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英语读后续写专项突破精品专题08劳动故事
专题08直击2022高考英语专项突破“读后续写”-劳动故事
劳动,可以让我们品尝甜蜜……
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阅读下面短文,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
They’dbeenplanningthisforever.Fromherbirth,mostlikely.Mya'smother,Helenalovedhostingparties.AndAuntBeatricelovedbirthdays.Together,they'dmakeherSweetSixteenahundredtimesbigger,bolder,andbrighterthanitneededtobe.Theyselectedathemeeveryyearandstucktoit.Herfourteenthhadbeenthe“SnowWhite”andherninthhadbeenthe“Frozen”.Theynevertoldherwhatthethemewasthedaybefore.She'djustwakeupherbirthdaymorning,abrandnewbirthdayoutfit(一套服装)laidneatlyonherdresser(anoutfitrelatedtothetheme,ofcourse)andshewouldopenherdoortoseetheadventurethatlayaheadofherthatday.
Myahadafewguessesastowhatthisyear’sthemewouldbe.Aplayonthewords“SweetSixteen”waslikely—acandythemedparty,perhaps?
Butshe’dhadabakingpartyafewyearsago—andHelenawasanythingbutrepetitive.Myadidn'thaveanyinterestincars,soshedoubtedasports-carpartywasonthemenu.She’dtriedtolookthroughhermother’spurchasehistoryonline,buthermotherhadbeencarefulenoughtodeleteeverythingrecent.Sotheonlyclueleftwasthebirthdayoutfitshewouldreceivethenextmorning.
May1st,Myawoke.Thebrightsunlightbeggedhereyestoopenandshelovedthedaythatherbirthdaytookplace.ItwasalwaysniceoutonMay1standitneverrained.Thismorningwasnodifferentthanherpreviousbirthdays.Shesatupinherbedandlookedtoherdresserbeforeslippingoutofbedandinspectingtheoutfit.Sheunfoldeditandhelditagainstherbody,seeinghowitwaslike.Itreacheddown,justabovetheankle.Myadressed,eyedherselfinthemirrorandfounditwasnotsomuchaprettyoutfitasshehadreceivedbefore.Itwastotallyoneforblue-collarworkers!
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly,herthoughtswereinterruptedbyaknock.
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Witheverythingdone,herfaceshonewithasweetsmile.
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【答案】例文1:
Suddenly,herthoughtswereinterruptedbyaknock.Helenawalkedin.“Whatismybirthdaythemethisyear,mum?
”Myaasked.“Labor!
”Helenaansweredinafirmvoice.“ButIwasexpectingaparty!
”hervoicesoundedshaky.Oh,howcouldsheforgetshewasbornonLabor’sDay!
Mya’sfeetbroughthersmallstepstofollowHelenatothevan.Onarrivingatafarm,shenoticedthevastlandofwheatspreadingoverthehorizonthatmadeasplendidviewitself.Theirjobwastoremovetheweeds.
Witheverythingdone,herfaceshonewithasweetsmile.SeveraldropsofsweattracedapathonherredandpinkcheeksandsheturnedtoHelena:
“thisisnotbad,mumandIfeelI’vegrownupenoughtohelpyouwithsomething.”HelenapulledMyaintoherarmsandplantedabigkissonherforehead.ThesuninMaywasshiningbrighterthaneverlikeafireball.Picturingthegoodharvestofthisyear,theyhittheroadwithahappybirthdaysongechoinginthevan.
例文2:
Suddenly,herthoughtswereinterruptedbyaknock.“Isthebirthdaygirlup?
”Helenaasked.Myaopenedherbedroomdoorandsurprisinglyfoundtheylookedthesame!
LookingatMya’ssurprisedface,Helenagrinnedandledhertothekitchen.Therewasnomealonthetable.“Let’sprepareforthepartytogetherthistime.”AuntBeatricesaidgladlydressedinthesameoutfit.ItsuddenlyoccurredtoMyathatthethemethisyearwassupposedtobe“SweetLabor,SweetSixteen”.
Witheverythingdone,herfaceshonewithasweetsmile.Lookingaroundthelivingroom,Myafeltthehappinessbroughtbylaborthefirsttime.“HappyBirthday!
”Myaturnedaroundinsurprise.Allofherfriendsjumpedoutofanyhidingspotswitheveryonewearingthesameoutfit.Theyenjoyedthepartyandcleaneduptogetherafterwards.TiredasMyawas,shepulledHelenaandBeatriceintoahugtightly,saying“thisisthebestsweetsixteenever.”
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开,主要讲的是Mya的妈妈和阿姨喜欢为她办生日派对,Mya一直在猜测她16岁生日派对的主题,可是没有结果,只能等生日那天早上看梳妆台上的衣服,那天早上她穿上衣服后发现自己完全是一个蓝领工人。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“突然,敲门声打断了她的思绪。
”可知,第一段可描写Mya的妈妈告诉Mya今年生日的主题。
②由第二段首句内容“一切都做完了,她的脸上露出了甜蜜的微笑。
”可知,第二段可描写Mya劳动后的感受。
2.续写线索:
告知主题——到农场劳动——劳动后的感受——回家
3.词汇激活
行为类
①回答:
answer/respond
②到达:
arriveat/getto
③掠过:
traceapath/skimover
情绪类
①坚定的:
firm/determined
②糟糕的:
bad/terrible
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Oh,howcouldsheforgetshewasbornonLabor’sDay!
(由that引导的宾语从句,省略了that)
[高分句型2]Onarrivingatafarm,shenoticedthevastlandofwheatspreadingoverthehorizonthatmadeasplendidviewitself.(由关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句)
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ItwasearlyspringandNanawasinthebackyardwithhergrandchildren.Amy,Michael,andJustinwereplayingwhenNanasaid,“I’mgoingtostartplantingmygarden.Whowantstohelpme?
”
“Whataregoingtoplant,Nana?
”askedAmy.“Ilikebig,yellowsunflowers.”
“I’mgoingtoplantvegetables.Thatwaywecanhavethemtoeatwhentheyareready,”saidNana.
“Howlongdoesthattake?
”askedMichael.Helikedvegetablessometimes,especiallycarrots.
“Itwilltakeafewmonthsbeforeanythingisreadytoeat,”answeredNana.Thechildrenweresurprised.
“Months?
Whywouldyoudoallthatworkandthenhavetowaitsolong?
”askedAmy.“Youshouldjustgotothestoreandbuythem.”
“Patience,mysweeties!
Don’tyouknowfoodalwaystastesbestwhenyougrowityourself?
”repliedNana.“Andifallofyoucometohelp,itwon’tbetoomuchwork.”
“I’llhelpyou,Nana,”offeredJustin.HeputdownthesoccerballandwenttolookatthegardeningtoolsNanahadlaidout.“Whatdowedofirst?
”MichaelandAmycameovertolook,too.
NanataughtJustinhowtouseatrowel(小铲子)todigsmallrowsofholesfortheseeds.Next,NanashowedAmyhowtopourtheseedsintoeachhole.AnditwasMichael’sjobtocoveruptheholeswithsoil.Finally,AmywrotethevegetablenamesonsticksthatJustinpushedintotheground.“Thiswaywecanrememberwhichvegetableseedswehaveplanted,”saidNana.
Whentheyhadplantedeverything,thechildrentookturnsfillingupthewateringcansothatNanacouldmakethesoilniceandwetfortheseedstostarttogrow.
“Nowwejustwaterthemalittleeveryday,andwithsometimeandsunshine,we’llhavesomedeliciousthingstoeatinthesummer,”saidNana.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Wheneverthegrandchildrencametovisit,theywoulddashintothegarden.
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Finally,Nanasaiditwastimeforthefirstharvest.
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【答案】Possibleversion1:
Wheneverthegrandchildrencametovisit,theywoulddashintothegarden.Notsurprisingly,theyweregoingtoseehowthegardenwasgrowing.Afterwateringthevegetables,theywouldremovetheweedsthatpoppeduparoundtheplantsandapplyorganicfertilizerunderNana'sinstructionifnecessary.Astimewentby,theplantsweregrowingtallerandstronger.Whentheynoticedthevegetablesfloweringandproducingfruits,theireyesweresparklinglikediamonds.Neverhadtheylookedforwardtosummerlikethisbefore.Buttheyclearlyknewthatit'sworthwhiletowaitfortheinvitingresults.
Finally,Nanasaiditwastimeforthefirstharvest.Hearingthat,thechildrenalljumpedintotheairandcheersfilledthewholegarden.Nanagavethemeachbasketsand,togethertheygatheredsomeofthecucumbers,carrotsandtomatoes,whichwereturnedintodelicacies.“Whowantstohelpeatthisfreshsalad?
”Nanaasked.“Me!
”everyonerespondedloudly.Tastingthesalad,theythoughtnothingcouldbemoredelicious,becauseitwastheywhogrewthesevegetables.Theyalllearnedthatmanyhandsmakelightworkandpatiencereallypaysoff.
Possibleversion2:
Wheneverthegrandchildrencametovisit,theywoulddashintothegarden.Eagertohelpgrowthevegetableswell,theyfirsttookturnstowatertheplants.ThenNanashowedthemwhichplantsneededtrimmingorwhichneededtyinguptogrowtallandstraight.Dayafterday,springturnedintosummerandfinally,theplantsstartedrevealingtheircolorfulsecrets.Thechildrenwerethrilledtoseethetomatoesturningred,thecucumbershidingunderthegreenleavesandthepeppersgrowingbigger.NotuntilthendidtheyrealizethatNanawasright--alltheyneededwaspatience.
Finally,Nanasaiditwastimeforthefirstharvest.Withbasketsready,Nanaandthechildrenstartedoutontheirbusiness.Nanatookthemaroundthegardenandpickedsometomatoes,cucumbers,peppersandcabbages.Thenforthefollowinghour,theywerebusyingmakingvegetablesalad.ThechildrenhelpedwashthedirtoffthefoodwhileNanachoppedupthevegetables.WhenNanaaskedwhowantedtotrythefreshsalad,everyoneexpressedtheirwillingnessexcitedly.“OK.Amy,gettheplates.Justin,getthewaterandcups,andMichael,gettheforks.Let'scelebratetheharvest!
”
【解析】
本文以奶奶和孙子们在后院一起种植蔬菜为线索展开,讲述了那年早春,娜娜和她的孙子们在后院,艾米、迈克尔和贾斯汀正在玩耍,奶奶提出要种植蔬菜,一开始孙子们建议奶奶去商店买,因为自己种植蔬菜要做那么多工作,然后还要等这么长时间,奶奶让孙子们耐心点,因为自己种的食物总是味道最好的,奶奶认为如果大家都来帮忙,工作也不会太多。
孙子们听了都乐意来帮忙,奶奶给孙子们分了工,奶奶耐心教导,当他们把所有的东西都种好后,孩子们轮流往水罐里灌满水,这样奶奶就能把土壤弄湿,让种子开始生长。
奶奶说只要每天给它们浇水,再加上一些时间和阳光,夏天就可以吃到美味的东西了。
【详解】
段落续写(以version1为例):
①由第一段首句内容“每当孙子们来拜访时,他们都会冲进花园。
”可知,第一段可描写孩子们怎样照顾这些植物们,以及看着蔬菜开花并结出果实时的兴奋心情。
②由第二段首句内容“最后,娜娜说是第一次收获的时候了。
”可知,第二段可描写孩子们听到消息的喜悦之情,他们一起收集蔬菜,并把这些变成了美味佳肴,们认为没有什么比这更美
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