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新东方考研英语暑期课程·作文·豪华版笔记全录
作文
1、包装
①书写、习惯
②格式(如书信右上角的时间)、结构(两头小、中间大、字数分配50-80-50)
↗长句↖
③选词造句→短句←交错使用(15句,1/3写长句,30字左右,长句后接一两句短句过渡)
↘难句:
强调句(最好使)
2、货真价实
↗情景文字
①不要跑题(跑题则一半分数以下),审题(三维)→提纲
↘图或表上的信息
②内容衔接(思维跨度不要太大)→总述和概述
↘注意句子完整
③方法多样性
一、大作文
(一)描绘:
描述性语言、可加议论性观点
(二)议述:
作者意图、个人评价
(三)总结(好的:
预期一下未来;坏的:
采取措施防治)/例证
具体讲:
(一) 描绘:
总体背景介绍+细节刻画图或表上的信息
1、背景介绍
例一:
人类克隆(试管婴儿/一个老婆四个一模一样的老公,“谁才是真的?
”)
Theproblemoftheuseofgenetictechnologiesonhumanbeinghas[caused/arousedpublicconcern]/[loomedup/croppedupasaburning/challengingtopic].
例二:
中国青少年犯罪比率上升(表)
Intherecentyears,Chinaexperienced/witnessed/wasplaguedwithanalarmingincreaseinjuveniledelinquency.
例三:
人和社会的发展与环境的协调(寓意图、对比图)
Currently,thetopic/phenomenonofenvironmentversusdevelopmenthasbeeninthelimelight.Nowhereistheclashmoreevident/visiblethaninChina,wherethelargestpopulationconfrontsdeforestation,pollutionandacidrainonarangescale.
2、细节描绘
例:
04年作文题
The(asetof)cartoondepictsavividsceneinwhichanathletedrippingsweatisrushingtotheend.Unquestionably/Undoubtedly/Beyonddoubt,hewinsthegamebutitisnotthekeymessageconveyed/implied/deliveredbythepicture.Apparently/Basically,thestrikingfeatureisthatthereisalinemarkedasboth“thestart”and“theend”,whichmeansaftertheplayercametothefinishing-line,anewraceiswaitingtohim.
另:
对于图表描述不光要用上升下降等词,还要使用比较句型结构。
comparewith/to
…asmuchasthat…
morethan,lessthan
by2000,[thenumberreachthepeak/bottom]/[thelargestnumberappeared].
(二) 议述
引言句+分论点、事实信息罗列
如:
Asamatteroffact,thepurposeofthedrawer/drawingistomakeus[payhigh/moreattentionto…]/[rethink/haveafreshlookat…].
例一:
兼职part-timejob
brainstorming
I.Advantages:
↗pocketmoney
①makemoney→followinterest
↘tuitionfees
↗onone’sown
↗life→makefriends
②experience ↘custom,culture
↘work→layasolidfoundationforfuturecareer
↘befamiliarwithnewfields
II.Disadvantages:
①money:
besoyoungthattheyareboundtobecheated/beinducedtodo…
②experience→scienceandtechnologyaccelerate/speedup→invalid
↘hurt/injury/doharmto/endanger
III.whatshouldwedo?
①asecondlanguage
②computeroperationandapplication
③后果degradeone’sacademicperformance
完整表述:
Acquiringknowledgeatschoolwithoutpracticalworkexperienceislikeworkingononeleg.Occasionally,althoughastudentcouldattainsomeexperience,nevertheless/yetsuchexperiencetoofrequentlyis[validorevenharmful]/[abaneratherthanaboon].Thatistosay,itsdemeritsoutweighmerits.Why?
Thisisnaturalandnecessary.Notonlymaytheaccelerationofscienceandtechnologybringaboutnewtools/skillswitheachpassingday,butalsoourworkcircumstanceswillchangeasthesocietydevelops.Thefactthatcollegestudentsmustgetagoodcommandofasecondlanguageaswellasmastertheoperationandapplicationofcomputerrequiresthemnottodopart-timejob.Iftheytakepart-timejob,theirenergyandtimewillnotbeenoughandtheiracademicwilldegrade.
例二:
出国留学
brainstorming
↗dreamof(doing)
原因(好处)→themerewaytoachievesuccess
↘curriculaarrangement,teachingmethod
↓why?
/how?
/whichchannel?
goodlearningcondition
↓what?
up-to-dateteachingequipment
first-classresearchfacilities
worldfamousprofessors
坏处:
money→tuitionfees 而在国内don’tworryabout↘livingexpense
communication:
languageandculturalbarrier 而在国内parent’scareandsupportfacilitate
例三:
盗版问题(最新光盘,四元一张;港台歌曲,十元三盒;流行书刊,一律二折)
(乾坤大挪移)Nowadays,theproblemofpiracyhasbeeninthelimelight.Accordingtothecartoonwecouldfindthatbooks,VCDs,tapesandotherhigh-techproductshavebeencopied.Whenanewproductentersintothemarket,weareboundtodiscoverthatitspiratedcounterpartwillsoonswarm/floodintothesamemarket.Neverinthenation’shistoryhastheproblemofpiracybeenmoreseverethannow.
Thereisnodenyingthatpiratedcommoditieshasnotonlyresultedinagreatlosstoproducer/manufacturers,inventorsandwriters,butalsodisturb/haveaconfusioninthemarket.Why?
Inthatthepiratedgoodsoftencostlessthantheoriginalones,theyenjoyaprettygoodsellinginspiteoftheirshoddyquality.Thegenuineones,however/bycontrast,sellpoorly.Acurrentinvestigation/study/report/survey/pollindicates/manifests/revealsthatconsumersspendapproximately¥20billiononthepiratedcounterpartsinsteadofthegenuineonesannually.Inaddition,suchpiratedproduct,especiallybooks,willdoharmto/endangertheproducers’reputationduetotoomanymisprinting.
(三) 结论
另:
养宠物话题
Withthequickeningpaceofmodernlifeandfiercecompetitioninthesociety,manypeoplefeelasenseofloneliness,notonlybecauseofthelackofnormalcommunicationinthefamilybutalsosinceabsenceofintercourseamongtheneighborhood.Catsanddogsorotherpetswillfillyourvoid.
1、总结性发言
例:
养宠物
[Takingintoaccountallthefactors]/[whichhasbeendiscussedabove],wecansafelycometoaconclusionthatkeep-petshasbothpositiveandnegativeinfluences.Whatwemustdoistomakesurethatnotonlyareitsbenefitsencouragedanddeveloped/retainedbutalsowehavetostriveto/attemptto/endeavortoeliminateitsunfavorableimpacts.
2、号召与后果
例:
腐败现象
Itistimethatourgovernment/authorityshouldspeakoutagainstcorruptionandtakefirm/strong/sternactiontopunishhimwhoevertakesbribesandembezzlesfunds.Fortheofficialcorruption[ifpermittedtocontinue]/[Ifletthissituationgoasitis]willtarnishthegovernment’spopularity/imageandmayleadtoultimate/terminatedownfall.
3、具体的建议
例:
学生吸烟比率上升
Inanycase,weoughttodomorethantalkabouttheriseinstudentsmoking.Ourhighschoolsandcollegesmustbringinsomecancerexperts/specialists/researcherswhorunfilms/slidesforstudents,showingthedreadfulconsequencecausedbycigarettesmoking.Wecanalsoarrange/schedulevisitstohospitalwardsforlungcancerpatients.Inshort,weshouldtakestudentsmokingseriously.
作文
二、应用文
书信
↗①语气/措辞客气
公务信件→②格式:
开头(写明目的)、结尾(期待回音)
↘③词汇/语法(言简意赅,长句最多25个字)
另:
无论是大作文还是小作文,都不用些标题,如果想写则须注意以下问题:
①实词大写;②字母长度大于等于4个的虚词大写;③第一个单词的位置,不论实词还是虚词都要大写;④动词短语不做标题
补充:
1、投诉信(换宿舍)
Dec.29th,2004
DearSirorMadam/Towhomitmayconcern/DearMr.DeanZhang,
I’mwritingtoinformyouthatIwishtomovingtoanewroomnextterm.Ipreferasingleroom,asIrindthepresentsharingarrangementinconvenient.
Imustexplainthatthereasonfordissatisfactionismyroommate’sinconsideratebehavior.Foronething,hisfriendsconstantlyvisithim;foranother,heregularlyholdsnoisyparties.Inaddition,hetoooftenborrowsmyprivatethingswithoutmypermission.Consequently,Ifinditdifficultformetoconcentrateonmystudies.
I’msurethatyouwillagreethatImustmoveintoaroomofmyown,whereIwouldbefarfromsuchdistraction.Iwouldbegratefulifyouwouldtakemyrequirementintoconsideration,aswellasprovidemewitharoom,preferablynotinthesamebuildingbutasneartocollegecampusaspossible.
Yoursfaithfully
XXX
2、感谢信(感谢车祸中及时救助你的人)
I’mwritingtoexpressmyheartfulgratitude.I’mreferringtotheunfortunatecrash,whenIwasknockedoffmybikebyataxi.Butforyourtimelytakingfirstaidandsendingmetoanearbyhospital,Ifearthattheconsequencemighthavebeenmuchmoreserious.
Thedoctorsaysthatmybrokenlegishealingwell,andcutsandbruiseswillsoonbecompletelybetter,what’smore,thetaxicompanyagreedtopaymyhospitalbills.Everyoneholdsthatitisyourquick-wittedactionintheemergencythathasledtosatisfactoryoutcome.
Althoughmanypeopletalkabouttheneedtobeunselfishandtoreadytohelpothers,weseefewpeoplepracticingwhattheypreach.Youshowedbyyourselflessactionthatyouareanexception.Iftherearemorepeoplelikeyou,theworldwouldbeamuchnicerone.
3、求购/预定信(为朋友庆祝生日)
I’mpreparingabirthdaypartyforafriend,andwritingoinquireifyourestaurantcouldofferprivateroomswithcateringservice.Ifso,IwanttoreserveoneroomfornextFriday(oct.16th)from5p.m.to9p.m.
Theroomshouldbebigenoughtoaccommodatemorethan50peoplecomfortably.Andthepartywillbeholdinacocktailstyle;thereforeamajorityofuswillbestandingupformostofthetime.Sotenchairsareneededintheroom.Ifthereisn’tabar,adrinkstableshouldbesetup.Forentertainment,KaraokeofDiskjockeymaybeacceptable.
Willyoupleasecontactmeintwodays?
Youcanreachat13820XXXXXXinthedaytimeandat2737XXXXinthenight.Thanksforyouconsiderationoncemore.
考研英语写作35个常用的亮点句型(注:
S—主语,V—谓语,O—宾语)
【句型1】...the+~est+n.+(that)+S+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/read,etc)
...themost+a.+n.+(that)+S+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/read,etc)【例1】Mr.HeisthekindestteacherthatIhaveeverhad.【译文】何老师是我曾经遇到过的最仁慈的教师。
【例2】HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen.【译文】海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
【句型2】Nothingis+~erthanto+v. Nothingis+more+a.+thanto+v.【例句】Nothingismoreimportantthantoreceiveeducation.【译文】没有比接受教育更重要的事。
【句型3】...cannotemphasizetheimportanceof...toomuch.再怎么强调……的重要性也不为过【例句】Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyestoomuch.【译文】我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
【句型4】Thereisnodenyingthat+S+V不可否认的……【例句】Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourli
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