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关于建议信的英语作文
请你代表你班给校长写一封信,反映一下你校食堂的几点问题,以引起学校重视,并针对问题提出两条合理建议。
问题包括:
1.菜价昂贵,菜市单一;2.排队时间长,浪费午休时间;3.味道不佳,浪费现象严重。
注意:
1.词数不少于120;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:
食堂canteenDearPrincipal,
Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!
Yours,LiHua
作文:
DearPrincipal,
Somestudentsthinkthepricesofthedishesaretoohighandthatthechoicesaretoolimited.Anotherconcernisthatthetimespentinwaitingissolongthatwehavelesstimetohavearest.Meanwhile,somestudentsthinkthatthetasteofthefoodisawful,whichleadstoalotofwaste.thepricesbemorereasonableandthechoicesofdishesbemorevarious.需注意的词汇、表达:
1.deliciouswaitingtaste(n.味道)tasty(adj.可口的)cook(n.厨师)cooker(n.炊具)
price价格
2.lower/bringdowntheprice降低价格3.atalower/reasonableprice以较低的价格4.varietiesofdishes种类多样的菜品5.Foronething,…….Foranother,……
6.makesb(not)dosth
7.wait/standinline/inaqueueforalongtime8.Thekindsoffoodare.表达食堂出现的问题:
9.Thepricesofdishesaresohighthatmanyofuscan’taffordthem.
10.Therearesofewdishestochoosefrom,whichisfarfromsatisfactory./whichcan’tsatisfyour
needs.
11.Ittakesussomuchtimetostandinline,whichdecreasesourtimeofrestatnoon.12.Thefoodinthecanteendoesn’ttaste.
Thetasteoffoodinthecanteenisn’t
13.Thefoodinthecanteentastessobadthatalotoffoodisleftandwasted14.It’sawasteoftimetostandinlineforalongtime.
15.Thefoodinthecanteentastessobad,whichleadstoaseverephenomenonofwastingfood.16.Inthelongrun,it’sbadforourhealthandstudy.
17.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitwillinfluenceoursleepintheafternoon.表达提出的建议:
18.Improvingthetasteofthefoodisalsoagoodsolutiontotheproblems.19.Ithinkit’snecessarytoprovidemorekindsoffood.20.It’shightimethatwetookmeasurestosolvetheproblems.
Soit’shightimeforustotakemeasures
21.Tosolvetheproblems,Ithinkthecanteenshouldsetupanewfigure(形象)andimprovethe
presentconditiontosatisfythestudents’needs.
22.Wehopethecanteencanprovideuswithdishesofahighqualityatareasonableprice.23.Thecanteenshouldopenmorewindowssothatweneedn’twaitsolong.
24.AsfarasI’mconcerned,thecanteenshouldattachimportancetothequality.What’smore,
differentkindsoffoodshouldbeprovided.
25.Measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.
建议模板:
Dear….,
I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto…….(引出).Hereareafewsuggestions.Firstofall,itisimportanttodosth.Then,italsohelpstodosth.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatodosth.
建议句型积累:
1.Manywayscancontributetosolvingtheproblem,butIthinkthefollowingmaybethemost
effectiveones.
2.I’dliketomakesomesuggestionson…….3.It’sofgreatimportanceforsbtodosth.
It’snecessaryforsbtodosth
4.Itwouldbeagoodideaforsbtodosth./Itwouldbeabetterideaif…….5.Itcontributes/helpsalotif………6.Isuggestthat…../Mysuggestionisthat…
It’ssuggested/advised/remendedthat……7.You’dbetterdosth./We’dbetterdosth
It’sbettertodosth
8.Measuresaresupposedtobetakentodosth
Wearesupposedtotakeeffectivemeasurestodosth9.It’shightimethatsbsth./It’shightimeforsbtodosth
DearPeter,Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.
TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.
写作注意问题
一是单词拼写要正确,大小写等。
开头结尾部分的语法要正确。
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二是选择多种表达方式,例如给出的不同的提建议的句式。
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三是构造要清晰,三段式,有过渡词。
四是卷面要整洁。
五是字数要够,答题卡上划得横线部分尽量写满,最多剩一行
假设你是李华,你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件,她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语。
请你根据以下的内容给她写封回信。
1.上课认真听讲,做好笔记,课后及时复习;
2.词汇是根底,每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词,朗读课文;
3.课外多与同学用英语交流,提高听力和口语能力;
4.每天坚持写日记。
注意:
1.词数120—150词左右,短文的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总数;
2.内容可适当发挥,注意行文连贯。
DearWangMei,
I’mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.
Bestwishes!
Yours,
LiHua
DearWangMei,
I’mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.NowI’mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwellinhighschool.Firstofall,youshouldlistentotheteachercarefullyandtakenotesinclasssothat众所周知),vocabularyisofgreatimportance/essential.Youshouldspendhalfanhourinthemorningrecitingwordsandreadingtextsaloud.What’smore,trytoyourclassmatesinEnglishoutofclass.InthiswayyoucanimproveyourlisteningandspokenEnglishquickly.Lastbutnotleast,youshouldkeepingadiary,whichhelpsimproveyourwrittenEnglishandhelpsyougoover/reviewthewordsandexpressionsthatyouhavelearnt.
Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:
wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成/Themanwhohasmadeuphismindtowinwillneversay“impossible”.一个决心要成功的人是从来不会说“不可能的”。
Bestwishes!
Yours,LiHua
Howtowritealetterforadvice
⑴说明建议的内容;
⑵提出详细建议的原因;
⑶指出采纳建议的益处。
本卷须知:
语言要委婉、礼貌,顾及对方感受。
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritealetter.SupposeyouareZhangYing.WritealettertoXiaoWang,aschoolmateofyourswhoisgoingtovisityouduringthesummerholidayforaweek.Youshouldwriteatleast100wordsaordingtothesuggestionsgivenbelowinChinese.
1、表示欢迎。
2、提出对度假安排的建议。
3、祝愿
DearXiaoWang,
ingtoBeijingtojoinmeinthesummerholiday.第一段表示欢迎IfyoucanstayinBeijingonlyforaweek,说明建议的原因语气亲切,符合说话人身份关系forvisitinganumberofplacesofhistoricinterest.表达词和副词一目了然placesthatyouhavethegreatestinterestin,suchas
thePalaceMuseum,theSummerPlace,theGreatthen使文章构造紧凑
willmakeyouhaveenoughtimetoappreciate(欣赏)使自己的安排具有说服力whatyoureallywanttosee.
traveler,itisnecessaryforyoutoreadsome建议有理有据booksabouttheseplacesbeforeyouetosee
themwithyourowneyes.Withmoreknowledge
abouttheseplaces,youwillhaveabetter
understandingofChinesehistoryandculture.
IameagertomeetyousooninBeijing.表达良好的祝愿,符合文体要求
假设你叫孙军,是恩施高中的学生,要给市长写一封信,反映学校门前交通拥挤现象,包括以下要点:
参考词汇:
穿行threadone’sway天桥overpass
范文1
DearMayor,
I’mastudentofNo.1MiddleSchool.HereIhavesomethingtotellyou.
Nexttoaprimaryschoolstandsourschool,facingamainstreet.Whenitestotrafficjams,it’scrammedwithcarsduringtherushhour.Whatmakesthingsworseisthatchildrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.Asaconsequence,①it’sofgreatdanger/②it’sextremelydangerousforthestudentstogothroughthetraffic.Aordingtothephenomenonstatedabove,itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuildinganoverpass.
I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yours,
SunJun
范文2
DearMayor,
I’mastudentofNo.1MiddleSchool.HereIhavesomethingtotellyou.
①Borderingaprimaryschool,/②Locatednexttoaprimaryschool,myschoolfacesthemainroaddirectly,whichalwayshasatrafficjamatthepeaktimeofthewholeday.①Additionally/②Inaddition,manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,①thusmakingthetrafficheavier./②thuscausingmoreserioustrafficjams./③thusresultinginmoreserioustrafficjams.Thereisnodenyingthatwestudents,threadingourwaythroughmassesofcars,areexposedtogreatdanger.①Seeingthesematters,neverwillIstopurgingourgovernmenttotakesomemeasures.Forthesakeofimprovingthequalityoftraffic,itissignificanttobuildanoverpass./②Inordertoreleasethestressoftrafficproblems,Istronglysuggestthatrelevantauthoritiesshouldtakeactive/effectivemeasureslikebuildinganoverpass./③Frommypointofview,/AsfarasI’mconcerned,/Inmyopinion,somemeasuresaresupposedtobetakenbygovernmentassoonaspossiblesuchasbuildinganoverpasstoimprovetheconditionsofthetraffic./④Aimedatsolvingtheseproblems,thegovernmentshouldtakesomemeasuresimmediately,suchasbuildinganoverpassaheadofourschool.
I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yours,
SunJun
例1广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观众的英语节目,新聘任了英国的John作为节目助理。
现在,John就节目内容向广阔中学生征求意见。
假设你是学生李华,建议开办“广州全接触”(All-roundGuangzhou)节目。
请根据以下节目设想给John写信:
DearJohn,
Iknowyou’regoingtosetupanEnglishprogramformiddleschoolstudents.SoI’mwritingtosuggestaprogram—“All-roundGuangzhou”.Thisprogramwillcovertopicslikethehistory,education,famousscenicspots,foodandfamouspeopleofGuangzhou.Itwouldbebettertobroadcastitonweekendssothatwestudentscanhavethechancetowatchit.
Besides,youcanalsoinvitesomemiddleschoolstudentstogetinvolvedintheprogram,whichwillsurelyarouseotherstudents’interestinit.NotonlywillthisprogramhelpstudentsimprovetheirEnglish,butalsogetthemtoknowmoreaboutthecultureofGuangzhousoastointroduceGuangzhoutoforeignvisitors.Iamsureitwillbewell-receivedbythemiddleschoolstudents.Ihopeyoucantakemysuggestionintoconsideration.
Sincerelyyours,LiHua
例2假设你是小明的好朋友李华,小明参加了一个比赛,他比照赛非常担忧,向你求助,请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。
[精华点评]
建议信的写作关键在于作者给出建议的语气委婉而中肯,使对方容易承受。
很多考生
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