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考前十分钟写作
[推荐]考前10分钟写作技巧-不看必悔(转)
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四级120-150字;六级150-180字;[3JIe:
2是否长短句交叉;#
3用词是否恰当,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;QuoR58
4关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;Qe4LW
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:
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1.适当用被动代替主动,这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:
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2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
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如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
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3.一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代替太宽泛的。
(考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等)比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper,approaches代替ways,implement代替carryout,sharpenone''scompetitiveedge代替enhanceone''scompetitiveness(提高某物竞争力)v=5p
下面举一篇我南京六级班上一位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。
这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了,作文有了很大的提高。
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