高考英语短文写作三段式.docx
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高考英语短文写作三段式
高考英语短文写作三段式
第一段写法种种
第一段的主要功能是导入主题并略微展开或强调。
首先,认真阅读提示语,提炼出主题词(词组/句);其次,这段要围绕主题词亮剑出彩,先声夺人,逼人眼球;尤其是首句,既要精当又要别致。
再次,观点要有一定的思辨性,忌有事无情,有身无脑,有眼无睛;戒空泛,浅陋,虚假,极端,乃至错误。
注意运用各类句型和从句。
怎样提炼主题词/句?
*高频词句信息
*尾句信息
*but,however,yet等词后信息
*so,therefore,thus后信息
*notonly…butalso…后分句信息
*nomatterwh…,主句信息
*infact,asamatteroffact后面信息
试提炼下列提示语的主题信息
1.Inthedarknightofdifficulty,weshouldtakecomfortinknowingthatabrightdaywillalwayscheeronuswhereourhopesanddreamslie.Neverforgetyourdreamandgiveupyourhope.
2.Nomatterhowsmallourdreamsare,goforthem.Dreamscanhelpusliveacolorfulandcreativelife.
3.Peopleinmodernsocietyliveunderalotofpressurefrommanyaspectssuchaseducation,careerorfamily.Itisimportanttokeepagoodmoodinyourdailylife.
4.Thedeterminedspiritgivesuslightwhenweareindarkmomentsandencourageswhenwearefrustrated.Withthisquality,noenemycanoverwhelmus,andnoobstaclescanstandinourway.
5.Self-confidenceisextremelyimportantinalmosteveryaspectofourlives,self-confidentpeoplehavequalitiesthateveryoneadmires.
6.Nopeoplecansucceedorachievetheirtargetswithoutastrongwillandpersistence.Noonecandenythefactthatpersistenceisthekeypointinaccomplishingone'stask.Strongwillisakindofgoodqualitywhichsuccessfulpeopleshouldown.
7.Itisalwayssaidthatpersistencewillsurelyresultinsuccess.Meanwhile,flexibilityplaysan
importantpartinourstruggleforachievements.
8.Manygreatscientistshavemadegreatcontributionstothewholeworld,duetotheirconstanteffortsanddoggedperseverance.Wecanachievenothingwithoutwillpower.
9.Havingadisabilitydoesnotmeanyourlifeisnotsatisfying.Inmanywaysdisabilitycanhelpyougrowstrongerpsychologicallyandbecomemoreindependent.
10.Dutyissomethingyouhavetodobecauseitismorallyorlegallyright.Everybodyshouldhaveasenseofdutytowardshimself,hisfamilyorevenstrangers.Beingadutifulcitizenmakesyourlifemeaningful.
11.TheoutstandinginventorThomasEdisoniscreativeandfullofwisdom.Howeverheattachedspecialimportancetohardwork.Hisfamousremark“Geniusisonepercentinspirationandninetyninepercentperspiration”hasinspirednumerouspeople.
12.Lifeisashipontheoceanmeetingbothsunnydaysandstormyday.Lifeisfarfromeasyforeveryonenomatterwhoyouare,orwhatyoudo.
13.Infact,therearen’talwaysbrightsunshineandgentlebreeze,birds’singingandflowers’fragrantinourdailylife.Wehavesomanyfailuresandhardshipsthatsomeonewillbedisappointedandgiveupthehopeofsuccess,butlifeiswhatyoumakeit.
14.MarieCurieoncesaid,“Nothingistobefeared.Itisonlytobeunderstood.”Understandingisadropofgoldensun,iswellspringoflife,andisabridgebetweenmanandthesoulofman.Understandingistolerance(宽容),isakindofself-restraint(克制).Theworldneedsunderstanding.
15.Inmodernsociety,weshouldlearntoshare.Atruefriendisneverafraidtotellsomeonewhattheyreallythink,evenifthewordsneedtobetoughbutfair.Andtruefriendswillalwaysbethereintimesofneed.Sharingisaneffectivewaytoenrichyourlife.
16.Whenwegrowup,weoftengetalotoflove,supportandhelpfromourteachers,friendsaswellasourparents.However,weseldomexpressourgratitudetothem.Beinggratefultoothersiswhatweshouldn’tforget.
17.Inamodernsociety,peopleoftenneedtoworkwithagroupofpeopleratherthanworkalone,becausewhenweworktogether,wecanachievemorethanwhenwecompetewitheachother.Itisawin-wineffect.
18.Whenyouadditallup,thecostofmyloveisNoCharge.Forallthenightsthatwerefilledwithdread,andfortheworriesahead,NoCharge.Forthetoys,food,clothes,andevenwipingyournose,NoCharge.Andwhenyouadditallup,thefullcostofrealloveisNoCharge.
19.Interestplaysanimportantroleinourlife.Interestisthebestteacherforalearner,whichcanmakelearningmoreeffectiveandefficient.Withthemotivationofinterest,wewillwinourselveslotsofchancesandeventuallymakeourwaytosuccess.
20.IhavebeensooccupiedwithworkthatIhaven’thadtimeforsocialactivities.Ithinkit’simportanttohaveabalancebetweenstudyandasociallife.
21.NowadaysmoreandmoremiddleschoolstudentsaregettingaddictedtochattingonlinethroughQQ.Thereareavarietyofreasonswhytheychooseitasameansofcommunication.However,italsohasanegativeinfluenceonourstudyandlife.
22.Todaypeoplearefondoftraveling.Itisexcitingtovisitdifferentplaces.Itissaidthatmanwhotravelsfarknowsmore.
23.Presently,anewlifestylecalledlowcarbonlifeisspreadingeverycornerofourcountry.Theconceptsoflowcarbonarelowenergyandnowaste.
24.Peopleoftensaythattheearthislikeourmother.Shegiveslifetoallthelivingthingsontheearthandprovidesuswithair,food,waterandotheressentialthingsweneedforliving.Wehaveonlyoneearth.Soweshouldprotectit.
第一段常见模式如下:
(一)直捣黄龙式
1.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatlifeislikeathemeparkwherejokesaretheentertainmentthatkeepuscompany.Therefore,itisnevertoonecessarytolearntomakejokesproperly.(32w邓姣姣joke)
2.Thereisnodenyingthatjokesinourlifehavebecomeanaturalhabit,whichcanbringhappinesstopeople;inthemeantime,jokesusuallyconveysomeinspiringopinionsinaroundaboutway,whichoftenthrowusinthought.(40w李文豪joke)
3.Thereisnodenyingthatjokescanreleasenervousfeelings.What’smore,jokesshowthespeaker’swisdom,whichisbeneficialtous.Soitisessentialforustolearnhowtomakejokes,whichcandevelopourwisdom.(39w郭娅茜joke)
Nobettertoolthanasenseofhumorcanwearmwithinfaceofunpleasantevents.Moreoftenthannot,itishumorthatsmooththetoughroads,drivingustoadoptamorepositiveandwisdomwaytowardslife.
(41w范文humour)
(二)苏秦背剑式
1.Everyonewishestobeageniusbuttherearemanyfailuresinthewaytosuccess.Thoselosersalwaysowetheirfailurestothelackoftalent.Inreality,itisthosewhomatchtheirwordswithactionsthathavegreateraccesstosuccess.(41w袁磊action)
2.MostofmyclassmatesbelievethatagreatsuccesshavenothingtodowithdetailsbutIamfirmwiththeideathatallsuccesscomesfromdetails.Ifwewanttomakeadifferenceinourcareer,wemustn’toverlookanydetails.(43w例文detail)
3.Whenitcomestojokes,peopletendtothinkitnousepayingmoreattentiontomakingjokes.Butinfact,somejokesarenotwhattheyappear.Theyarethespeechofwisdom.
(34w杨芬joke)
(三)子曰诗云式
1.Asanoldsayinggoes,“wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”Thatistosay,notonlyshouldapersonhaveadream,butalsoheoughttotakeactionstopersueit,whichisanideaIagreetofromthebottomofmyheart.(49w例文action)
2.Neverwillweforgetaphilosopheroncesaidthatsuccessdependsondetails.Whathesaidmakesusawarethatvaluingdetailsisanimportantquality.Whenwearearmedwiththequality,we’llapproachsuccessandseethelightoffuture.Ifwelosethevirtueofvaluingdetails,wearemorelikelytogoopposite.(58w范文detail)
3.Asafamoussayinggoes,“pleasantjokestousarewhatflavoursaretodishes.”Onlywhenwebecomegoodatmakingjokescanweimproveanembarassingdilemmainourdailylife.(33w祝佳佳joke)
(四)项庄舞剑式
1.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatspeakingisalsoanartwhichhasmanyflexibleapproaches.Thereisnodoubtthatweareboundtomakemistakesinspeakingseveraltimesinlife.Whatmakesbesteffectsisnotsaying“sorry”butmakingproperjokestosolvetheembarrassingsituation.(49w李广敬joke)
2.Thereisnosenseinfleeingfromembarrassingcircumstancesandconditions,whichcannotbeavoided,butwecanlearntoplayjokesonourselvesandoftenturnitintoagreatones.Notonlydoweenjoy,butwecanalsomanagetocopewiththeembarrassingsituation.Itisthespeechofwisdom.(55w蹇慧如joke)
3.Whenweareinanembarrassingcondition,whatweneedtodoisnotescapingitbutusingjokestodealwithit,Sodon’ttreateveryjokeasjustajoke,sometimesitpresentsthespeechofwisdom,whichiscalledhumour.(43w王艳芬joke)
(五)细雨骑驴式
1.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatpeoplealwaysregardwhattheyhaveasnothingbutcherishwhattheylose.However,Godisfair;ifhedoesnotofferyoubeautyhemayarmyouwithintelligenceandinspiration.Sobecontentwithwhatyoupossessnow.(44w蹇慧如cherishthepresent)
2.Anoldsayinggoesthatwhatjokesaretousiswhatflavoursaretodishes.Moreoftenthannot,peopleplayjokestoconveytheirpleasureandtomakeotherslaugh.However,somejokesarenotintendedtojustbringlaughter;theyaremeanttoshowthewisdomofspeechandserveaspowerfulweapons.
(56w李林joke)
第二段写作范式
第二段主要功能是举例论证或展开主题。
可举正面事例,也可举反面事例;可举泛例,即不涉及具体、时间、地点、人物的事例,数据,图表等亦属于泛例;也可举具体事例;还可以虚构事例。
举例应紧扣主题,一般做法是在段首,段中或段尾点出主题词(组/句),忌说理过多;时态用一般过去时;例子应简洁,切忌啰嗦。
如:
1.I’lltakemyownexperienceforexample.Ourteacherrequiredustomakeareportaboutreadingwhichwasachallengingtasktome,forIreadsofewbooks.Fortunately,myfriendJoanadvisedthatwecouldworktogethertofinishthework.Icocperatedwithherandcompletedthereportsmoothly.It’sclearthatIbenefitedfromcooperationgreatly.
(62w晏榕cooperation)
2.Talkingofdetails,Ican’tresistrecallingthestoryofmyfriendFake,whowasasuperiordoctor.Hesavedmanylivesandwonareputationforhisexpertiseandkindness.Onedayhereceivedapatientoflowbloodsugar,whoshouldhavebeengivenhighsugar.Butunfortunatelyavitaldetailwasignored.Fakedidn’t
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