许秩例文评论.docx
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SampleTopicA
Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:
Teachersshouldmakelearningenjoyableandfunfortheirstudents.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouropinion.
Essayratingof6
Idostronglysupporttheideathatteachersshouldmakelearningenjoyableandfunforthestudents.ThisIsupportwiththefollowingreasons.
Firstletustakethepsychologicalcomponentofastudent.Achildorstudentwillbemorereceptive,toanythingincludingstudies,ifthesubjectmatterispresentedinaninterestingandenjoyablemanner.Ifnotthereiseverylikelihoodthatthestudentwillbeunwillingorwillrejectthematterpresentedasheconsidersstudyingisaburdenonhim.
Mysecondpointisthatthepresentdaystudentfacestremendousamountofdistractionsuchasinterestingtelevisionprogrammes,drugs,distractionsfromoppositesexesandmanymore.Togetthestudentawayfromalltheseandtogethiminterestedinstudiesthereisobviouslynootherwaythantomakelearninginteresting.
Thepresentdaystudentsarealsopressuredwithtremendousamountofcompetitionfromotherstudents.Withthismountingpressureonthemcoupledwiththehughexpectationoftheparents,itwilllightentheburdenontheyoungstudentswithamoreacceptableformofpresentationthatisinanenjoyableandfunmanner.
Retentionisanotherfactorthatshouldconsideredimportant.Anypresentationwhichisgivenaninterestingorenjoyablemannercanberetainedwellbythestudents.Ifthesubjectmatterpresentedisuninterestingthenthereisstronglikelihoodthestudentwillforgetthesubjectmatterpresentedindaysorevenhours.
Whenpresentingasubjecttheteachershouldcreateadesireamongstthestudenttocraveforknowledgeonthesubjectandthiscancertainlybeobtainedifthesubjectmatterispresentedinafunandenjoyablemanner.
Itcanalsobesaidthatthepresentdaycommunicationsystemissoadvancedandtheseareampleteachingaidsandtechniquestomaketeachingfunandenjoyable.Sowhynotutilisetheopportunitiestothefullsothatthestudentatthereceivingendcanbenefittothefull.
LastbutnotleastIwishtosaythatbymakingteachingfunandenjoyablethelifeexpectancyofboththestudentsandtheteacherscanbeextended.
Essayratingof5
"Teachersshouldmakelearningenjoyableandfunfortheirstudents."Idocompletelyagreewiththisstaments.Ibelievethattherehavebeenmanystudiesdoneonthissubject,andtheyallindicatethatifchildrenduringtheirfirstyearsofschoolingassociatelearningasenjoyableandfuntheywilllearnthesubjectsandretainmorethanifpresentedonadullway.Thetrendinlearningandeducationappearstosupportthisidea.
Theroleoftheteachernowdaysismorethanjustgivingawayanumberoffactsforstudentstolearn.Bymakinglearningfunandenjoyablethestudentwillalsogetmotivatedandprobablydosomeresearchoroutsideclassinvestigationtoenrichhisorherownknowledge.Somemaysaythatthisisalotofworkfortheteachers.Howeverifyoulookatallthetegnologyavailable,forexamplecomputereducationalprograms,educationalvideosetc.;theyalltrymakethelearningprocessenjoyableandfun.Itiseasierforteacherstoplantheirclassesbyusingsuchmaterials.Studentsbenefitsaswellsincetheyarelearningwithoutassociatingtheprocessasbeenatediouschoreneededtogetagradeandpassaclass.
Idobelievethatinthelongrunbothstudentsandteacherswillachivegreatresultsandasenceofawellaccomplishedjobbyapproachingleainingasanenjoyableandfunactivity.
Essayratingof4
Inmypointofview.Idoagreethatteachershouldmakeleaningenjoyableandfunfortheirstudentsforthefollowingreasons.
Firstly,studentsmaypaymoreattentionofwhattheteachersays.Insteadoftalkingtosomebodyelse.theymayconcentrateontheirwork.Sincethemostimportantthingisthattheyarenotboredbythelesson.
Secondly,theteacherwillbemorewelcomedbystudentsForonemaycompareafriendly,funnyteachertothoseboring,strictone.
Thirdly,thelivelyenvironmentoflearningmakesstudentsRaveahighspiritoflearning.Studentsmayactivelyparticipateinclassactivities.Thus,throughdifferentapproachesofteaching,studentsmaylearnmoreorbemoreenjoyable.
Allinall,theimperativepurposeistomakestudentsfeellearninginarelaxedwaynotstressingtoomuchpressureonthem.Gradually,theywillfindinterestinlearning.Therefore,Istronglyagreethatteachersshouldmakelearningenjoyableandfunfortheirstudents.
Essayratingof3
Teachersshouldmakeleaningenjoyableandfunfortheirstudents.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement?
Givereasonstosupportyouropinion.
Ifmyteachersmakeleaningenjoyableandfunformyclass.Iagreethat.becauseIthinkitisagoodwaytomakestudentsrememberinsubjectandwanttostudyinschoolsoIamastudentinschoolanduniversitylongtimeIthinkIknowthefellingofstudentswhenteachersteach.Someteachersarestronginsubject.Theystayontimeandteachalloftimeuntilfinch.Wedidn'thavebreaktimesortimeforrelax.Afterclassweareverytiredandwecouldn'ttorememberthattheteacherteachus.Weknownothing,butsometeacherknowsaboutthathetriestoteachusandhavetimetorelaxorenjoyableforexamplewetaketogetherinclassorhavesomegametoplaytogetheraboutsubjectthattheteacherteachsusorhavebreaktimefordrinkwater.Ilikethiswaytostudy.Ithinkitmakesusunderstandandwanttostudymorethananotherway.IthinkIcansayintersenteverystudentsIlikeifteachersshouldmakeleaningenjoyableandfunfortheirstudents.Iagree.
Essayratingof2
Theteacherisimporantforschool,moststudentsdon'tlikethem.Sometimeswecanfindstothatteacherwasboring.Ithinkofteachershouldmakelearningenjoyableandfunfortheirstudents.becausetheycouldbymeansoflearningandfungetmanystudents,anothertheycouldbebetterteacherandgoodskillfromeducation.
Andthenifteachershouldmakelearnigciriouseswiththeirstudents,Ithinkthiswaynotgoodforteacher:
Forxamplethestudentwillbefearanddisliketotheteacher.Besidetheydon'tlikeenjoytheirclass.maybetheycutit.
Goodaswellassayingtheteacherisbasicofeducationinthecountrary.IntheconcultIliketeacherlearningenjoyableandfunnyandthenI'llbeinterestedwithclassandgetmanythings.Thatisbetterforme.
Essayratingof1
Teachersshouldmakelearningenjoyableandfunfortheirstudents.Ithinkteachersshouldmakelearningenjoyableandfunfortheirstudent.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement?
Yes,Ido.WhydoIthinkso?
Becausetheteacheristeachingthestudents.Andthestudentisteachingtheteachers.Ofcoursemetoo.Thisisveryimpotant.Itisdon'tforgetus!
SampleTopicB
Supportersoftechnologysaythatitsolvesproblemsandmakeslifebetter.Opponentsarguethattechnologycreatesnewproblemsthatmaythreatenordamagethequalityoflife.Usingoneortwoexamples,discussthesetwopositions.Whichviewoftechnologydoyousupport?
Why?
Essayratingof6
Theseareseveralviewpointsontheimplicationsoftechnologicalchangeandadvancementandsuchschoolsofthoughtwhichconsiderablyvaryhavetheirrespectivevalidity.Technologicalchangehasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Forone,itistruethatitpartlysolvesproblemsandmakeslifebetter.Atthesametime,technologicalchangesmaylikelycreatenewproblemstherebythreateningordamagingqualityoflife.Inthedevelopingeconomies,forinstance,technologicaladvantageshasbothitsmeritsanddemerits.Theintroductionandseemingacceptabilityandusefulnessofcomputershavesomehowhelpedincreasetheefficiencyofseveralfirms.Itisnotonlyintheindustrialsectorthattechnologicalchangeproventobeveryeffective.Intheagriculturalsector,forexample,theintroductionofnewtechnologiesinincreasingproductionhasbeenveryeffectiveinexpandingagriculturalproduce.Thesearejustafewexamplestoillustratetheadvantagesoftechnologicaladvancement.
Ontheotherhand,countriesshouldbemorecarefulontheirchoiceoftechnologysinceitmustbenotedthatwhilecertaintypesoftechnologyareadaptabletodevelopedeconomiesthesametypeoftechnologymaynotfittheenvironmentofdevelopingcountriesduetodifferingeconomic,social,cultural,andpoliticalfactors.Forexample,infrastructureimprovementssuchasaconstructionofirrigationdaminthemountainsofthePhilippineswhereseveralnativesresidemaylikelyberesistedbythepopulationduetoculturalfactors.Theymayprefernottohavesuchimprovementsinviewoftraditionalvalues.Anotherexampleisthepollutionimpactofsometechnologicalimprovementsparticularlyintheindustrialsectors.
Thechoiceandadaptabilityofnewtechnologyshouldthereforebecarefullystudied.Theshort,medium,andlongtermimpactofsuchtechnologyisveryimportantparticularyfordevelopingeconomies.Thebenefitsshouldalwaysbegreaterthanthecosts.
Iaminclinedtosupportbothpositionsbecausebothviewshavetheirownvalidity.However,Iammoreconvincedthattechnologicaladvancementisheillybeneficialtocountriessolongastheyareawareofthedisadvantagesofsuchtechnology.
Essayratingof5
Technologybydefinetionreferstotheimprovementofthetechnicalknowhowandadvancementofmachinerytoimprovetheworkingsystemsinthehumansociety.Inaawaythislooksaverygoodi
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