onthataccount,inthisway,for
4.表递进
Furthermore,moreover,likewise,whatismore,besides,also,notonly…butalso…
5.表举例
Forexample,forinstance,foronethingthatistoillustrate
6.表解释
Asamatteroffact,franklyspeaking,inthiscase,namely,inotherword
7.表总结
Insummary,inaword,thus,ashasbeensaid,inbrief,inconclusion,inotherwords,toconclude,finally,insimplerterms,inshort,onthewhole,toputitsimply,inall,therefore,tosummarize.
8.表强调
Ofcourse,indeed,surely,asamatteroffact,aboveall,mostimportant,inparticular,thatistosay,certainly,infact,anyway,inthiscase,naturally,obviously,nodoubt,actually,clearly
9.表比较
Incomparison,likewise,however,similarly,equally,inthesameway,unlike
10.表时间
Afterawhile,afterward,andthen,presently,atlast,simultaneously,atlength,atthattime,since,sofar,eventually,finally,subsequently,then,further,thereafter,inthefirstplace,inthepast,untilnow,meanwhilelately.
图表作文
1.图表类型
表格TABLE(每个后面都是配有原图的这个可以在WORD文档中做出这些图表来的,请注意每一个都要添置图样这样利于你的PPT教学)
柱状图BARCHART
饼状图PIECHART
坐标曲线图GRAPH
2.图表作文的写作步骤:
根据图表的要求一般可以分三段来写
第一段大体描述出图表反映的总的情况
第二段是对数据进行比较和分析,并做出归纳,找出变化的原因和结果
最后一段是写出自己的结论和建议
3.例文
Averagenumberofhoursofastudentspendsonthecomputerperweek
a.图所示为1990年1995年2000年某校大学生使用计算机的情况,请描述变化
b.请说明发生这些变化的原因(可以从计算机的用途、价格、或社会发展等方面加以说明)
c.你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。
图略
Asthebarchartshows,theaveragenumberofastudentinacertainuniversityspentonthecomputerperweekincreaseddramaticallyduringtheyearsof1990to2000.asearlyas1990,astudentonlyspentonehouronaverageonthecomputereachweek.Thenfiveyearslater,thenumberincreasedfourtimes.Finallyintheyear2000,anaveragestudentwassittinginfrontofthecomputerscreenforasmanyastwentyhourseveryweek.
Severalfactorscontributetothesharpincreaseintheamountoftimeemployedincomputeruse.First,thecomputerhasvarietyofapplicationsnowadays.Also,withthedevelopmentofsociety,computerskillshavebecomeamustforemployment.Finally,thegraduallyloweredpriceofcomputersmakesitpossibleforthecomputertofinditswaytothecommonhome.Allthisresultsintheboomofcomputeruse.
However,thecomputermayalsocausesomeproblems.Thecomputer,inmyopinion,maybeaddictive,theeffectofwhichisnotonlyphysical,butalsomental,turningthestudentinhumanaswellasweak.Somyprincipleistousethecomputer,butdonotoverdoit.
4.图表作文常用词组和句型
a.文章开头
Accordingtothetable/chart/graph/figureswecanseethat…
Asisshownin
}thetable/chart/graph/figuresthat…
Ascanbeseenfrom
Thetable/chart/graph/figuresshowsthat…
Itcanbeseenfrom
Wecanseefromthetable/chart/graph/figuresthat…
Itisclearfrom
Itisobviousfrom
b.数据的描述
上升:
increase,rise,goup,grow,boom,beontherise/increase
下降:
decrease,drop,fall,godown,
稳定:
remainsteady/stablefrom…to…
Thereislittle/hardlyany/nochangeinthenumberof(carssold)from…to…
/between…and…
达到最高点:
(themonthlyprofit)peakedin(December)/reachedahighpoint
降到最低点:
(thefigures)reachedthebottom/alowpoint
c.表变化速度和程度的形容词和副词
Slow,slight,gradual,steady,quick,fast,rapid,significant,vast,dramatic,sharp
Thenumberofincreaseddramatically/rosegradually/fellsharplyfromJunetoDecember.
Therewasarapid/significant/slightincrease/dropinthenumberof…from…to…
5.例文2
Studythefollowingtablecarefullyandbaseyourcompositionontheinformation
giveninthetable.
a.statethechangesinpeople’sdietinthepastfiveyears;
b.givepossiblereasonsforthechanges.
c.Drawyourownconclusions
图略也是一个表格
ChangesinPeople’sDiet
Ascanbeseenfromthetable,greatchangestookplaceinpeople’sdietfrom1986to1990.thecompositionofgrain,fruitandvegetablesdecreasedyearbyyearwhilethatofsomehigh-energyfood,suchasmilkandmeat,increasedsteadily.
Whyweretherechangedinpeople’sdiet?
Thereweretwomajorreasons.First,peoplecouldaffordtobuymoreexpensivefoodwithbetternutritionbecauseoftheimprovementoftheirlivingstandards.Second,peoplepaidmoreattentiontothequalityoftheirdiet,becausetheyknewitwasofgreatbenefittheirhealthtoeatinascientificway.Therefore,theyweretryingtheirbesttoimprovethestructureoftheirfood.
Fromtheabove,wecanseethatpeople’slivingstandardimprovedgreatlyinthefiveyearsbetween1986and1990sinceourcountryhadbeenopenedtoinvestment,tradetechnicalandeconomiccooperationwithothercountriesonthebasisofequalityandmutualbenefit.Wecanalsoexpectthattheirlifeissuretobemoreprosperousintheyearstocome.
6.例文3
Directions:
studythegraphbelowandwriteacompositionofabout120wordson“FireCausesinLondonintheyear2002”.Yourcompositionshouldbebasedontheinformationgiveninthegraph.
Yourcompositionshouldbein3paragraphs:
a.Thefirstparagraphintroducesthecauses
b.Thesecondparagraphreportstheinformationgiventhechart
c.Thethirdparagraphconcludesthecompositionbygivingsomesuggestions
此为一个饼状图略
FireCausesinLondonintheyear2002
FireisoneofthemostterriblekillersinLondon,asinothercitiesoftheworld.Ascanbeseenfromthechartabove,carelesssmokers,defectiveinsulationsandchildrenplayingwithmatchesarethethreemajorcausesoffiresinthatcity.
Intheyear2002,manyfireaccidentstookplaceinLondon.Smokerswerethebiggestcauseofall,whichaccountedfor50%ofthefires.Anothermajorfactorwaschildrenplayingwithmatches.Theywereresponsiblefor37.5%ofthefireincidents.Another12.5%ofthefiresresultedfromdefectiveinsulation.
Fromthechart,wecanconcludenomatterwhatthetypeoffirewas,carelessseemstobetherootcause.Therefore,smokersshouldbeadvisedtobemorecarefulwiththecigaretteends.Besides,weneedtokeepaclosereyeonourchildrenandwarnthemofthedangersofplayingwithmatches.Workersshouldalsobeinstructedtotakeagoodcareofinsulation.
提纲式作文
提纲式作文是历年四、六级考试中最常见的题型。
它要求考生根据给出的题目和提纲,确定文章的中心思想,然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开论述,表达提纲的主旨。
它的优点是提纲既体现了文章的层次,又规定了各段大体的内容,为考生提供了一条思路,稍加思考、计划、整理就可成文。
但缺点它的限定性较大,不理解提放所展现的内容或词汇,就会感到难以下笔。
一、写作步骤和技巧:
1.写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,认清题目和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、内容以及问题。
即对文章总体的把握
2.每一个提纲可以作为文章的一个段落层次(全文3-5段为佳),关键是将给定的提纲转化为主题句。
如果提纲知识对一文章的提示和概括,不是主题句,这学要根据提纲的性质写出完整的、体现提纲主旨的句子,使之成为主题句
3.然后围绕主题句进行扩展,运用材料支持主题句。
材料可以是事实、例证、亲身经历、名人名言、谚语警句等。
应当注意的是,所选材料要与文章的主题相符,能充分说明问题。
在有多个例证的段落中,还要注意各个例证之间的连贯性。
二、审题和构思
MyViewonJob-hopping
a.有些人始终喜欢从事一种工作,因为……
b.有些人喜欢经常换工作,因为……
c.我的看法
显而易见,这是一道提纲式的作文题。
可以通过以下审题和构思过程完成这篇作文:
1.分析题目和提纲可知,要写出“不换工作“的原因,然后给出自己的看法,重点是原因和看法。
2.根据提纲,文章可分三段,第一段是“喜欢做一种工作的“的原因;第二段写出”喜欢经常换工作“的原因;第三段”我的“看法。
根据以上分析,可以把提纲转换为主题句如下:
★somepeopletendtosticktotheirpositionallthetime
★somepeoplearedifferent.Theyareinthehabitofjob-hopping.
★asfarasIamconcerned,Iamnotinfavorofconstantjob-hopping.
3.以材料支持各段主题句。
第一段的材料可以是:
喜欢那份工作的各种原因:
有发展前途、工资高等;第二段经常“跳槽”的原因:
不能施展自己的才能,谋求更高的收入等;第三段也要说明原因,并总结归纳,圆满结尾。
三、参考范文:
MyViewonJob-hopping
Somepeopletendtosticktotheirpositionsallthetime,astheythinkthelongeroneworksinaparticularfield,themoreskillfulonewillbeatit.Somehavebeenteachersalltheirlives.Somedevotealltheirenergytoscientificresearch.Suchpeoplelovetheirworkandturnouttobespecialistsintheirownfields.Theyareusuallyhighachievers.
Somearedifferent.Theyareinthehabitofjob-hopping,fortheyalwaysgoafterwhatisnewandstimulating.Theyneverseemcontentwiththeirpresentsituations.Theyliketomeetmorepeople,makemoremoneyandnewacquaintances,sotheyhopfromjobtojob.
AsfarasIamconcerned,Iamnotinfavorofconstantjob-hopping.Ibelieveinafamousproverb,“Arollingstonegathersnomoss.”Iwanttobeprofessionallystrong.AndIrespectthosewhodevotethemselvestotheiraffectionatejobsthroughouttheirlife.
四、四六级写作中常见的写作模式
1.对立观点式(92/01,92/12,95/01,96/01,98/06,99/06,2000/06)
A有人认为X是好事,为什么?
B有人认为X是坏事,为什么?
C我的看法
模式1
Somepeoplebelieve(argue,recognize,think)that观点1because…Butotherpeopletakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlybelievethat观点2.Asforme,Iagreetotheformer/latteridea.
Thereareadozenofreasonsbehindmybelief.Firstofall,论据1.
Moreimportantly,论据2.
Mostimportantofall,论据3.
Insummary,…
OrFromabove,wecanpredictthat
模式2
PeopleholddifferentviewsaboutX.somepeopleareoftheopinionthat观点1,whileotherspointsoutthat观点2.AsfarasIamconcerned,theformer/latteropinionholdsmoreweight.
Foronething,论据1.
Foranother,论据2.
Lastbutnotleast,论据3.
Toconclude,总结观点。
OrFromabove,wecanpredictthat预测.
2.批驳式观点
A.一个错观点。
B.我不同意。
Manypeoplearguethat错误观点。
Bysayingthat,theymean对这个观点的进一步解释。
Theremightbesomeelementoftruthinthesepeople’sbelief.Butifweconsideritindepth,wewillfeelnoreservationtoconcludethat正确的观点。
Thereareanumberofreasonsbehindmybelief.(以下参照上文的写法)。
3.社会问题现象式(93/01)
A.一个社会问题或现象及产生的原因
B.对社会和我们的生活的影响
C.
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