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英语满分作文句法分析表1
Whenacountrydevelopsitstechnology,thetraditionalskillsandwaysoflifedieout.Itispointlesstotryandkeepthemalive.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?
SentenceNo.
句首
句中
句末
1.Overall,Idisagreewiththeopinionexpressed.
Overall,副词
expressed分词,后置定语
2.Iwouldliketobeginbypointingoutthat“traditionalskillsandwaysoflife”arenotautomaticallyofonecountry,butofacultureorcommunity.
bypointingoutthat…
介词短语
宾语从句“traditionalskillsandwaysoflife”arenotautomaticallyofonecountry,butofacultureorcommunity(注意beof结构)
3.Inmanyways,thehistoryofcivilizationisthehistoryoftechnology:
fromthediscoveryoffiretotheinventionofthewheeltothedevelopmentoftheInternet,wehavebeenmovingonfrompreviouswaysofdoingthings.
Inmanyways,
介词短语
介词短语fromAtoBtoC
fromthediscoveryoffiretotheinventionofthewheeltothedevelopmentoftheInternet,
含有介词的名词短语:
waysofdoingthings
4.Sometechnologies,suchasweaponsofmassdestruction,areofnegativeimpact.
插入语
suchasweaponsofmassdestruction,
beof结构
areofnegativeimpact
5.Others,suchasmedicaladvances,positivelyhelppeopletolivebetterorlonger,andsoverymuchhelptraditionalwaysoflife.
插入语
suchasmedicaladvances,
并列句
andsoverymuchhelptraditionalwaysoflife
6.Surely,fewpeoplewouldseektopreservesuchtraditionaslivingincaves.
副词
Surely,
7.Interestingly,technologycanpositivelycontributetothekeepingaliveoftraditionalskillsandwaysoflife.
副词
Interestingly,
含有动名词的名词短语
…thekeepingaliveof…
8.Forexample,thepopulationsofsomeislandsaretoosmalltohavenormalschools.
介词短语
Forexample,
9.Ratherthanbreakingupfamiliesbysendingchildrentothemainland,educationauthoritieshavebeenabletousetheInternettodeliverschoolingonline.
介词短语Ratherthanbreakingupfamiliesbysendingchildrento…
10.Inaddition,theInternetandmodernrefrigerationtechniquesarebeingusedtokeepalivethetraditionalskillsofproducingsalmon.
介词短语
Inaddition,
含有介词的名词短语
thetraditionalskillsofproducingsalmon
11.Itcannowbeorderedfrom,anddeliveredto,anywhereintheworld.
插入语,并列关系
anddeliveredto,
12.Inconclusion,withoutsuggestingthatalltechnologyisnecessarilygood,Ithinkitisbynomeans“pointless”,inanyway,totrytokeeptraditionsalivewithtechnology.
介词短语
Inconclusion,
介词短语,插入语
withoutsuggestingthat…
插入语,强调
inanyway,
介词短语
withtechnology
13.Weshouldnotignoretechnology,becauseitcanbeourfriendandsupportourwayoflife.
原因状语从句becauseitcanbeourfriendandsupportourwayoflife
★本文核心词汇分析
本文的关键词/短语一共三个,处理技巧分析如下
technology
thetraditionalskillsandwaysoflife
keepthemalive
1.原词重现technology
1.重现“traditionalskillsandwaysoflife”
1.替换词preserve
2.微调Sometechnologies
2.previouswaysofdoingthings
2.contributetothekeepingaliveof(第7句)
3.省略Others,
3.traditionalwaysoflife
3.重现keepalive(第10句)
4.原词重现technology(第7句)
4.suchtraditionaslivingincaves
4.重现trytokeeptraditionsalive(第12句)
5.替换词theInternetandmodernrefrigerationtechniques(第10句)
5.重现traditionalskillsandwaysoflife(第7句)
5.替换词supportourwayoflife(第13句)
6.原词重现technology(第12句)
6.thetraditionalskillsofproducingsalmon(第10句)
7.原词重现technology(第12句)
7.ourwayoflife(第13句)
8.原词重现technology(第13句)
9.代词替换it(第13句)
点评:
不是所有词都可以找到替换词,很多基础词汇可能没有合适的替换词。
提醒:
没有把握坚决不要找同义词替换,以免出现表达不当甚至偏题或跑题。
建议:
多想想代词替换法和词汇短语微调(不改变核心词,如本文部分词汇、短语的处理方法)
指点迷津:
1.语法学习初级阶段应该以简单句为核心,如何把简单句写好(精确)并增加变化是关键;简单句都无法亮化的话,针对从句、复杂句的训练都是徒劳。
2.介词短语、非谓语动词、插入语是增加单句句子信息含量以及句法变化的主要手段。
3.传统的语法学习要么思维错误要么过于繁杂,往往以词汇为中心,而不是站在句子的整体高度(atthesentencelevel)
4.以句首、句中和句末为特点的语法分析简化了语法学习,学习效果却要好得多。
按照写句子的顺序,任何句子都必须先想好句首如何书写(主要是三种:
比如以介词短语开路,从句开路,或者副词打开一个句子;当然,也可以考虑含有动名词的名词短语作为主语),再想想句子中间的写法(三种:
并列句为主,其次是插入语,最后是定语从句),最后再考虑句末增加一些什么变化(三种:
介词短语,非谓语作状语或者后置定语,从句)
5.从句的学习应该尽量简化:
建议重点学习三种状语从句(原因、条件和让步);名词性从句的学习以背诵固定的句型为主;形容词性从句也需要重点训练。
6.分析的文章越多就越是头脑清醒,也可以多掌握一些搭配和从句;大小作文大抵如此,小作文更简单。
英语满分作文句法分析表2
Inmanycountrieschildrenareengagedinsomekindofpaidwork.Somepeopleregardthisascompletelywrong,whileothersconsideritasvaluableworkexperience,importantforlearningandtakingresponsibility.Whatareyouropinionsonthis?
SentenceNo.
句首
句中
句末
1.Theissueofchildrendoingpaidworkisacomplexandsensitiveone.
含有介词以及动名词的名词短语Theissueofchildrendoingpaidwork…
含有代词one,指代(referencing)是一种重要的逻辑衔接手段acomplexandsensitiveone
2.Itisdifficulttosaywhohastherighttojudgewhetherchildrenworkingis‘wrong’or‘valuable’.
固定句型
Itisdifficulttosay…
宾语从句
…whohastherighttojudge…
宾语从句
whetherchildrenworkingis‘wrong’or‘valuable’
3.Opinionswillalsodifferasto‘learning’benefits:
nodoubtteachersandfactoryowners,forexample,wouldhavevaryingconcerns.
冒号后面是同位语从句,是对前面句子内容的解释;另外,forexample做插入语使用
4.Animportantconsiderationisthekindofworkundertaken.
句末出现分词作后置定语(undertaken)
5.Youngchildrendoingarduousandrepetitivetasksonafactoryproductionline,forexample,arelesslikelytobe‘learning’thanolderchildrenhelpinginanoldpeople’shome.
含有动名词的名词短语Youngchildrendoingarduousandrepetitivetasksonafactoryproductionline
插入语
forexample
程度控制arelesslikelytobe‘learning’thanolderchildren(分词结构作后置定语)helpinginanoldpeople’shome
6.Therearehealthandsafetyissuestobeconsideredaswell.
可数名词issues(可数名词一般不可以单独使用,需要添加冠词或使用复数)
不定式作后置定语tobeconsidered(逻辑衔接)aswell
7.Itisanunfortunatefactthatmanyemployersmayprefertousetheservicesofchildrensimplytosavemoneybypayingthemlessthanadultsanditisthistypeofexploitationthatshouldbediscouraged.
含有同位语从句Itisanunfortunatefactthat…simplytosavemoney(介词短语)bypayingthemlessthanadults
并列句连接词and
含有强调句
itisthistypeofexploitationthatshouldbediscouraged
8.However,inmanycountrieschildrenworkbecausetheirfamiliesneedtheadditionalincome,nomatterhowsmall.
副词However,逻辑转折
原因状语从句
becausetheirfamiliesneedtheadditionalincome,
让步状语从句nomatterhowsmall(省略itis)
9.Thiswascertainlythecaseinthepastinmanyindustrializedcountries,anditisverydifficulttojudgethatitiswrongforchildrentodaytocontributetothefamilyincomeinthisway.
代词this(referencing,避免重复)
并列句连接词
and
含有宾语从句的并列句itisverydifficulttojudgethatitiswrongforchildrentodaytocontributetothefamilyincomeinthisway
10.Nevertheless,inbettereconomiccircumstances,fewparentswouldchoosetosendtheirchildrenouttofull-timepaidwork.
副词Nevertheless,(逻辑转折)
插入语
inbettereconomiccircumstances
11.Iflearningresponsibilitiesandworkexperienceareconsideredtobeimportant,thenchildrencanacquirethesebyhavinglight,part-timejobsorevendoingtaskssuchashelpingtheirparentsaroundthefamilyhome,whichareunpaid,butundoubtedlyofvalueinchildren’sdevelopment.
条件状语从句Iflearningresponsibilitiesandworkexperienceareconsideredtobeimportant,
含有介词短语
byhavinglight,part-timejobsorevendoingtaskssuchashelpingtheirparentsaroundthefamilyhome
插入语
whichareunpaid,
并列句but(省略are)undoubtedlyofvalueinchildren’sdevelopment
★本文核心词汇分析
本文的关键词/短语一共四个,处理技巧分析如下:
children
paidwork
completelywrong
valuableworkexperience,importantforlearningandtakingresponsibility
1.原词重现children
1.原词重现
paidwork
1.原词重现wrong
1.原词重现
valuable
2.原词重现children
2.同根词
working
2.灵活替换
itisthistypeofexploitationthatshouldbediscouraged
2.替换
‘learning’benefits
3.原词重现,增加形容词作对比Youngchildren
3.替换
thekindofworkundertaken
3.原词重现wrong
3.替换
‘learning’
4.原词重现,增加形容词作对比olderchildren
4.替换
doingarduousandrepetitivetasks
4.基本重复
Iflearningresponsibilitiesandworkexperienceareconsideredtobeimportant
5.原词重现children
5.替换
theservicesofchildren
5.指代
these
6.代词them
6.动词work
6.替换…(are)ofvalueinchildren’sdevelopment
7.原词重现children
7.灵活替换tocontributetothefamilyincomeinthisway
8.代词their
8.原词重现,添加形容词full-timepaidwork
9.原词重现children
9.灵活替换(unpaid)jobs
10.原词重现children
10.灵活替换
(unpaid)tasks
11.原词重现children
12.代词their
13.原词重现children
英语满分作文句法分析表3
Happinessisconsideredveryimportantinlife.
Whyisitdifficulttodefine?
Whatfactorsareimportantinachievinghappiness?
SentenceNo.
句首
句中
句末
1.Happinessisverydifficulttodefine,becauseitmeanssomanydifferentthingstodifferentpeople.
原因状语从句
becauseitmeanssomanydifferentthingstodifferentpeople
2.Whilesomepeoplelinkhappinesstowealthandmaterialsuccess,othersthinkitliesinemotionsandlovingpersonalrelationships.
时间状语从句
Whilesomepeoplelinkhappinessto…
固定搭配
link…to…
宾语从句
othersthinkitliesinemotionsandlovingpersonalrelationships
3.Yetothersthinkthatspiritualpaths,ratherthaneitherthematerialworldorrelationshipswithpeople,aretheonlywaytotruehappiness.
并列连词,yet,逻辑转折
插入语
ratherthan
并列连词
either…or…
The(only)waytodo=wayofdoing
4.Becausepeopleinterprethappinessforthemselvesinsomanydifferentways,itisdifficulttogiveanydefinitionthatistrueforeveryone.
原因状语从句
Becausepeopleinterprethappinessforthemselvesinsomanydifferentways
固定句型
itisdifficultto…
定语从句
itisdifficulttogiveanydefinitionthatistrueforeveryone.
5.However,iftherearedifferentkindsofhappinessfordifferentindividualsthenthefirststepinachievingitwouldbetohaveadegreeofself-knowledge.
副词however,逻辑转折
条件状语
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